little kids having fun in paradise
Friday, 28. November 2008, 21:55:51
Solomon was our guide. With just a line, a hook and a chunk of cochina he taught us to catch the tiny tropical fish from the rickety dock. Every fish we caught was one of a kind: silver with black stripes, purple with yellow dots, purple and orange striped, green blended to blue; fat fish and skinny fishes were abundant in discovery bay, jamaica, b.w.i..
But every day was timeless. We rode the nurse sharks. We rode turtles that dove down deep to make us let go. We would go out into the deep dark blue water on ‘peddalos’, dive in and swim with the porpoises. Sometimes an ominous manta ray glided quietly beneath us. i was a little afraid. but my older brother was seven and i could do anything he could do.
On the reef you couldn’t slip. The coral was razor sharp and would gash you. I learned the hard way. It took weeks for that cut to heal. Another danger was sea urchins with their needle sharp spikes. But you could always see them. You just had to keep your eyes open and walk with care.
Around three o’clock we hurried up to Columbus inn and joined the grown-ups in our little white shorts and short sleeve white shirts with white socks and sandals; all very british. At four o’clock on the dot every day tea was served on the shady veranda. It was the little scones with jam we came for but the tea was good too, with milk and sugar.
Then, off with formalities, we trotted down the seashell path and back to the shore. with our village gang we roasted the catch of the day on an open fire with some corn on the cob. Laughing and playing as the sun set.
During the day we lived on seagrapes, coconuts and mangoes. That was beach life and we became brown as chestnuts. Our friends wore nothing at the beach and we followed suit without hesitation. When we tired of fishing we body surfed when the waves were high.
How many sandcastles we built; cities with towers and moats. we watched in wonder as the tide washed everything away. Once I took about 100 cochinas and arranged them in a spectrum on the flat sand. when the summer ended we were shipped off to an english boarding school, knox college, in the mountains near mandeville.















PainterWoman # 28. November 2008, 23:17
momable # 29. November 2008, 01:20
I_ArtMan # 29. November 2008, 01:24
glad you enjoyed my little description.
mom,
you got it. of course it's indescribable so i tried to keep it simple.
momable # 29. November 2008, 01:40
ellinidata # 29. November 2008, 02:44
of the care free life you lived
I can just picture you sculpting the wet sand,
having a cut from a rock or a reef it's very painful, mine in the past made me suffer for months too...They always say the sea salt heals, that might be true
but the under water cuts are so painful!!!
since you mentioned donkeys,
I will add the one I used in my latest trip to Greece
as for the sand castles,
my Sand Art photo album tells
how much I love today reading about them in your story...
I_ArtMan # 29. November 2008, 03:41
don't eat it. i looked it up and from the picture i found, it's not the same although birds eat it and it grows on the beach. the fruit i remember grew singly. they were sort of sour and pulpy and most of it was a seed inside. you kind of gnawed off the outer meat. it was about the size of a small lemon and oblate. light green when ripe.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:Uva_de_playa_(Coccoloba_uvifera).jpg
meli, the salt water doesn't help a bit. there's some poison or microbe in the coral that causes an awful infection.
that's a nice donkey. i still love donkeys. we put on a show with a donkey one night. a special occasion at columbus inn. we capered around to calypso music but the donkey was the hit. when he decide to poop on stage... everyone was in tears... i, of course was mortified.
yulenka # 29. November 2008, 04:36
momable # 29. November 2008, 05:14
Woo- a close one.
That is a funny story about the donkey.
Donkeys are so cute.
Nice photo, E.
I_ArtMan # 29. November 2008, 06:17
i am so glad you were charmed by my memories of discovery bay.
mom,
i went into action on it immediatly. i wouldn't want to be responsible for poisoning anyone.
donkeys are great and for the most part their dispositions are happy. if they ever are stubborn it's usually because someone doesn't understand that they are sort of human.
yulenka # 29. November 2008, 06:39
I_ArtMan # 29. November 2008, 06:50
thank you for the compliment.
momable # 29. November 2008, 07:02
Engaging reading, certainly!!!
I_ArtMan # 29. November 2008, 07:20
i'm sure if one is really serious about writing, like i am about painting, then the reference manual should be referred to often. then even the best critics can't fault your mastery.
i think it was hemingway who said something like. write the way you would talk and talk the way you would write. something like that. i try to keep it readable; in spite of my love of words. i have to curtail my vocabulary or people just stop reading. t.s. elliot had that problem.
but some of my private writing is full of abstruse conglomerations and personal favorites like 'peregrinations', 'panjandrum' and 'pixilated'.
KYren # 29. November 2008, 15:49
I_ArtMan # 29. November 2008, 17:08
ellinidata # 29. November 2008, 18:57
I am delighted you keep the vocabulary of your story simple,
let's not forget that all your readers are not American born/Educated
as for donkeys:
this one told by my late grandpa
In this story, Nasradin was to be seen rushing around the countryside in pursuit of his donkey. His donkey managed to evade him and in due course the donkey entered the town.
Nasradin followed his donkey down narrow streets, closing the distance between them. Just as Nasradin caught up with the beast, the donkey turned and went into the bazaar.
Nasradin promptly set off for home.
The town's people who had watched the chase with some amusement were bewildered that he had given up the chase at this point.
They stopped Nasradin and asked him why he had not followed his animal into the narrow lanes of the bazaar where a runaway donkey would be very easy to catch.
Nasradin turned and explained that the donkey would no longer be the same animal with which he had left home.
