Alicelotus

Touched by Love

Thursday, 19. April 2007, 16:48:22

Touched by Love

I knew I had been touched
by love...
the first time I saw you
and I felt your warmth
and heard your laughter.

I knew I had been touched
by love...
when I was hurting from
something that happened,
and you came alone
and made the hurt go away.

I knew I had been touched
by love...
when I quit making plans
with my friends
and started dreaming dreams
with you.

I knew I had been touched
by love...
when I stopped thinking in
terms of "me"
and started thinking in
terms of "we".

I knew I had been touched
by love...
when suddenly I couldn't make
decisions by myself anymore,
and I had this strong desire
to share everything with you.

I knew I had been touched
by love...
the first time we spent
alone together
and I knew I wanted to stay
with you forever...
because I had never felt
this touched by love.

Be your CigaretteWhen we two parted

Comments

张弛 Sir AzureTimm, Kingdom of Love # 20. April 2007, 14:48

I knew I had been touched by words

The first time I was lucky to get a hold of a computer

Listening to your Snowman

Watching the creativity soaked words.

I knew I had been touched by words

The first time I read about your love for lotus

How your name coincides with my junior English Teacher

Who gave me much, much to chew for my whole life.

I knew I've been touched by words

The first ever time I left a comment on your Musings.

Feeling your deep and (seemingly) unrequired love

Words moved every nerve of me.

I knew I've been touched by words

The moment I read your splendid translation of the poem of the most difficult-to-translate-language.

Accurate, Exact, Graceful,

You've achieved all the best

I've been touched by your words

For never in my life have I felt being embraced by the caring and loving words, in a world lit up by the magical words.

It's only words,

And words are all you have,

To take my heart away...

Regards, a boy loving and being loved by your words, Timm.

Alicelotus # 21. April 2007, 16:42

You know what, Timm boy? Now I have been deeply touched by your touching words, from which at least I am aware that my efforts in writing have been paid off a little.

I am amazed again by your skill in expressing by word.

张弛 Sir AzureTimm, Kingdom of Love # 22. April 2007, 00:11

Hmmm? You know sister, the structure is copied straight from your original poem, and the ending is the lyrics of boyzone's Words... I just borrowed them, unlike you, creating them...

Alicelotus # 22. April 2007, 15:09

Hi, Timm boy, haven't you noticed the tag of this poem---Poetic romance, not my poetry. I feel happy you appreciate it as well like me~!

张弛 Sir AzureTimm, Kingdom of Love # 22. April 2007, 15:44

Hi sister,

Yeah I see it now... Sorry though. Are you as busy as I am? I am under tin impression that you teach senior 3, too... And by the way, my teacher didn't come here for a week... I'll urge her tomorrow if I can...

Alicelotus # 23. April 2007, 15:37

Yeah, I am much engaged with my work as well as a role of tutor in my spare time.I surmise you teacher is in the same boat with me, so don't urge her. Now I am expecting my long summer holiday when there will be enough time for me to do anything I like.

Have a nice sleep~!
Alice

张弛 Sir AzureTimm, Kingdom of Love # 23. April 2007, 15:51

Hmmm... You must be a much respected and admired teacher... And hey, my deskmate asked for your post address so he can send a drawing to you.