Dacotah

HORIZON

Monday, March 26, 2007 8:36:39 AM

A poem I wrote for my niece, who is battling an illness.

Horizon
Look to the horizon and there you can see
all your hopes and dreams yet to be
Look to the horizon and there you can see
all your wishes yet to be
Look to the horizon and there you can can see
your future that is yet to be
Look to the horizon and there you can see
the heavenly stars looking down on thee
Dacotah
By: ©CR
02/02/2007

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FROM MY HEART TO YOURSALASKAN WILDERNESS

Comments

KimberlySqueakeyCat # Saturday, April 21, 2007 10:38:55 AM

small, short, and lovely as the rest.

Dacotah # Saturday, April 21, 2007 2:16:19 PM

Thank you again Kim.

KimberlySqueakeyCat # Saturday, April 21, 2007 9:05:33 PM

-demiphonic # Tuesday, May 15, 2007 7:42:36 PM

this is a cool one too

Dacotah # Tuesday, May 15, 2007 7:43:33 PM

Thank you

John ..... (Loku) lokutus-prime lokutus-prime # Wednesday, June 27, 2007 11:15:55 PM

Wow!!! This is sublime

I like the iteration .."Look to the horizon.." - in fact I love the entire poem. It's wonderful and beautifully written. I bend my knee to you, dear Dacotah.

Loku

Dacotah # Wednesday, June 27, 2007 11:58:30 PM

My Dear friend Loku, Thank you very much. Your kind words have left tears in my eyes. Thank you, it means alot to me.

Dacotah # Friday, June 29, 2007 12:16:52 AM

Thank you Janne, you are welcome. If you ever need to "talk" just pm me, ok?

Dacotah # Friday, June 29, 2007 11:03:10 AM

You are welcome.

Christygreathoneybear # Monday, July 2, 2007 12:06:20 AM

I like this one and I will do as you say and look to the horizon and my troubles will melt away.

Beautiful like the rest.

Dacotah # Monday, July 2, 2007 12:26:23 AM

Awww, thank you very much.

Dacotah # Tuesday, July 10, 2007 5:08:23 PM

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Thank you all for your comments.

LarryEL-GE # Tuesday, July 24, 2007 1:37:51 AM

I really like this one. It reminds me of my early days in the Navy, sailing the South Pacific on a Destroyer. On calm days I would sometimes stare out at the horizon, and wonder how far we were from land, but day after day the horizon always looked the same, but with 18 years behind me, and an unknown future before me, I knew that my horizons would not all be the same. There would be many exciting horizons ahead, and I was right.

Thank you Dacotah, for the memories.

Dacotah # Tuesday, July 24, 2007 1:59:47 AM

Thank you. May I call you Larry?
You are welcome.

LarryEL-GE # Tuesday, July 24, 2007 3:23:15 AM

Yes, you may call me Larry.

Have a good night and God Bless, it's almost my bedtime.

Dacotah # Tuesday, July 24, 2007 4:23:39 AM

Thank you Larry.

God Bless you to.

MarcusFXM256 # Saturday, August 18, 2007 1:46:34 AM

Lovely poem Carol, I do hope your niece gets better

Dacotah # Saturday, August 18, 2007 4:48:47 AM

Thank you Marcus, I pray she does.

MarcusFXM256 # Saturday, August 18, 2007 2:50:54 PM

You're welcome Carol, me too

Dacotah # Saturday, August 18, 2007 2:51:38 PM

Thank you Marcus

MarcusFXM256 # Saturday, August 18, 2007 2:53:52 PM

You are welcome Carol

Dacotah # Saturday, August 18, 2007 2:54:52 PM

Jaxs Powelleagle4eyes # Saturday, July 5, 2008 4:31:54 AM

You truly have a God given gift for writing. I pray that your loved one recovers from their illness.

Dacotah # Saturday, July 5, 2008 4:54:27 AM

Thank you.

John ..... (Loku) lokutus-prime lokutus-prime # Saturday, July 5, 2008 10:52:03 AM

You truly have a God given gift for writing. I pray that your loved one recovers from their illness.

You speak truly, she has this gift.

I also add my prayers for Carol's loved one.

Amen.

Dacotah # Saturday, July 5, 2008 12:12:16 PM

Thank you Loku, she is managing ok with her illness.

Loku, Bless you for thinking I have a gift. Coming from you whom has the gift means something to me. Thank you.

John ..... (Loku) lokutus-prime lokutus-prime # Saturday, July 5, 2008 1:47:44 PM

Dacotah # Saturday, July 5, 2008 2:11:45 PM

studio41 # Saturday, April 24, 2010 6:05:32 AM

Originally posted by EL_GE:

On calm days I would sometimes stare out at the horizon, and wonder how far we were from land, but day after day the horizon always looked the same, but with 18 years behind me, and an unknown future before me, I knew that my horizons would not all be the same.

I like what Larry said here.

Carol, this is a wonderful poem and it calls to mind our future and our hope, Jeremiah 29:11

Dacotah # Saturday, April 24, 2010 9:18:21 AM

Hi Jill, I like that also and the ending part: "There would be many exciting horizons ahead, and I was right."

Thank you Jill.

Thank you for the verse.

studio41 # Thursday, June 3, 2010 7:09:59 AM

you bet

Dacotah # Thursday, June 3, 2010 3:15:36 PM

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