I write my little rambling note - part 1 of a friggin lot
Tuesday, 10. March 2009, 09:32:49
Calling upon emotions so
well hidden
I look at empty space and dote
How things changed and i sit with a goofy grin
Tentative conversation and amazing feedback
A mind not unlike my own
But completing mine to what it may lack
Amazingly I find myself to have grown
Sweet whispers and impossible connections
The wanting and the longing
The effects of a heart's reactions
Inability to wait for what tomorrow might be bringing
So silently I sit,silently falling into unknown emotion
Gratefull, hopefull, wishfull in still temptation
(c) Cois 2009










Dacotah # 10. March 2009, 10:00
Spaggyj # 10. March 2009, 10:21
Javaen # 10. March 2009, 10:25
dannii # 10. March 2009, 10:38
Ah, lovely.
gdare # 10. March 2009, 11:02
Cois # 10. March 2009, 11:07
Javaen # 10. March 2009, 11:13
dannii # 10. March 2009, 11:43
Originally posted by Darko:
Scarlett
Dacotah # 10. March 2009, 13:07
Zaphira # 10. March 2009, 14:35
Suntana # 10. March 2009, 16:09
Cois doing Shakespeare? Well, I don't mean Cois doing Shakespeare. I mean ... well, you know what I mean. Cois writing poetry.
Hey, Darko, it's not necessarily poems written in English that can cause someone to get lost. It's poetry in general. I'm not good at interpretting poetry either and English is my 1st language. Poetry has its own structure, different from regular writing. One practically has to have a knack / skill for interpretting poetry. I have neither.
I did just barely, with the difficulty of crawling up the side of a vertical cliff, managed to extract the meaning of this poem though.
rose-marie # 10. March 2009, 19:19
Javaen # 10. March 2009, 19:40
Part two of a friggen lot!
Part two of a friggen lot!
Part two of a friggen lot!
Part two of a friggen lot!
Part two of a friggen lot!
Part two of a friggen lot!
Part two of a friggen lot!
angel292005 # 10. March 2009, 21:16
Cois # 11. March 2009, 06:23
Zaph.. I got it from a uhm.. Book
Sun tan.. You got that right.. I struggled to get meaning from poems till i just did some interpretation for myself then compare it to others and in a few years I sometimes could see what the POET actually wanted to say
Rose.. Yeah yeah.. I'm a big softie
Jen.. Down girl..
Sarah.. awesome works too
Javaen # 11. March 2009, 06:32
I happen to recall you chanting shockingly similarly on my blog. .
Zaphira # 11. March 2009, 06:53
rose-marie # 11. March 2009, 08:03
Zaphira # 11. March 2009, 09:18
Cois # 11. March 2009, 11:48
Zaphira # 11. March 2009, 11:51
rose-marie # 11. March 2009, 12:40
Zaphira # 11. March 2009, 14:57
Javaen # 11. March 2009, 15:16
Ahem, Reminds me of better-than-sex-cake.
Spaggyj # 11. March 2009, 16:41
Javaen # 11. March 2009, 17:07
*goes to google*
http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Nookie+Cookie
Okay, the post is ruined.
Zaphira # 11. March 2009, 17:18
angel292005 # 11. March 2009, 17:39
rose-marie # 11. March 2009, 17:43
Javaen # 11. March 2009, 17:50
*scrolls up for Rose Marie's comment*
*bursts out laughing*
Good call!
gdare # 11. March 2009, 21:14
intothedeep # 11. March 2009, 23:31
dannii # 11. March 2009, 23:43
Suntana # 12. March 2009, 00:25
Awww Man! Do I have pizza sauce on my face?
Have I been walking around like that for half a day now?
1bluebox # 12. March 2009, 01:10
intothedeep # 12. March 2009, 01:12
Suntana # 12. March 2009, 02:01
Cois # 12. March 2009, 06:33
Javaen # 13. March 2009, 00:49
More for you!
theoddbod # 14. March 2009, 16:08
Cois # 19. March 2009, 06:59