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Having Tea with Friends

Wednesday, 25. June 2008, 21:10:12



Remembering blends
Sitting here within today
Comforting my eyes in grace

Curtains flowing soft
The butterflies gather lunch
Inside the open petals

Gardening in the CemeterySunday Dinner

Comments

José Torres 25. June 2008, 21:37

I like it, poem and photo! :wink:

Adele 25. June 2008, 22:11

Another lovely piece Cynthia :smile:

Jimmy Quek 25. June 2008, 23:59

You write wonderfully. :smile:

Cynthia 26. June 2008, 00:13

Hi Ze! Hope today had some fun in it. :smile:

Cynthia 26. June 2008, 00:13

Hi Adele! Thanks! The day was beautiful. I hope yours was also. :smile:

Cynthia 26. June 2008, 00:16

pabbha, thank you so very much for your attention and support. It is very kind of you to say such words in regard to my writing. :smile:

crazy88 26. June 2008, 00:22

great poem!:wink:

Cynthia 26. June 2008, 00:24

Thanks Hide! :happy:

Attila 26. June 2008, 05:33

I love the photo, it's very nice! :up:

Cynthia 26. June 2008, 11:21

Thanks Attila! :smile:

lokutus_prime 26. June 2008, 13:43

Dear Cynthia,

As one writer to another (a bow to you), how shall I describe this exquisite poem?

Let me simply say that it strikes me as a marvel of compact narrative.

Why so a marvel? - because it packs in such a brief statement a sweet blend of things, significant, meaningful, expressive, telling.

I read again the lines in the first stanza that say

Sitting here within today / Comforting my eyes in grace

...and I sit back and murmur "I wish I had written that!"

And then the finale...

"Curtains flowing soft
The butterflies gather lunch
Inside the open petals"

Magnificent!
Beautiful words lovely to imbibe.

Cynthia,
had I the way that you have with such words I would truly be a poet

Loku :up:


Cynthia 26. June 2008, 14:01

Oh Loku! Thank you so much for this gentle, kind compliment for these words I placed together. It is you, my dear friend, who is truly a great poet. This you accomplish with each new composition. Really! Thank you so much! I hope your day has been filled with smiles. :smile:

lokutus_prime 26. June 2008, 16:12

Cynthia, thank you :happy:

My day has been a blend of sadness and smiles.

For the first, I lift up my eyes in Hope and prayer.
For the second, I am always thankful.

As for your delicate and sublime poetry - it is your deep inner expression at work, and you share this with every one, for which we all thank you. :up:

Cynthia 26. June 2008, 16:50

WOW! You are most welcome, Loku, and thank you for your words. It means much to me to know that you respect what it is I am doing.

I don't like to hear that part of your day has been saddness. Thank goodness there were smiles too. Take a good rest. Tomorrow is always a new day! :smile:

lokutus_prime 26. June 2008, 19:58

Amen :up:

Cynthia 26. June 2008, 20:25

Thank goodness! :up:

ALLY G. 27. June 2008, 05:37

Another wonderful post and photo. :smile:

tk9 27. June 2008, 07:20

Let me have a small seat to admire that scene,
even far behind the rows.


:smile:


Cynthia 27. June 2008, 21:27

Hi Elke thanks! :smile:

Cynthia 27. June 2008, 21:29

Hi TK! It was perfect weather this day in the photo.

:smile:

p.vishnurathan 30. June 2008, 02:32

can i shaRE THE it with my friends....fine shots...
GOD'S creature is beyond our creations...

Cynthia 30. June 2008, 13:35

:happy: Yes, artworld! Please share with your friends. I am honored that you would. :smile: Thank you very much!

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