a song
Saturday, 1. September 2007, 19:45:31
i don't know how this happened but this just came out of my fluid brain yesterday so i wrote it down. it doesn't look like a poem. i was listening to nina simone the night before trying to get to sleep. that might explain the form it took. actually i was thinking it was a song when i was jotting it down.
so somebody put a melody to it and i'll have one of my female vocalists play with it.
don't let me know you love me
and i'll be fine
when you smile and say my name
i'll smile and i'll play the game
but love is not a game to play
it's life and death for me you see
so, don't let me know you love me
and i'll love you more
i'll love you more than violets
or butterflies in june
we can face the wet winds of winter
or welcome the fresh breeze of spring
so take my hand
take this wedding band
just don't let me know you love me
and i'll be fine
i'll love you for a lifetime
if only you'll be mine
just don't let me know you love me.
just don't ever let me know you love me.
copyright 9/1/07 scott cumming
it needs a little polishing....
then there's this really hard vocabulary test to tweak your minds if you dare.
just don't let me know you love me.
just don't ever let me know you love me.
copyright 9/1/07 scott cumming
it needs a little polishing....
then there's this really hard vocabulary test to tweak your minds if you dare.
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are you one over the eight yet, friend?
By shi-wolf, # 1. September 2007, 19:53:11
or won over the eight, as in... out from behind the eight ball? not quite... too soon to tell.
roksana.... say it in other words please... i really didn't get it.
By I_ArtMan, # 1. September 2007, 19:58:44
they are bad words????
I wanted ask if you had drink somethink already....
By shi-wolf, # 1. September 2007, 20:05:41
"will ya still love me when i'm sixty-four...." beattles
By I_ArtMan, # 1. September 2007, 20:07:21
but I don't feel time. never.
you are really powerful man skott
and I tell you a my privat secret:
today I present it for you
LIFE IS LONG
By shi-wolf, # 1. September 2007, 20:15:52
over the legal limit for driving.
no, roksana and i won't be tomorrow either. i had to give up drinking. it seems i am allergic to alcohol. i break out in handcuffs.
sober more than five years.
By I_ArtMan, # 1. September 2007, 20:17:15
but i'll stick around as long as i am still interested.
how old are you?
i know... a gentleman never asks a woman her age. but who said i'm a gentleman?
By I_ArtMan, # 1. September 2007, 20:22:16
but and me, I am not a lady
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By shi-wolf, # 1. September 2007, 20:24:24
Well done!
By ricewood, # 1. September 2007, 21:29:12
allan glad you like the song. i tried to sing it but i am not musical enough. i tried it as a blues song and i tried it as sort of like nora jones... can't do willie nelson. but that would be best.
that's the first song i ever wrote.
i'll print it and give it to halldor's wife, olan.
if she doesn't like it, i have mews small or mary shour to give it to.
By I_ArtMan, # 1. September 2007, 22:06:48
I like the poem/lyrics. It does sound like a song, even without music, which is a good sign.
By quentinscrisp, # 1. September 2007, 23:35:28
thank you for commenting.
By I_ArtMan, # 2. September 2007, 01:51:09
By kripo, # 2. September 2007, 08:30:11
I took the opp to make some links to you and HEG on my new site.
http://bigdadgib.wordpress.com/
I hope they are ok with you.
Keep it up.... BDG
By BIGDADGIB, # 2. September 2007, 13:03:57
i appreciate your approval of my work. so good to have ally.
it reminds me of when i crossed the country with my new christmas present years ago... a cb radio. on the way out from new york to washington state, i got five speeding tickets. on the way back i got none. hammer down all the way.
"picture-taker at mile marker 145 highway 80 east.", gently lift off the pedal and cruise by him with a friendly wave at 55 mph. what a ball.
luckily my wife also gave me a book on the lingo.
i didn't have time to get a license for it. my handle: "barefoot boy"
of course it was ripped off two days after returning to nyc
when i was a wee small whipersnapper of 13 i hitched across the country from ny to la and from ny to florida a few times and it was the truckers that i was most grateful for.
i don't think it's like that anymore though. it all being so 'illegal' and all.
be cool bigdad
By I_ArtMan, # 2. September 2007, 16:13:42
Do you know any "music-sheet" programs ?
By RuneSB, # 2. September 2007, 16:49:16
By wickedlizard, # 2. September 2007, 16:56:05
you can't have everything. someone will know though and comment. ask musicna.
just remember you can use a 'knife' on this... just keep the theme going...
"don't let me know you love me..." that's the meat.
thanks for sticking around.
By I_ArtMan, # 2. September 2007, 16:56:56
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By wickedlizard, # 2. September 2007, 17:37:38
BDG
By BIGDADGIB, # 2. September 2007, 18:43:02
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By Ms. Francie, # 2. September 2007, 19:21:21
kim... that's a good thing. wouldn't it be funny if i wound up supporting my painting with money from writing?
hauntingly beautiful, fran? i like that. thanks for the pat on the back. i needed that.
By I_ArtMan, # 2. September 2007, 20:46:36
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By DuckyChickenLady, # 4. September 2007, 12:40:48