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Monday, 26. March 2007, 08:36:39

A poem I wrote for my niece, who is battling an illness.

Horizon
Look to the horizon and there you can see
all your hopes and dreams yet to be
Look to the horizon and there you can see
all your wishes yet to be
Look to the horizon and there you can can see
your future that is yet to be
Look to the horizon and there you can see
the heavenly stars looking down on thee
Dacotah
By: ©CR
02/02/2007

FROM MY HEART TO YOURSALASKAN WILDERNESS

Comments

SqueakeyCat 21. April 2007, 10:38

small, short, and lovely as the rest.

Dacotah 21. April 2007, 14:16

Thank you again Kim.

SqueakeyCat 21. April 2007, 21:05

yw :frown:

demiphonic 15. May 2007, 19:42

this is a cool one too :D

Dacotah 15. May 2007, 19:43

Thank you :happy:

lokutus_prime 27. June 2007, 23:15

Wow!!! This is sublime :happy:
I like the iteration .."Look to the horizon.." - in fact I love the entire poem. It's wonderful and beautifully written. I bend my knee to you, dear Dacotah.

Loku :up:

Dacotah 27. June 2007, 23:58

My Dear friend Loku, Thank you very much. Your kind words have left tears in my eyes. Thank you, it means alot to me. :smile:

Jompinna 28. June 2007, 23:40

This is one of my favourites among your poems. :smile: I have a lot on my mind now, and this poem helps me to look to the horizon. :wink: Everything will be allright in the end, the problems won't last forever. It just feels hopeless at the moment..
This is the great things about poems, they give different meanings to different people. :smile: Thank you!

Dacotah 29. June 2007, 00:16

Thank you Janne, you are welcome. If you ever need to "talk" just pm me, ok? :smile:

Jompinna 29. June 2007, 11:01

Thank you, I will! :wink:

Dacotah 29. June 2007, 11:03

You are welcome. :smile:

greathoneybear 2. July 2007, 00:06

I like this one and I will do as you say and look to the horizon and my troubles will melt away.

Beautiful like the rest.

Dacotah 2. July 2007, 00:26

Awww, thank you very much. :smile:

Dacotah 10. July 2007, 17:08

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Thank you all for your comments.

EL_GE 24. July 2007, 01:37

I really like this one. It reminds me of my early days in the Navy, sailing the South Pacific on a Destroyer. On calm days I would sometimes stare out at the horizon, and wonder how far we were from land, but day after day the horizon always looked the same, but with 18 years behind me, and an unknown future before me, I knew that my horizons would not all be the same. There would be many exciting horizons ahead, and I was right.

Thank you Dacotah, for the memories. :happy:

Dacotah 24. July 2007, 01:59

Thank you. May I call you Larry?
You are welcome. :happy:

EL_GE 24. July 2007, 03:23

Yes, you may call me Larry. :smile:

Have a good night and God Bless, it's almost my bedtime. :zzz:

Dacotah 24. July 2007, 04:23

Thank you Larry.

God Bless you to. :happy:

FXM256 18. August 2007, 01:46

Lovely poem Carol, I do hope your niece gets better :smile:

Dacotah 18. August 2007, 04:48

Thank you Marcus, I pray she does. :smile:

FXM256 18. August 2007, 14:50

You're welcome Carol, me too :smile:

Dacotah 18. August 2007, 14:51

Thank you Marcus :smile:

FXM256 18. August 2007, 14:53

You are welcome Carol :smile:

Dacotah 18. August 2007, 14:54

:smile:

eagle4eyes 5. July 2008, 04:31

You truly have a God given gift for writing. I pray that your loved one recovers from their illness.:king:

Dacotah 5. July 2008, 04:54

:o: Thank you. :smile:

lokutus_prime 5. July 2008, 10:52

You truly have a God given gift for writing. I pray that your loved one recovers from their illness.

You speak truly, she has this gift.

I also add my prayers for Carol's loved one.

Amen.

Dacotah 5. July 2008, 12:12

Thank you Loku, she is managing ok with her illness.

:o: Loku, Bless you for thinking I have a gift. Coming from you whom has the gift means something to me. Thank you.

lokutus_prime 5. July 2008, 13:47

:up:

Dacotah 5. July 2008, 14:11

:smile:

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