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She

There was this one night
In early September,
In which the moon was so bright
It seemed to be ember.

She sat next to me
With that glow in her eye...
Intending to see
If we could reach the sky.

The sky we did reach!
For that night at least...
But the feelings in a mist,
Grew stronger until they perish...

I still see her every week,
Prettier every time...
And I feel like a freak,
Only kissing her through a sign...

I've tried to let her go...
To give my life a new meaning...
But I love her so,
And I can't erase this feeling!

To you loveQuero-te...

Comments

Jacco BesselingFingolfin7001 Friday, July 10, 2009 12:11:42 PM

Wow, you´re a really good poet. smile If you let her read this, she will be yours. smile

PauloLamboaddict Monday, July 13, 2009 9:59:07 PM

wow thnx Fingolfin7001, wasn't expecting that... p
she has already read this and let's say that things worked out pretty well... bigsmile

PauloLamboaddict Sunday, July 26, 2009 7:17:19 PM

thnx

Daneru Yuu Jindaneru Sunday, August 2, 2009 10:27:18 PM

Originally posted by Lamboaddict:

She sat next to me
With that glow in her eye...
Intending to see
If we could reach the sky.

The sky we did reach!
For that night at least...
But the feelings in a mist,
Grew stronger until they perish...

... reaching the vast sky, beside her, with her... looking in the infinity of love, but if it shall perish my friend at one day... don't worry, the feeling still stays in your heart, 'cause the love brings forth happiness with that someone. as i read in the comments here, your poetry worked with her... dreams of forever and a reality to fulfill. smile

PauloLamboaddict Monday, August 3, 2009 8:05:24 AM

I guess I'll keep her in my heart forever... She's got that special place that's reserved and no one else can occupy!
Unfortunately, our relationship is going through a harsh time but I hope it can survive!

Daneru Yuu Jindaneru Monday, August 3, 2009 12:03:59 PM

You will survive. bigsmile

PauloLamboaddict Monday, August 3, 2009 1:07:47 PM

I will! I just don't know if "we" or "our relationship" will... worried

KYLEcastus2 Monday, August 3, 2009 2:40:10 PM

just talk,and keep talking,it will resolve itself one way or the other,then you can both move on.

PauloLamboaddict Monday, August 3, 2009 2:50:07 PM

I just don't want to screw this up and make the wrong move.... 'cause I really want to be with this girl not any other awww

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