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Wolf's Reign..

"Highway to Hell"

Where have you been little one??

Where have you been little one??
Where have you run off to?
Leaving me so bare and undone..
Leaving me to emotions anew..

Shy not away from my embracing arms
I forgot why I needed you so much..
But so was tempted away with little charms
& I lost your cold gripping touch..

When I opened my fragile soul,you could not protect..
So return to me and deeply begin to fester
All the rage I lost when you I did neglect..
I beg for darkness & shed my last tear..

Be my heart a cold black gruesome sight..
The darkness will always be my light..


(c) Cois 2008

WHEN A COSTUME IS JUST WRONG!!Something to get you through the day...

Comments

Cois 13. August 2008, 01:11

Thanks to Furie for the last line.. :D

Dacotah 13. August 2008, 01:18

WOW Cois, great poem,

Cois 13. August 2008, 01:22

Thanks Carol.. :smile: late nights when sleep turns a blind eye to my plight.. :zzz:

Dacotah 13. August 2008, 02:55

You are welcome. I know the feeling Cois.

gdare 13. August 2008, 04:38

Furie makes you sleepless? :eyes:

attilasoul 13. August 2008, 05:44

Nice poem. It shows the depth of your loss.

Cois 13. August 2008, 07:17

Darko.. :insane: you have no idea :cry:.
Thanks Tilla.. Though most would be glad to lose it.. Or something.. :coffee: still early for me..

Spaggyj 13. August 2008, 08:03

Me like :D

Cois 13. August 2008, 08:06

Me knows you'd like.. p:

1bluebox 13. August 2008, 08:14

this is a good write cois. i had to read it twice to form an opinion (even if you didn't ask for my opinion).

i like the last stanza, but what stuck out in my mind and hit home with me was your words:

"All the rage I lost when you I did neglect..
I beg for darkness & shed my last tear.."


may the lightness in the dark shine through for you cois forever. deborah.

Furie 13. August 2008, 09:46

You wrote this when your phone got stolen didn't you? awww It must have been terrible. :worried:

Cois 13. August 2008, 15:47

Maybe I tried too hard and the meaning got lost.. :left: and not the phone Mik.. :rolleyes:

qlue 13. August 2008, 17:13

:smile:

Furie 14. August 2008, 09:21

I know dude. :frown:

Furie 14. August 2008, 09:22

I know dude. :frown:

Cois 14. August 2008, 19:05

I know you know but I thought I'd let you know that I know.. :rolleyes: now you know..

wickedlizard 14. August 2008, 21:51

oh wow! :D I thoroughly enjoyed reading that! :up:

Cois 14. August 2008, 22:40

And I thoroughly enjoyed reading your comment.. :D

wickedlizard 15. August 2008, 09:46

:lol:

Furie 15. August 2008, 10:31

I thoroughly enjoyed knowing that you know that I know what I know that you know that I know. :up:

wickedlizard 15. August 2008, 10:42

:confused:

Furie 15. August 2008, 10:54

You don't know? p:

wickedlizard 15. August 2008, 10:58

:no:

Furie 15. August 2008, 11:22

But you do "no" even if you don't know what I know Clint knows I know.

Spaggyj 15. August 2008, 11:26

I know that you know what Mik knows. That is to say Mik knows what Clint knows, and Clint knows that Mik knows what he knows. Does he know that you know that Mik knows what Clint knows? For that matter, does he know that I know that you know Mik knows what Clint knows? I think he knows, you know?

wickedlizard 15. August 2008, 11:27

:faint:

Furie 15. August 2008, 11:37

If you know that I know that Clint knows what I know and you know that Issy knows what I know that Clint knows that I know even though she claims to not know that she knows what she knows about what Clint knows that I know as far as I know about, then surely you know that I know that you know what you know about what Clint knows that I know and Issy isn't sure what she knows or if she even knows what I know that she knows?

gdare 15. August 2008, 17:38

Hey... I know :idea:

wickedlizard 15. August 2008, 18:30

:cry: know what?

Furie 15. August 2008, 20:29

I just explained, Issy. Do pay attention. p:

1bluebox 15. August 2008, 21:25

who knew? :wink:

Cois 16. August 2008, 00:48

Wtf??
I don't know no more.. p:

Furie 16. August 2008, 01:36

You're all very confusing. p:

1bluebox 16. August 2008, 04:19

the voice in my head said, "does anyone know anymore?"

my voice cried out loud and said, "no one ever knew!"

what was the question to begin with, i forgot . . . .

wickedlizard 16. August 2008, 09:07

:eyes:

Cois 16. August 2008, 10:20

I know less than when I didn't know anymore..
Uhm.. What??? :left:

Cois 16. August 2008, 10:21

I know less than when I didn't know anymore..
Uhm.. What??? :left:

qlue 23. August 2008, 08:11

Knowledge is the root of all evil. :whistle:

Furie 23. August 2008, 08:33

Some guy came up to my group outside college once preaching that very fact. He said we shouldn't be learning because knowledge and writing were the devil's work tricked onto us in the garden when the serpent convinced Eve to eat an apple from the tree of knowledge. I asked him how he knew and he said it was in the bible... :rolleyes:.

Screams of "THAT'S A BOOK! Get thee behind me Satan!" soon got rid of him.

Cois 23. August 2008, 09:42

:insane::lol::insane::lol:

qlue 23. August 2008, 16:07

:lol: LMAO That's exactly the passage I had in mind with that comment.
it's ridiculous but some people actually believe it. :lol:

rose-marie 28. August 2008, 19:51

Sorry, I've been on vacation... :left: :right: p:

Cois 28. August 2008, 22:20

:lol: no wonder I was feeling so happy.. p:

rose-marie 29. August 2008, 08:09

Hey! :irked:

rose-marie 29. August 2008, 08:11

Oh! Happy because I'm back. I see :D

Cois 29. August 2008, 08:25

Wishfull thinking.. :wink:

rose-marie 29. August 2008, 08:33

Yes, that's what i thrive on :up:

Cois 29. August 2008, 08:57

:lol:

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