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I can't really think of a title right now... Anyway here's a poem...

Tuesday, July 31, 2007 2:13:09 AM

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I love your smile
Will it always show?
I loathe your pain.
Will you let it go?
You give me my strength.
Will you always be there?
I hold you so dear.
Can this be something I can bear?
You are the one.
Can this really be true?
I see in your eyes that you really care.
Will I always be able to hold onto you?
When I hold your hand, I feel your love.
Are you to be forever mine?
I feel as if this is all something new.
Dear God, will you give me a sign?
We have shared many memories.
Is this true love?
I take a breath, I only see you.
Will there be someone who will watch from above?
I stop these questions only God knows, we take each others hand and then we go...

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Comments

AyanAyan07 Tuesday, July 31, 2007 8:16:19 PM

Aww..so nice and sooo heart-touching !!! I think those expressions were right frm ur heart..aint they ?? Anyway..whatever happens..i will be always thr 4 u...u ..and u !!! bigsmile smile bigsmile

BrookeBack Up Babblings Tuesday, July 31, 2007 8:19:06 PM

I just wrote these one night, because I didn't know what else to do. I guess it just came to me.
Thanks again Ayan!bigsmile

AyanAyan07 Tuesday, July 31, 2007 8:22:25 PM

U know I used to be a poet someday...I wrote 5 poems gradually...But can't show u those..cos those all r in Bengali !!! .lol. p

BrookeBack Up Babblings Tuesday, July 31, 2007 8:24:06 PM

That's cool. Can you speak two languages?
Maybe you can try writing some new poems.smile

AyanAyan07 Tuesday, July 31, 2007 9:12:21 PM

Ya....I should give it a try !!! smile

WhateverOver_and_over Wednesday, August 1, 2007 3:16:29 AM

Hello Babbling!
Although I can't understand all the poem, I find it really lyrical! Ah you know, I think you may become a poet one day! smile

BrookeBack Up Babblings Wednesday, August 1, 2007 3:24:29 AM

Well thanks!smile
I think it would be kind of cool to be a poet.bigsmile

WhateverOver_and_over Wednesday, August 1, 2007 8:03:52 AM

You're welcome!smile
By the way, you must be pretty sensitve, huh?

BrookeBack Up Babblings Wednesday, August 1, 2007 10:27:23 PM

Sensitive? Well no... not really. Why do you ask?

raichurules Monday, October 22, 2007 8:11:36 PM

hold up you wrote this?????

do you only write poems?

this is fanastic by the way

BrookeBack Up Babblings Tuesday, October 23, 2007 12:16:14 AM

hehe. Thanks.smile Yeah I wrote this.

I write a little more than just poetry, it's just something I like to do.

AyanAyan07 Thursday, October 25, 2007 8:50:30 PM

U and torchwood r the real duos...I must say caz ur all poems r unforgettable !!!

BrookeBack Up Babblings Thursday, October 25, 2007 9:54:51 PM

Thanks Ayan! I'm so glad!smile

AyanAyan07 Thursday, October 25, 2007 10:15:36 PM

In friendship..Thr's no Thanks n' Sorry! Got it ? bigsmile

BrookeBack Up Babblings Friday, October 26, 2007 2:46:59 AM

lol. ok then! bigsmile

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