CherryStone

"Your love"

Sunday, December 13, 2009 10:57:25 PM

This is what I wrote for my one and only...

Maybe it's pathetic I'm not actually a writer. I just wrote what I felt.
And I am very sorry if I made some mistakes. Feel free to comment.

(But please don't claim it as your own.)

Your love is better than the air
I can not live without it

Your love is better than the sun
It warms me when I feel so cold

Your love is better than a flame
Sometimes it makes me go insane

Your eyes are deeper than the sea,
And all the love that I can see

I always wonder, can it be?
There's so much love and all for me...

Fragile life and my worries~*Belly dance and Femininity*~

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Adele BrandSittingFox # Tuesday, December 15, 2009 8:32:33 PM

CherryStone # Thursday, December 17, 2009 6:14:49 AM

thank you

Freya RedFreya # Friday, December 18, 2009 10:14:56 PM

It is straight from the heart.

Happy Christmas CherryStone

Freya RedFreya # Saturday, December 26, 2009 3:02:46 PM

Here`s another one.

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CherryStone # Saturday, December 26, 2009 8:47:40 PM

RedFreya thank you !

Freya RedFreya # Thursday, December 31, 2009 11:56:27 AM

I wish you a very happy and peaceful New Year.

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Haadoox # Monday, January 4, 2010 5:36:42 AM

Nice poem. It was simple and warm! Thanks for sharing.
You may edit this part like I'll write and then it might sound easier and better:

You wrote:
"Your eyes are [much much] deeper [then] the sea,
And all the love that I can see"

You may write it like this:
"Your eyes are deeper than the sea,
And all the love that I can see"

Waiting for more from you and please add me so I can keep in touch with you.

Mohd ZuberZuber2009 # Tuesday, February 2, 2010 8:42:53 AM

Honey , yr peom was nice but the meaning behind it was the other way round ....without air yr love cant survive , definitely it's far to measure yr love with the depth of the sea and so on....so conclusion the peom was written by someone in love only like not in reality ...

Thanx

CherryStone # Thursday, September 16, 2010 6:14:27 PM

Originally posted by Haadoox:

Nice poem. It was simple and warm! Thanks for sharing.
You may edit this part like I'll write and then it might sound easier and better:

You wrote:
"Your eyes are [much much] deeper [then] the sea,
And all the love that I can see"

You may write it like this:
"Your eyes are deeper than the sea,
And all the love that I can see"

Waiting for more from you and please add me so I can keep in touch with you.

Oh, God!!! I am very sorry for my spelling mistake (noticed only now)

Thank you very much

for your help

CherryStone # Thursday, September 16, 2010 6:15:44 PM

Originally posted by Zuber2009:

Honey , yr peom was nice but the meaning behind it was the other way round ....without air yr love cant survive , definitely it's far to measure yr love with the depth of the sea and so on....so conclusion the peom was written by someone in love only like not in reality ...

Thx

well. I know that it's a bit primitive,

but I will improve it in future,

when I will have more skills

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