Bad Wolf

I write my little rambling note - part 1 of a friggin lot

Tuesday, March 10, 2009 9:32:49 AM

I write my little rambling note
Calling upon emotions so
well hidden
I look at empty space and dote
How things changed and i sit with a goofy grin

Tentative conversation and amazing feedback
A mind not unlike my own
But completing mine to what it may lack
Amazingly I find myself to have grown

Sweet whispers and impossible connections
The wanting and the longing
The effects of a heart's reactions
Inability to wait for what tomorrow might be bringing

So silently I sit,silently falling into unknown emotion
Gratefull, hopefull, wishfull in still temptation

(c) Cois 2009

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Comments

Dacotah # Tuesday, March 10, 2009 10:00:42 AM

Amazing poem Cois.

Spaggyj # Tuesday, March 10, 2009 10:21:00 AM

JenJavaen # Tuesday, March 10, 2009 10:25:19 AM

*whispers* Presents.....

Christopher DaSilvadannii # Tuesday, March 10, 2009 10:38:13 AM

"Wishful in still temptation"

Ah, lovely.

Darkogdare # Tuesday, March 10, 2009 11:02:15 AM

I got lost in words. Or in translation. There is something with poems written in English and me, sometimes I don't catch them

Bad WolfCois # Tuesday, March 10, 2009 11:07:43 AM

Sometimes the meaning won't be found because it only means something to one someone

and thanks Carol:) ,Kim

, Dan

JenJavaen # Tuesday, March 10, 2009 11:13:41 AM

Christopher DaSilvadannii # Tuesday, March 10, 2009 11:43:08 AM

Originally posted by Darko:

got lost in words. Or in translation

Scarlett

Dacotah # Tuesday, March 10, 2009 1:07:16 PM

You are welcome Cois

KittyliciousZaphira # Tuesday, March 10, 2009 2:35:26 PM

Awww wolfieboy, that's so sweet!

Suntana # Tuesday, March 10, 2009 4:09:43 PM

Whoa! What's going on? Is the Earth spinning backwards.
Cois doing Shakespeare? Well, I don't mean Cois doing Shakespeare. I mean ... well, you know what I mean. Cois writing poetry.

Hey, Darko, it's not necessarily poems written in English that can cause someone to get lost. It's poetry in general. I'm not good at interpretting poetry either and English is my 1st language. Poetry has its own structure, different from regular writing. One practically has to have a knack / skill for interpretting poetry. I have neither.

I did just barely, with the difficulty of crawling up the side of a vertical cliff, managed to extract the meaning of this poem though.

r♡serose-marie # Tuesday, March 10, 2009 7:19:06 PM

Haha! Cute!

JenJavaen # Tuesday, March 10, 2009 7:40:10 PM

Part two of a friggen lot!
Part two of a friggen lot!
Part two of a friggen lot!
Part two of a friggen lot!
Part two of a friggen lot!
Part two of a friggen lot!
Part two of a friggen lot!
Part two of a friggen lot!

Sarah angel292005 # Tuesday, March 10, 2009 9:16:52 PM

Mmm interesting

Bad WolfCois # Wednesday, March 11, 2009 6:23:45 AM

Dan.. Meaning?
Zaph.. I got it from a uhm.. Book

yeah that's it

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Sun tan.. You got that right.. I struggled to get meaning from poems till i just did some interpretation for myself then compare it to others and in a few years I sometimes could see what the POET actually wanted to say

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Rose.. Yeah yeah.. I'm a big softie

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Jen.. Down girl..

here's a cookie..
Sarah.. awesome works too

JenJavaen # Wednesday, March 11, 2009 6:32:08 AM

Dork, I was acting like you.....

I happen to recall you chanting shockingly similarly on my blog. .

and wayyyy more times! And I never patronized you with a cookie!

KittyliciousZaphira # Wednesday, March 11, 2009 6:53:25 AM

So you call it cookie now, eh? And I thought it was nookie...

r♡serose-marie # Wednesday, March 11, 2009 8:03:46 AM

Can't be nookie - Cois just said he was a big softie...

KittyliciousZaphira # Wednesday, March 11, 2009 9:18:50 AM