The Dark Furie

The Beast - Complete

The complete tales of the beast. Includes the previously unreleased Part 5 and the Epilogue.


Prologue - The Prickling

I can feel it coming, you know.
They say I'm insane, but they're the crazy ones.
How can they not feel it coming?

It watches me when I sleep, stalks me from the moment I awaken.

Why am I the only one who can feel it?

One...
Two...
Three...
It's out there, somewhere, mocking me.

You'll be sorry.
You'll
all be sorry.

It will judge us for our sins...
It will judge us for our sins...

It will judge me for my sins...

He knows how to destroy it! You must destroy it. The beast must not live on.

It will kill again!

Part 1 - The Old Ways

The fire's finally burning high enough. It's so cold out that I didn't think I'd get it to light at first, but the kindling soon took the spark and it's burning nicely now.

Where did I leave that bag? Oh yes, there it is, by the door.

I've been saving the bones all month. Now it's time for them to serve their purpose. I empty the bag onto the fire and can't help but smile as I see them start to blacken quickly. At least you can rely on some things to stay the same.

The scattered nutshells and kernels lie on the table, mocking me. They know what is to come and have imparted their knowledge upon me. There are some questions you really shouldn't ask. No matter how prepared you think you are for the answer, it's never enough. They know, and now I know. Tonight is the night I'm going to die.

I start laying out the plates and cutlery. Two forks, two spoons, two knives, two plates. I pour two tots of potine into seperate glasses - one for me and one for those that have passed on. Somehow it's not enough. So many people died in that trench, and for what? To protect a piece of land smaller than my house...

I need another drink.

It was in that trench, huddled amongst the corpses of my friends, that I first encountered the beast. Even now, so many years later, I still wake screaming with the stench of it filling my nostrils.

It knew me back then. Knew I had survived where so many had fallen. It laughed as it sorted through the bodies until it found me. Why it didn't kill me then I have no idea, maybe it just wanted to torment me for longer. And torment me it does.

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Comments

Bad WolfCois Sunday, November 11, 2007 8:34:39 PM

The beast has caught up with you Mik.. bigsmile

Spaggyj Sunday, November 11, 2007 8:38:00 PM

Ha, well written. I like it very much.

Dark FurieFurie Sunday, November 11, 2007 8:38:26 PM

How in hell did you get here? This isn't meanta be live yet. It hasn't been posted yet. bigeyes

r♡serose-marie Sunday, November 11, 2007 8:39:41 PM

Bloody brilliant! And a great ending bigsmile.

Bad WolfCois Sunday, November 11, 2007 8:41:54 PM

Well it showed on my watched items..lol what did you do?lol

r♡serose-marie Sunday, November 11, 2007 8:42:41 PM

Yeah, mine too. But it doesn't seem to show from the front page...

Dark FurieFurie Sunday, November 11, 2007 8:47:02 PM

It's getting comments from before the time it was posted. This is gonna be one creepy post. bigeyes It must be cause it was saved as private before I changed the date on it to show up at midnight. Cause I changed it to public, it must've shown up on watched lists. Thanks a lot Opera. irked

Christopher DaSilvadannii Sunday, November 11, 2007 8:48:51 PM

yes!!!

r♡serose-marie Sunday, November 11, 2007 8:49:50 PM

Ouch! Buggie... Well, you could just delete the comments. It seems it's only the three of us who've found it.

~ Callya ~Callya Sunday, November 11, 2007 8:56:19 PM

I FOUND IT! p

Bravo Mik... Excellent:cheers:

Dark FurieFurie Sunday, November 11, 2007 9:08:07 PM

Nah, it'll add more spook to it, allowing the misleads about the nature of the beast to have more effect. wink

~ Callya ~Callya Sunday, November 11, 2007 9:12:43 PM

Does the "beast" really bother you that much Mik?

Dark FurieFurie Sunday, November 11, 2007 9:13:40 PM

Who wants to accept age and death as an inescapable fact?

Spaggyj Sunday, November 11, 2007 9:24:15 PM

Me. I already do.

r♡serose-marie Sunday, November 11, 2007 9:33:39 PM

Interestingly, the older I get, the higher my age tolerance gets.

Christopher DaSilvadannii Sunday, November 11, 2007 9:45:19 PM

The older I get, the tougher and stronger my personality gets.

