D4z3

Windows to My Past

Friday, February 13, 2009 6:27:31 PM

I see a girl through the windows of my past
A girl of deep sorrows a complete outcast,
Wishing for death to come fast
To end her hell at last
Wanting her whole world to just perish
Caged by the words of those she once cherished.
Living life only in her dreams,
Awakening to silent screams and streams of tears
Because things are not what they appear
Ripping her heart and tearing her soul
This girl was once an angle
Engulfed by hatred turned into a demon at last
This girl…this girl is my past.

The Night is Darkening Around Me R.I.P Dianne Rollins

Comments

SuR@Jlifeofkaran # Saturday, February 14, 2009 5:58:31 AM

Wow... the poem is very very super. and just because of its shortness, its sweetness is increased a lot.. u may not be so spiritual but please i request u not to compare any of your moments with hell.. because bible says hell is a most painful world.. if those moments had really occured on you, i suggest you to be in passion.. and may your passion bring u in peace.. my lord shall always be with you...

D4z3Armygirl # Friday, February 20, 2009 6:10:21 PM

this poem is a reflection of my life and if u truely new me u would see my life is hell on earth.

SuR@Jlifeofkaran # Saturday, February 21, 2009 12:21:36 AM

still if u compare it then i have nothing to say..
but somewhere in my life before 6 months, i had got one friend who has suggested me on following ways..

because of our past, there are two ways that how we can live our life....
one is to be suffered how we are getting suffered and let the life be in more and more pain..................
second is to fight against those pain and have courage to live again a new life....
so
its on to u what do u choose...
first option will make ur life more worst hell..
second will give u some new hope for new life again....

have passion... because u are not the only one who has been suffered in life...
be good..
do good
be smiling..........

MarcusFXM256 # Saturday, February 21, 2009 5:18:18 PM

Wow, quite a dark poem. Hope you have the wonderful life that you deserve very soon.

D4z3Armygirl # Monday, February 23, 2009 6:24:48 PM

life is just pain with a cherry on top

SuR@Jlifeofkaran # Tuesday, February 24, 2009 3:40:35 AM

So look at those cheers and enjoy your life... unless you dont try to forget your pain, you can try nothing other else.

D4z3Armygirl # Tuesday, February 24, 2009 5:53:26 PM

in a way i believe that i live for the pain in life if i didn't what would i live for i've become accustumed to pain and i doesn't bother me it is who i am.