Bad Wolf

Where have you been little one??

Wednesday, August 13, 2008 1:09:08 AM

Where have you been little one??
Where have you run off to?
Leaving me so bare and undone..
Leaving me to emotions anew..

Shy not away from my embracing arms
I forgot why I needed you so much..
But so was tempted away with little charms
& I lost your cold gripping touch..

When I opened my fragile soul,you could not protect..
So return to me and deeply begin to fester
All the rage I lost when you I did neglect..
I beg for darkness & shed my last tear..

Be my heart a cold black gruesome sight..
The darkness will always be my light..

(c) Cois 2008

WHEN A COSTUME IS JUST WRONG!!Something to get you through the day...

Comments

Bad WolfCois # Wednesday, August 13, 2008 1:11:36 AM

Thanks to Furie for the last line..

Dacotah # Wednesday, August 13, 2008 1:18:36 AM

WOW Cois, great poem,

Bad WolfCois # Wednesday, August 13, 2008 1:22:09 AM

Thanks Carol..

late nights when sleep turns a blind eye to my plight..

Dacotah # Wednesday, August 13, 2008 2:55:16 AM

You are welcome. I know the feeling Cois.

Darkogdare # Wednesday, August 13, 2008 4:38:56 AM

Furie makes you sleepless?

Attila attilasoul # Wednesday, August 13, 2008 5:44:09 AM

Nice poem. It shows the depth of your loss.

Bad WolfCois # Wednesday, August 13, 2008 7:17:54 AM

Darko..

you have no idea

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Thanks Tilla.. Though most would be glad to lose it.. Or something..

still early for me..

Spaggyj # Wednesday, August 13, 2008 8:03:32 AM

Me like

Bad WolfCois # Wednesday, August 13, 2008 8:06:59 AM

Me knows you'd like..

deborah1bluebox # Wednesday, August 13, 2008 8:14:55 AM

this is a good write cois. i had to read it twice to form an opinion (even if you didn't ask for my opinion).

i like the last stanza, but what stuck out in my mind and hit home with me was your words:

"All the rage I lost when you I did neglect..
I beg for darkness & shed my last tear.."

may the lightness in the dark shine through for you cois forever. deborah.

Dark FurieFurie # Wednesday, August 13, 2008 9:46:20 AM

You wrote this when your phone got stolen didn't you?

It must have been terrible.

Bad WolfCois # Wednesday, August 13, 2008 3:47:05 PM

Maybe I tried too hard and the meaning got lost..

and not the phone Mik..

Mad Scientistqlue # Wednesday, August 13, 2008 5:13:35 PM

Dark FurieFurie # Thursday, August 14, 2008 9:21:51 AM

I know dude.

Dark FurieFurie # Thursday, August 14, 2008 9:22:34 AM

I know dude.

Bad WolfCois # Thursday, August 14, 2008 7:05:37 PM

I know you know but I thought I'd let you know that I know..

now you know..

dɹɐzılpǝkɔıw ɐʞɐ ɹǝɥgɐllɐg lǝbɐsıwickedlizard # Thursday, August 14, 2008 9:51:32 PM

oh wow!

I thoroughly enjoyed reading that!

Bad WolfCois # Thursday, August 14, 2008 10:40:51 PM

And I thoroughly enjoyed reading your comment..

dɹɐzılpǝkɔıw ɐʞɐ ɹǝɥgɐllɐg lǝbɐsıwickedlizard # Friday, August 15, 2008 9:46:06 AM

Dark FurieFurie # Friday, August 15, 2008 10:31:02 AM

I thoroughly enjoyed knowing that you know that I know what I know that you know that I know.

dɹɐzılpǝkɔıw ɐʞɐ ɹǝɥgɐllɐg lǝbɐsıwickedlizard # Friday, August 15, 2008 10:42:26 AM

Dark FurieFurie # Friday, August 15, 2008 10:54:02 AM

You don't know?

dɹɐzılpǝkɔıw ɐʞɐ ɹǝɥgɐllɐg lǝbɐsıwickedlizard # Friday, August 15, 2008 10:58:36 AM

Dark FurieFurie # Friday, August 15, 2008 11:22:52 AM

But you do "no" even if you don't know what I know Clint knows I know.

Spaggyj # Friday, August 15, 2008 11:26:21 AM

I know that you know what Mik knows. That is to say Mik knows what Clint knows, and Clint knows that Mik knows what he knows. Does he know that you know that Mik knows what Clint knows? For that matter, does he know that I know that you know Mik knows what Clint knows? I think he knows, you know?

dɹɐzılpǝkɔıw ɐʞɐ ɹǝɥgɐllɐg lǝbɐsıwickedlizard # Friday, August 15, 2008 11:27:15 AM

Dark FurieFurie # Friday, August 15, 2008 11:37:02 AM

If you know that I know that Clint knows what I know and you know that Issy knows what I know that Clint knows that I know even though she claims to not know that she knows what she knows about what Clint knows that I know as far as I know about, then surely you know that I know that you know what you know about what Clint knows that I know and Issy isn't sure what she knows or if she even knows what I know that she knows?

Darkogdare # Friday, August 15, 2008 5:38:36 PM

Hey... I know

dɹɐzılpǝkɔıw ɐʞɐ ɹǝɥgɐllɐg lǝbɐsıwickedlizard # Friday, August 15, 2008 6:30:26 PM

know what?

Dark FurieFurie # Friday, August 15, 2008 8:29:46 PM

I just explained, Issy. Do pay attention.

deborah1bluebox # Friday, August 15, 2008 9:25:01 PM

who knew?

Bad WolfCois # Saturday, August 16, 2008 12:48:00 AM

Wtf??
I don't know no more..

Dark FurieFurie # Saturday, August 16, 2008 1:36:43 AM

You're all very confusing.

deborah1bluebox # Saturday, August 16, 2008 4:19:28 AM

the voice in my head said, "does anyone know anymore?"

my voice cried out loud and said, "no one ever knew!"

what was the question to begin with, i forgot . . . .

dɹɐzılpǝkɔıw ɐʞɐ ɹǝɥgɐllɐg lǝbɐsıwickedlizard # Saturday, August 16, 2008 9:07:18 AM

Bad WolfCois # Saturday, August 16, 2008 10:20:53 AM

I know less than when I didn't know anymore..
Uhm.. What???

Bad WolfCois # Saturday, August 16, 2008 10:21:12 AM

I know less than when I didn't know anymore..
Uhm.. What???

Mad Scientistqlue # Saturday, August 23, 2008 8:11:49 AM

Knowledge is the root of all evil.

Dark FurieFurie # Saturday, August 23, 2008 8:33:47 AM

Some guy came up to my group outside college once preaching that very fact. He said we shouldn't be learning because knowledge and writing were the devil's work tricked onto us in the garden when the serpent convinced Eve to eat an apple from the tree of knowledge. I asked him how he knew and he said it was in the bible...

.

Screams of "THAT'S A BOOK! Get thee behind me Satan!" soon got rid of him.

Bad WolfCois # Saturday, August 23, 2008 9:42:56 AM

Mad Scientistqlue # Saturday, August 23, 2008 4:07:05 PM

LMAO That's exactly the passage I had in mind with that comment.
it's ridiculous but some people actually believe it.