Devil in Paradise
Saturday, January 21, 2006 12:42:42 PM
Inside of my heart
there has a beautiful angel await
I frequently gaze at her in dream
She beckons me to come near
She sets my heart on fire
Her eyes are like a big cold lake
that keeps pouring into my heart streams
Although my paradise is like an empty bay
I don't want myself to blame
In order to warm her seacold stare
even centuries can wait.












Fatimahzenya # Sunday, February 26, 2006 12:35:00 AM
Nice poem I don't see the Devil inside these words,
you might think of changing your blog name
Angel of Opera
Eve
Devil_Inside # Sunday, February 26, 2006 11:36:48 AM
thank you for the nice comment. If you don't see any devil in my words, that means I am a qualified devil now. haha.
Devil
Truus KokTruusK # Monday, February 27, 2006 12:48:08 PM
Thank you for adding me as your friend, I do add you too, in you don't mind
Truus
Devil_Inside # Tuesday, February 28, 2006 8:10:57 AM
Thank you. Nice to be your friend.
Devil
captain_of_soulcaptainofsoul # Thursday, April 13, 2006 4:06:17 PM
This is A cadent and sentimental poem. I like the figurative line "Her eyes are like a big cold lake" and "even centuries can await".
Devil_Inside # Friday, April 14, 2006 6:45:19 AM