My OperaTo you love
Friday, May 22, 2009 11:38:27 PM
So confused that I am,
Can't even see...
Don't know if it's a scam,
But I hope it not to be...
This feeling inside of me,
Burning me within
Is trying to get the key,
to freedom, to sin.
I love you so damn much,
Even though I don't think I can.
Just thinking of your touch,
Makes me another man
Daneru Yuu Jindaneru # Sunday, August 2, 2009 10:35:15 PM
nicely done... great words Paulo.
PauloLamboaddict # Monday, August 3, 2009 7:58:54 AM
thnx
Daneru Yuu Jindaneru # Monday, August 3, 2009 12:21:05 PM
while reading it, i was imagining two person... The feeling that emerge from the poetry... Well, how do i say it... Ok.
It was like me who wants to make love to this girl, so confused whether it is lust or love.
So eager to do so, could be a sin. But the feeling is burning and i have to set it free.
I love this girl, eventhough i really am not in love. But her carress makes a boy turn to a man.
Paulo, so sorry if altered the thought of your poem.
It was just my crazy imagination running...
PauloLamboaddict # Monday, August 3, 2009 1:06:24 PM
Originally posted by daneru:
Come on! Feel free to say anything you want about it!