Those that gave in
Thursday, December 16, 2010 4:29:12 PM
Those that gave in are grinning wide
with moist white eyes.
Teeth shining peaceful, dipped as they were
long in acrid tastes.
Now they eat melting ice-creams, those-
alone standing on narrow paveways.
Licking to the last bit with utter pleasure,
now that no offenses are taken.
Now they rest in distant sleep,
through night and day
rain and red
silence and storm.
Now that all mistakes are forgiven.
Those that gave in are now staring blank
at reminiscent drops. Looking dry at
gray washed walls,
now that all is crystal and calm.
~~~
with moist white eyes.
Teeth shining peaceful, dipped as they were
long in acrid tastes.
Now they eat melting ice-creams, those-
alone standing on narrow paveways.
Licking to the last bit with utter pleasure,
now that no offenses are taken.
Now they rest in distant sleep,
through night and day
rain and red
silence and storm.
Now that all mistakes are forgiven.
Those that gave in are now staring blank
at reminiscent drops. Looking dry at
gray washed walls,
now that all is crystal and calm.
~~~













Bhaswati Mazumdersymphonied # Tuesday, November 15, 2011 12:42:48 AM
A great read, one way or other (which is in fact the High-quality Syndrome in poetry
Fahima Al FarabiBornChimera # Thursday, December 8, 2011 3:01:23 PM
" A great read, one way or other (which is in fact the High-quality Syndrome in poetry "- Yes indeed. I'm really interested in your view of the poem,could you share your thoughts over it here?