Dacotah

Nature of your love

Monday, September 15, 2008 3:21:30 PM

A poem I wrote.

Nature of your love
Like the warmth of the morning sun shinning on my face, your love awakens me

Like the water of a river gently cascading down, your love gently cascades through every fiber of my being

Like the silent speaking winds, your love silently speaks to my heart

Like the air, your love is my breath

Like the stars, your love lightens my life

Like the embers from a fire, your love warms my soul

Like the earth, your love helps me grow

The nature of your love is my universe

Dacotah

By: ©CR

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Attila attilasoul # Monday, September 15, 2008 3:52:06 PM

I didn't know you could write poems, Carol. Very nice!

Dacotah # Monday, September 15, 2008 3:56:32 PM

Thank you Tilla.

On the sidebar I have a category titled "Poems I Wrote"
There are 8 more that I have put there so far. Some have an mp3 player too, a friend of mine was kind to read my poems and made a mp3 of it.

r♡serose-marie # Monday, September 15, 2008 4:00:23 PM

It's beautiful Carol!

Dacotah # Monday, September 15, 2008 4:00:54 PM

Thank you Rose-Marie

Dacotah # Monday, September 15, 2008 4:03:16 PM

oops, typo, edited: "The nature of your love in my universe" meant "The nature of your love is my universe".

dɹɐzılpǝkɔıw ɐʞɐ ɹǝɥgɐllɐg lǝbɐsıwickedlizard # Monday, September 15, 2008 4:42:47 PM

Beautiful!

H82typ # Monday, September 15, 2008 4:56:13 PM

Excellent, Carol!

Dacotah # Monday, September 15, 2008 5:11:11 PM

Thank you Isabel.

Dacotah # Monday, September 15, 2008 5:11:32 PM

Thank you Dennis.

beavidal # Monday, September 15, 2008 5:22:25 PM

Lovely

Dacotah # Monday, September 15, 2008 5:23:14 PM

Thank you very much.

Angelikiellinidata # Monday, September 15, 2008 5:25:26 PM

heart warming!

PS I just got the babysitting thing again !

Stomyr # Monday, September 15, 2008 5:54:50 PM

Spaggyj # Monday, September 15, 2008 6:29:21 PM

Really lovely

Dacotah # Monday, September 15, 2008 6:42:48 PM

Thank you Angeliki.

, well go to that link and see what they said.

Dacotah # Monday, September 15, 2008 6:43:06 PM

Stomyr

Dacotah # Monday, September 15, 2008 6:43:26 PM

Thank you Kimmie.

Darkogdare # Monday, September 15, 2008 10:03:25 PM

theoddbod # Monday, September 15, 2008 10:35:56 PM

Nice

Dacotah # Monday, September 15, 2008 11:02:34 PM

Darko

Dacotah # Monday, September 15, 2008 11:03:01 PM

Thank you Mart.

Bad WolfCois # Tuesday, September 16, 2008 2:10:30 AM

Schweeeet!!!

Eliane a/k/a Ellymomable # Tuesday, September 16, 2008 2:54:18 AM

Beautiful. Best wishes.

Dacotah # Tuesday, September 16, 2008 3:00:43 AM

Thank you Cois.

Dacotah # Tuesday, September 16, 2008 3:01:24 AM

Thank you Elly.

Eliane a/k/a Ellymomable # Tuesday, September 16, 2008 3:02:33 AM

Dacotah # Tuesday, September 16, 2008 3:10:22 AM

Eliane a/k/a Ellymomable # Tuesday, September 16, 2008 3:27:42 AM

I found the red a bit hard to read, though...

Dacotah # Tuesday, September 16, 2008 3:33:17 AM

Sorry.

Christygreathoneybear # Wednesday, September 17, 2008 3:45:11 PM

Beautiful expression of true love.

