Lunch in the park

Wednesday, 23. April 2008, 03:35:43

Too many lost times
Brief moments one misplaces
Inside a found reflection

I watch’d the teli
Without a tv cable
Eating in the sun lit park

Day DreamsDay in the Forest

Comments

very nice pic, so green, so still

By brokenheartvn, # 23. April 2008, 04:07:07

Thanks Brokenheartvn, There's a really great photographer blog friend who I read each time they post. They wrote a great essay on 3-D into a 2-D shape. While I was sitting there eating, I was remembering what they had said about seeing things "on paper." I was lucky enough to be able to apply some of the technique they wrote about.
Thanks for noticing.

By Cynthia23, # 23. April 2008, 12:08:33

Beautiful! It creates a great feeling of wistfullness.

By cakkleberrylane, # 23. April 2008, 13:02:58

(smile) You have a way to illustrate so much with few words, a enviable skill

By Unasia, # 23. April 2008, 13:06:15

Hi, Ms. Lois, thank you. I like the word wistfullness. You don't hear it much these days. Thanks again.

By Cynthia23, # 23. April 2008, 22:30:01

Hi Clance, thank you for your flattery. Cheers

By Cynthia23, # 23. April 2008, 22:32:19

very inspiring

By Susthama, # 24. April 2008, 06:14:36

Hi Susthama! Thanks!
Have a great afternoon!

By Cynthia23, # 24. April 2008, 11:52:16

Evocative poem, this one. I like it. Tickles me under the skin.

By musickna, # 4. May 2008, 16:36:26

What a cool thing to hear about something that one writes. Thank you so much, musickna!

By Cynthia23, # 4. May 2008, 17:04:12

Very clever. It shows the dexterity of your mind.

By solid copper, # 5. May 2008, 05:46:27

solid copper, thank you for your nice words. You are very kind to say such things. Clever? ahhh ... dexterous maybe.

Really, solid copper, thank you very much!

By Cynthia23, # 5. May 2008, 10:39:35

I watch’d the teli
Without a tv cable
Eating in the sun lit park

I meant these lines are very clever. I was very impressed !

By solid copper, # 5. May 2008, 10:47:32

I was just adding a bit of humour, solid copper.

Thank you so much for your nice words.

By Cynthia23, # 5. May 2008, 10:49:11

You are welcome. At one point I was typing a comment using my phone (telling you which few poems I particularly like) and just when I was about to send it, my phone's battery went dead.