deborah - bringing back the past

bringing back the past

Saturday, December 5, 2009 6:23:03 PM

hello folks. i wanted to bring back the past for you to read again. it is my first blog post not very long ago. i do hope you enjoy the show.

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april 2008

this show today goes with the past, present and future. i hope you enjoy the journey and will add your comments/suggestions or anything else that comes to mind. do not worry, i can handle the truth and i appreciate honesty. please feel free to comment.

this piece is a work in progress, i just picked it up again today and wanted to expand it to include my present experiences. thanks for your time.
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If Only

there aren't enough words to express
the meanings lying deep inside
our souls and our minds for that special place
where others share thoughts and feel

to be open and to be free
to impress upon you
this moment in time
where we are allowed to travel, to view

available to all
accessible to none
within these walls
we stand, we call

your presence heals
your existence comforts
your persistence humbles
tremendous are you

deborah
16 may 2005

http://www.freeuniverse4all.com/elements/images/animaux/animauxtm037.jpg

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first write 2005, have not revised it yet except to add that graphic link. still seems to fit even if this piece is a bit elementary. cheers to you this day. deborah.

and now i know some of the rest of the storyfinding reason to be

Comments

PainterWoman # Sunday, December 6, 2009 5:18:08 PM

I do believe I read your first post. I liked it then as I do now. These lines I like the best and sound very profound to me:

"your presence heals
your existence comforts
your persistence humbles
tremendous are you"

solidcopper # Monday, December 7, 2009 11:00:55 AM

I really like what you expressed. First your heart caught it; then you put it down to words quite skillfully.

deborah1bluebox # Tuesday, December 8, 2009 1:23:11 AM

thank you both very much. i am humbled by your time and appreciate the fact that you chose to read and comment. you are not only tremendous, you both are fascinating people. keep on writing my friends.

Titus Kiregabradockstabitha # Sunday, December 13, 2009 2:07:17 PM

Deborah, for so long have i waited to see someone as imaginative as you. I need to see the complete version of this poem. Congrats, this is a great piece! Keep on writing. Have a good day!

deborah1bluebox # Monday, December 14, 2009 5:37:07 PM

what you see is the complete version (at least as of today). thank you for your kind words titus.