More Questions (Than Answers)

Ladies, and gentle men (you hard ones can keep doing whatever it was you were doing), 8 left the building fully aware his life was a dream, and his dream a job.
Or did he?
“Sorry for asking, but don't you remember why you came here?”
It was another room, not unlike the last, with another woman, not unlike the first. His fingers still drummed a mystery beat on the cool metal surface of an endless desk...
“Wasn’t there a plan?” she continued, “Or did you forget about it in all the excitement of finding yourself...”
He was of course not there at all, rather, still on vacation. It was midnight and Tuesday was seated next to him on the beach as they both contemplated the talking pelican.
“...here and now, in this form. What with those arms, legs and balls of yours...”
“What did that pelican just say?” 8 turned to Tuesday only to see the same desk and woman as she continued:
“I’ll bet by the time you’d worked out how to walk, talk and feel, all memory of the original plan vanished...”
He was’t listening. The melting man in front of him commanded his attention, ‘didn’t it?’. All puddle building and no play making this melting man a...
“DIDN’T IT?” This woman wouldn’t stop interjecting!
...sick joke with the punchline lost somewhere in oblivion.
‘Well, here’e a reminder’ for those of you who’ve forgotten oblivion. There are way to many rabbits there...
“Well here’s a reminder...”
“I just typed that.” 8 interrupted flatly.
“Fair enough, its your story.”
He nodded in agreement, still drumming the mystery beat (he’d quit smoking on vacation and the drumming was all that kept him from pulling his gun)
“But still, I think it would help you to know why you came here, wouldn’t you agree?” Something behind her eyes searched his.
“Nope.” He pushed himself back from the desk and stretched.
“Not at all?”
“You’re pushing all the wrong buttons, lady.”
“R U ok?”
Sweat was pouring down his face. She just text talked him! Or maybe in his laziness, he typed it that way. Whatever the reason, it was time.
8 pulled the gun, seemingly out of the air and pumped 3 (See, laziness, why not three?) bullets into her forehead, painting his own Rorschach test on the wall.
“Funny.”
Bunnies and shit.

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Comments

DHdarkesthour Sunday, February 20, 2011 7:51:04 PM

I think I need to read this a few times, this is good stuff

Colin KillpatrickColinKillpatrick Sunday, February 20, 2011 7:59:43 PM

Thanks, I did have fun with it smile

DHdarkesthour Sunday, February 20, 2011 8:08:33 PM

I think that the old grittiness is back but it kinda flows better, I will give a few reads over lunch...

Colin KillpatrickColinKillpatrick Sunday, February 20, 2011 8:25:53 PM

Well, let me know your final verdict, I've something grand planned for Monsieur 8, and if its not going to work...

DHdarkesthour Sunday, February 20, 2011 8:27:03 PM

I shall yes

DHdarkesthour Monday, February 21, 2011 2:44:16 AM

I get the feeling that you got into the habit of writing for an audience for a while, this has the same enigmatic nature as your earlier work, which I think is a good thing. It is not dissimilar to peeling an onion layer by layer trying to work out what is going on here, each part reveals a new complexity and reveals some hidden meaning. Oh yeah, and I like it too bigsmile

CAT Aachattycathy64 Saturday, October 15, 2011 3:26:39 AM

bigsmile

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