Dark FurieFurie Sunday, November 11, 2007 10:03:58 PM

Neither are likely for me. rolleyes

KYrenKYren Sunday, November 11, 2007 10:21:16 PM

Great! yes

Bad WolfCois Sunday, November 11, 2007 10:26:36 PM

I'm gonna live forever! devil young and capwearing!

Christopher DaSilvadannii Sunday, November 11, 2007 10:26:40 PM

What are you talking about Mik? right

KYrenKYren Sunday, November 11, 2007 10:45:20 PM

bigsmile

Bad WolfCois Sunday, November 11, 2007 10:48:47 PM

roflmao!lol

theoddbod Monday, November 12, 2007 12:59:46 AM

Cool ending smile.

Dacotah Monday, November 12, 2007 4:13:10 AM

Happy Birthday Mik. bigsmile

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KYrenKYren Monday, November 12, 2007 6:58:24 AM

party Happy birthday up

theoddmissusfunz81 Monday, November 12, 2007 10:00:59 AM

cool ending... yes, our sanity is so fragile... even some think i'm insane left

Bad WolfCois Monday, November 12, 2007 10:01:35 AM

The Beast!

Dark FurieFurie Monday, November 12, 2007 10:24:45 AM

That's Mart isn't it? bigeyes

Dacotah Monday, November 12, 2007 10:42:36 AM

lol
Mart working at the strip joint across the street from him. bigsmile

Spaggyj Monday, November 12, 2007 11:33:57 AM

lol

theoddbod Monday, November 12, 2007 12:48:28 PM

scared

Bad WolfCois Monday, November 12, 2007 3:31:44 PM

lol The truth shall set thee freeeee! bigsmile

Dacotah Monday, November 12, 2007 3:35:18 PM

lol bigsmile

Christopher DaSilvadannii Monday, November 12, 2007 5:00:35 PM

lol

theoddbod Monday, November 12, 2007 7:44:49 PM

zip

Dark FurieFurie Monday, November 12, 2007 8:16:23 PM

He did say he'd had a haircut...

r♡serose-marie Monday, November 12, 2007 8:37:43 PM

That's no pink mohawk.. irked

Dark FurieFurie Monday, November 12, 2007 9:08:22 PM

lol

Bad WolfCois Monday, November 12, 2007 10:22:25 PM

I really should stop spaming pics into comments.. p

Dark FurieFurie Monday, November 12, 2007 10:23:58 PM

Speaking of which, you put up an animation last night that I downloaded, but I haven't seen it all day. Where was it?

Bad WolfCois Monday, November 12, 2007 10:43:07 PM

Was it a happy birthday thing? coz all i got in a private album is jpg..

Bad WolfCois Monday, November 12, 2007 10:43:25 PM

Was it a happy birthday thing? coz all i got in a private album is jpg..

Dark FurieFurie Monday, November 12, 2007 10:45:38 PM

Yeah. A strip joint sign or something.

Bad WolfCois Monday, November 12, 2007 10:51:51 PM

I got that from the pimp-your-blog thing.. it didn't display right and I was tired of figuring out code so I took it down..

Dark FurieFurie Wednesday, November 14, 2007 1:54:16 AM

Weird. It displayed fine for me. I even downloaded it into my animations folder. One day I'll whack all the crap I've got on my phone into a file hosting site and upload it to a private post for people to cherry pick.

Bad WolfCois Wednesday, November 14, 2007 8:37:19 AM

That's a great idea..p well i'll check out some other stuff and you can tell me if it displays correctly.. it only displays part of the code for me.. weird..

Cleanclean Monday, August 11, 2008 7:26:45 AM

Very cool story! I confess that I'm confused as to whether there really was some sort of demon-oriented happening, or if it was all in your protagonist's head (which, of course, is what you were aiming for all along, I trust). up

Dark FurieFurie Monday, August 11, 2008 12:18:38 PM

It's personal demons. A demonstration of the foolishness of youth, as well as the fear we all have of aging but applied to some interesting situations. Reading it now, Part 3 seems out of place and really deserves it's own story I think.

Cleanclean Monday, August 11, 2008 1:11:35 PM

The curse of the writer ... going back and editing, editing, editing ... wink

Dark FurieFurie Monday, August 11, 2008 1:43:44 PM

Nah, I can't bring myself to edit something I've brought into existance. It demeans the effort a bit I think. I remember now that part three was about avoiding responsibility and the endless cycle. I always saw the curse of the writer being the disease of creation that must be spread through the world. We're patient X for our stories.

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