Aruna

Zara,,,,,,,,,,

Friday, October 5, 2007 11:07:34 AM

khwabon ki panchee ko udney do zara,

sapno ki mehel ko aasman ko chooney do zara,

baharon ko galey milney do zara,

baarish ki pehli boond ko
aasha ki pehli kiran ko

dil ki aangan main aaney do zara,

kaliyon ko khilkhilaney do zara,

phoolon ko muskuraney do zara,

natkhat mann ko naachney do zara,

jholi main armaanon ko sametney do zara ,

lamha lamhe judkar bantha hai zindagi
Is zindagi ko khushiyon se bhar lene do zara ,

RecognitionEk Jhonka

Comments

Aniruddhakavishwar # Sunday, October 7, 2007 10:42:23 PM

Har lamha hai juda juda , Har pal pal ki nayi hai adaa Daman aapka khushiyonse bhara rahe sada , Hum aapki shayri pe huye fida Talash jari hai uski Jisne bhar dee hai zoli aapki Abilasha u possess creative mind . I must appriciate. Ani

khushikhushi1811 # Monday, October 8, 2007 10:24:12 AM

ji bahot khubsurat likkha hai "abhi" aapne,aap bhi sahi ho ani.she is creative minded

aapke waste humare aour sey kuch panktiya abhilasha,
jo aapka khayal aate hin shabdon mein ubhar aaya..
masoom se khowabon ko uske palkon par muskane do,
khushiyon se daman bhar do zara,fiza ke sang lahrane do:
zindagi ki kali rahon mein deepak ki aas lagane do,
jo bhi chahe abhilasha usey dedo,manzil pane do..
aamen!!
--khushi

ArunaAbhilasha # Thursday, November 1, 2007 1:18:22 PM

My dear frnz , Thanks for the encouraging compliments

kashmeet _kash # Thursday, January 10, 2008 12:53:20 PM

Hi Abhi...

khamoshiya jab chillane lagti hai
jab tanhayee tanha rah jaati hai,
tab dard ki had ho jati hai

jab aansu rone lagte hai
ek bechaare se sapne ki
jab neend fana ho jati hai
tab dard ki had ho jaati hai