Dacotah # Wednesday, September 17, 2008 3:49:00 PM

Thank you Christy

AzureTimm # Tuesday, September 30, 2008 8:46:11 PM

Like a gentle breeze, your words brushed my heartstring
Like a fallen leaves, your imagination painted the world red, yellow and green
Like a flower seed, your love leaves its own imprint
Like a silent sea, your gentleness charmed the seagull to sleep
Just like your nature. World is there for everyone to see.

John ..... (Loku) lokutus-prime lokutus-prime # Tuesday, September 30, 2008 9:27:01 PM

Carol, this is a most lovely poem, redolent in style of the wonderful poetry of Elizabeth Barrett Browning. In fact it is a most remarkable and beautiful poem in its own right and if it reminds me of E A Browning in sentiments and character please accept this as my intended unlimited praise of the very highest order, for what you have created.

Beautiful and lasting. It will be so, as hers are.

Loku

Dacotah # Wednesday, October 1, 2008 2:34:25 PM

Thank you AzureTimm, welcome to my blog.
Feal free to read my other poems, they are listed on the sidebar on the right.

Dacotah # Wednesday, October 1, 2008 2:38:11 PM

Hi Loku,

Thank you Loku. I do not know what to say but thank you for your very kind words.

John ..... (Loku) lokutus-prime lokutus-prime # Wednesday, October 1, 2008 4:38:54 PM

Carol - You are blessed. Be of good cheer and never lose your personal belief nor your faith in yourself. You are a constant friend to myself and a constant visitor to "The Castle of Happiness". Your friendship has been and still is, given quietly and unselfishly. You may wonder to yourself - Why does he mention this? What has it to do with my poem? The answer is that we are all the sum of our parts. You have written a most lovely poem and I came here to tell you so and then again I returned in response to your response and it gave me the opportunity to add a further truth.

Stomyr # Wednesday, October 1, 2008 4:58:25 PM

Dacotah # Thursday, October 2, 2008 1:50:41 PM

My Dear friend Loku, thank you again. As you know I do not have much faith left in myself nor hope but with friends like you I am hanging on. Thank you, your friend always, Carol

Dacotah # Thursday, October 2, 2008 1:53:18 PM

Hi Stomyr

Stomyr # Thursday, October 2, 2008 6:31:06 PM

Carol

Dacotah # Thursday, October 2, 2008 6:40:14 PM

LéazzBabyJay99 # Friday, October 3, 2008 4:07:37 AM

"Carol - You are blessed. Be of good cheer and never lose your personal belief nor your faith in yourself. You are a constant friend to myself and a constant visitor to "The Castle of Happiness". Your friendship has been and still is, given quietly and unselfishly. You may wonder to yourself - Why does he mention this? What has it to do with my poem? The answer is that we are all the sum of our parts. You have written a most lovely poem and I came here to tell you so and then again I returned in response to your response adn it gave me the opportunity to add a further truth.

"

I agreed with Loku

You are a true friend & we love you

Dacotah # Friday, October 3, 2008 1:45:34 PM

Thank you Léazz, I love you and Loku too. You two are true friends to me. As for me being a true friend I don't think I am. I try to be but I make mastakes that I wish I never did.

H82typ # Friday, October 3, 2008 2:57:10 PM

We all make mistakes, Carol. *hugs*

LéazzBabyJay99 # Saturday, October 4, 2008 1:09:46 AM

Yes I agreed with Dennis, we all make mistakes.

Dacotah # Saturday, October 4, 2008 9:58:41 AM

Awww, thank you Dennis and Léazz. There are a couple of big ones I wish I never made but I can't take them back.
Hard to forgive myself when that happens. I try to though.
*hugs* Dennis

, Léazz

Stomyr # Saturday, October 4, 2008 6:23:10 PM

*HUGZ*

H82typ # Saturday, October 4, 2008 7:33:02 PM

Don't look back, Carol. Hindsight is very rarely useful.

*hug*

Dacotah # Sunday, October 5, 2008 3:18:08 AM

*HUGZ* Stomyr

Dacotah # Sunday, October 5, 2008 3:19:16 AM

Thank you Dennis, hard not to look back. Yep, as they say hindsight is 20/20 right?

*hug*

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