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Life is good

Life

Life ain't fun is it?
I wish I could omit,
The things that hold me down,
And all I see when I turn around,
I see killing, sickness, grief,
I wish this would be brief,
The end is nearly here I know,
I'll try to put on a good show,
I'll try to be the best I can,
I'll be my very best, man,
This world of mine is getting worse,
I'll with out a script or purse,
I'll do what I know I should,
Try to make the time good,
While the rest are tearing you down,
grow, don't lie down,
Go where you know you should and ought to go,
whenever life gives you a nasty blow,




Like It? Some say it's cool, some say not so,
I want you to tell me how far I should go,
as a writer or a poet,
c'mon I think you know it.


Comments

c8lin 30. January 2008, 19:30

i like the idea of the poem, but the flow is a bit awkward...

JUWANA! 20. February 2008, 19:58

i like the feeling that it can apply to everyone...but i gotta admit with evil the flow is off

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