Entering the bazaar had changed the animal so dramatically that Nasradin no longer recognised it as his donkey. It had ceased to be his.
I looked at grandpa as he finished the story, and he could see by my expression that I had not got the point of the story. "You cannot go into the bazaar and emerge the same person" he told me simply.
I_ArtMan # 29. November 2008, 23:10
meli, good one that i never heard before...
*cuts and pastes
ellinidata # 29. November 2008, 23:29
momable # 29. November 2008, 23:46
I had to dumb down my vocabulary, too...
I_ArtMan # 29. November 2008, 23:59
but when i am with my friends i use every word i know. they just have to go 'ding!' and i will define my terms.
ellinidata # 30. November 2008, 00:11
momable # 30. November 2008, 00:14
I_ArtMan # 30. November 2008, 03:20
ding me anytime, don't be shy.
mom, that's how my dad ecucated us... just talked to us as if we were adults. if we didn't know a word we would go 'ding' and he would explain it. we called him "doctor science"
ellinidata # 30. November 2008, 04:12
momable # 30. November 2008, 06:34
My husband and I speak to our children as adults, too-- wait a minute, I have a 17-, 19-, and 21-year-old. They are adults now!
I am so happy I married someone who is not all "I pay for everything so you have to listen to me and do as I say and think as I say. As long as you live under my roof, you are my 'slave"."
(Really, slave is kind of a drastic term; but the aforementioned mentality is enforcing such a environment. I know someone who tells his kids how to treat each other. For example, his oldest son goes to college in California. He pays for it. He told his younger sons to ignore their older brother because they should be mad he is in California. He gave his older son the above speech (not the slave part) when the son came home. Such a martinet!! How can someone grow as a person like that?)
edwardpiercy # 30. November 2008, 07:05
Thank god. Civilization at last! --
Very good stuff, Scott.
KYren # 30. November 2008, 13:23
I_ArtMan # 1. December 2008, 01:45
yes, mom, he had the right idea i think. nice to hear you didn't marry a male chauvanist.
ed,
you got that right... shirts and ties every day, serviettes and table manners, head table, head master etc. we still swung in the trees like tarzan whenever we could get away.
hello kiran... welcome back.
ellinidata # 1. December 2008, 04:05
the first song my son learned in French!
Frère Jacques, Frère Jacques,
Dormez vous? Dormez vous?
Sonnez le matin, Sonnez le matin
Ding Ding Dong, Ding Ding Dong.
I_ArtMan # 1. December 2008, 04:36
me too meli
a votre sante'
edwardpiercy # 1. December 2008, 05:36
LMAO.
ellinidata # 1. December 2008, 13:20
I need to send you some links in an email
it is a whole world out there
just for this little buggers
I_ArtMan # 1. December 2008, 18:30
i'm still looking for a way, which we used to have in opera. i know i used to be able to just browse to my gif file copy and paste it in and it would work. now everything has to be hosted online it seems. i just can't spare the time to figure all these things out.
henseforth i will take the shortcut.
noah counte # 1. December 2008, 20:00
ellinidata # 1. December 2008, 20:04
you just have to ask
Ed calls me his naughty secretary
well
I can always use a second position ,he is the sharing type !
ellinidata # 1. December 2008, 22:02
after we discuss my raise !
see Scott cooks too!
ellinidata # 1. December 2008, 22:05
now you see it, now you don't !!
originally posted by Ed :
"Enough of the gabbing, naughty secretary! Back to work!
By edwardpiercy, # 1. December 2008, 17:00:17 "
boss I am not only naughty , I am fast too!
I_ArtMan # 2. December 2008, 06:33
meli :Heart: i thought i had posted a sign at the gate of the kool-aid house...
no shenanigans
ellinidata # 2. December 2008, 13:41
I saw the crowd outside the kool-aid house and I agree the sign is clear and loud!!
I just received an email with Vacation places to visit in 2009,
you better hold my hand tight on these ones!!!
I_ArtMan # 2. December 2008, 20:52
actually i like heights. but i would never never ever ride that rollercoaster on the pinnacle in las vegas. thanks meli, for the power point experience. the japan beach resort... now that's what i'm talkin about.
noah counte # 2. December 2008, 21:10
ellinidata # 2. December 2008, 21:16
heights make me pee on my pants!
as laughter does!!
PS
I have a hell of a day but I needed to stop and just say "hi!"
missing all of you ...
I_ArtMan # 2. December 2008, 21:20
matthew, i never heard that before. maybe it's only some types. genetic too.
noah counte # 2. December 2008, 21:25
I_ArtMan # 2. December 2008, 21:41
but i built chimneys for twelve years and climbed many mountains. that may have changed something. uncle loftus was a high girder rivetter in chicago, one quarter indian. that's what i meant about genetics.
ellinidata # 2. December 2008, 22:41
I guess in a few years if I go to any of these places I will definitely need "depends"
I believe there is a gradual change in all of us...see teens might not have the common sense and feel no fear but with age they are conscious of their actions and surroundings more and more... That tells me age is a factor here...
The only person of age I know(and feel free to mention age and change) is my dad but ,
I will avoid even asking this ,
at 83 he rides his motorcycle on a daily basis...(too bad it is not genetic )
noah counte # 2. December 2008, 22:48
Like uncle Loftus (appropriately named, eh?), my grandfather did a good deal of welding at great height. I could never walk around comfortably on I-beams like they did back then.
ellinidata # 2. December 2008, 23:01
but again I never understood his son either
jajinka1 # 7. December 2008, 19:40
I_ArtMan # 9. December 2008, 00:41