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Memories of a Dream: A Poem

Friday, August 17, 2007 10:52:14 PM

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Here's a short poem I just recently wrote:



Memories of a Dream

I had a dream of you the other night,
Of you and me together at the shore.
We walked along the beach holding hands,
And talked about our future plans together.

I looked into your eyes and held you close,
Kissed your sweet lips and wanted it to last forever.
Held you in my arms and felt your embrace,
Saw the light in your eyes as I gazed upon your pretty face.

Oh how your eyes, they sparkled in the sun,
I was lost in them, their beauty captured me.
You kissed me so deeply, then you were gone.
The memory of your kiss still lingers on my lips.

Copyright 2007 by FXM256

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Comments

Dacotah Saturday, August 18, 2007 1:37:00 AM

Very nice poem Marcus smile

MarcusFXM256 Saturday, August 18, 2007 1:39:06 AM

Thank you Carol smile

Dacotah Saturday, August 18, 2007 4:57:09 AM

You are welcome Marcus smile

Esther-Sugar Winxsugarwinx Saturday, August 18, 2007 6:58:31 AM

Of cos it's nice!! He wrote this while dreaming of me!! love

Spaggyj Saturday, August 18, 2007 7:17:11 AM

It is very nice up

Esther-Sugar Winxsugarwinx Saturday, August 18, 2007 9:03:33 AM

Like I said... I inspired him... love

lol

MarcusFXM256 Saturday, August 18, 2007 1:14:17 PM

lol thanks rolleyes

scott cummingI_ArtMan Saturday, August 18, 2007 2:28:18 PM

half asleep waiting for the coffee to finish... browsing around.
found your poem. liking it. i'll read it again after coffee.

yes it is good. i love this line.
"Oh how your eyes, they sparkled in the sun,
I was lost in them, their beauty captured me."

MarcusFXM256 Saturday, August 18, 2007 2:36:24 PM

Thanks Scott smile

CherylDuckyChickenLady Saturday, August 18, 2007 9:14:41 PM

Very pretty poem...romantic. love heart

MarcusFXM256 Saturday, August 18, 2007 10:57:28 PM

Thank you Cheryl smile

isabelwickedlizard13 Sunday, August 19, 2007 9:01:02 AM

very nice poem! bigsmile

MarcusFXM256 Sunday, August 19, 2007 9:35:00 AM

Thank you Issy smile

KimberlySqueakeyCat Sunday, August 19, 2007 4:10:32 PM

nice

MarcusFXM256 Sunday, August 19, 2007 5:12:11 PM

Thanks smile

KimberlySqueakeyCat Sunday, August 19, 2007 5:32:00 PM

yw

Sarah angel292005 Sunday, August 19, 2007 8:17:26 PM

There is something so calm and quiet about this poem...
inspires me to write some...

smile

MarcusFXM256 Sunday, August 19, 2007 8:20:15 PM

Wow, glad I had a small part in helping to inspire you Sarah o There are some poems that inspire me smile

Sarah angel292005 Sunday, August 19, 2007 8:21:03 PM

cool

MarcusFXM256 Sunday, August 19, 2007 8:23:04 PM

up

Esther-Sugar Winxsugarwinx Monday, August 20, 2007 7:47:43 PM

All of u who likes this poem must really love me... love

After all, if it's not for me, he won't have such a nice thing going on in his head that led to this poem!! p

MagoMagoMVP Wednesday, August 22, 2007 6:52:59 PM

it's deep it's beautyfull it reminds me of a precious moment spent with a beautyfull girl by the sea under the light of the moon... I think i'll save this poem on my PC so I can go back to that moment! bigsmilesmile

MarcusFXM256 Thursday, August 23, 2007 12:14:01 AM

lol Esther bigsmile

Thank you Mago up

Esther-Sugar Winxsugarwinx Thursday, August 23, 2007 6:53:22 AM

Well, u dare not admit that it wasn't me who inspired u to this!! whistle

Unless of cos, it IS another woman!! bigeyes

MarcusFXM256 Thursday, August 23, 2007 11:44:22 PM

It's not about any specific woman, this poem just came to me one day. bigeyes

Esther-Sugar Winxsugarwinx Saturday, August 25, 2007 8:55:47 PM

And that one day was when I appeared in yr dream wearing a bikini?? bigsmile

KimberlySqueakeyCat Saturday, August 25, 2007 9:45:53 PM

or when u appeared NAKED to him in his DREAMS maybe...lmao


oops...sry, maybe he was thinking about spaggy at the time he wrote it

MarcusFXM256 Saturday, August 25, 2007 11:40:43 PM

You 2 are bad lol

KimberlySqueakeyCat Saturday, August 25, 2007 11:44:26 PM

yeppers, we sure are

MarcusFXM256 Saturday, August 25, 2007 11:51:52 PM

lol I agree

KimberlySqueakeyCat Sunday, August 26, 2007 5:34:14 AM

bout time a man agreed with a woman...the last man that didn't got us kicked out of eden

MarcusFXM256 Sunday, August 26, 2007 5:48:51 AM

It was the other way around Kim p
lol

KimberlySqueakeyCat Sunday, August 26, 2007 6:51:50 AM

no, she agreed with the snake & ate the apple...adam didn't want to eat the apple

Esther-Sugar Winxsugarwinx Sunday, August 26, 2007 12:30:54 PM

lol

And that's supposed to prove what, Kim?? mad

lol

KimberlySqueakeyCat Sunday, August 26, 2007 4:18:15 PM

that men never listen to us women

MarcusFXM256 Sunday, August 26, 2007 4:21:34 PM

whateva rolleyes
p

KimberlySqueakeyCat Sunday, August 26, 2007 4:24:00 PM

lol

Esther-Sugar Winxsugarwinx Monday, August 27, 2007 7:23:25 PM

Hence comes the expression... "Man!! You never listen!!" lol

MarcusFXM256 Monday, August 27, 2007 9:48:14 PM

lol

KimberlySqueakeyCat Tuesday, August 28, 2007 2:52:12 PM

exactly, sugar

MarcusFXM256 Tuesday, August 28, 2007 11:38:42 PM

rolleyes

scott cummingI_ArtMan Wednesday, August 29, 2007 5:19:40 AM

stop this man ribbing.... we love you... we're just always busy dreaming.

KimberlySqueakeyCat Wednesday, August 29, 2007 6:58:29 AM

we r just playing with him, scott...never fear, we only do man-bashing as a joke, not as something real to do...it would hurt too many ppl to actually do that in real, and thats not right

scott cummingI_ArtMan Wednesday, August 29, 2007 11:49:59 PM

o i should have known that. where oh where has my humor sense gone?

Esther-Sugar Winxsugarwinx Thursday, August 30, 2007 7:09:23 PM

Yes... Where is it, young man??

U must have left it on the window sill when yr lady told u to shut it... Now, the wind must have blown it outdoors!!

Hence, we say, "Man!! U never listen!!"

lol

KimberlySqueakeyCat Thursday, August 30, 2007 10:22:54 PM

lmao, smartass, sugar...lmao

MarcusFXM256 Thursday, August 30, 2007 10:26:40 PM

We already know that you're a smartass yourself Kim lol

KimberlySqueakeyCat Thursday, August 30, 2007 11:42:27 PM

yep, i sure am, and i admit it too

MarcusFXM256 Thursday, August 30, 2007 11:53:13 PM

Yup you do lol

KimberlySqueakeyCat Friday, August 31, 2007 1:29:41 AM

always

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