The Dark Furie

I entered a creative writing and poetry competition on the BBC website last year. The objective was to write something about how you view the area you currently live in. I don't actually come from round here so I wrote an objective outsiders view. I didn't win, surprise surprise, because I didn't bang on about how great this place is. I didn't know it was a fiction competition.

What did I write?
Here is my entry but the site has presented it very badly and I swear they've edited it a bit too. Still, I don't care, I'm famous.