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Giving chase

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He's right on top of us. I wonder if he is using the same wind we are using...


-Inigo Montoya, about the boat following theirs,
The Princess Bride.

Dexter, season 1"You cannot be God"

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Amrasananas 12. August 2009, 21:29

Thank you, dear Loki! Will send you the stuff I got jotted down tomorrow!

Loki Aesir 12. August 2009, 21:51

Aw. Cool. I tried some moving around today, but I couldn't quite figure it out. I did some changes in the structure, and I think it's better now, but I'm sure your comments will help me improve it further. :smile:

The draft of the end, by the way, is done, so if you want, I'll send you the entire thing on Friday. :smile: Official first draft, as it were.

Amrasananas 13. August 2009, 09:27

Congratulations and jubilations! How does it feel to have "finished" your first novel?

Loki Aesir 13. August 2009, 11:03

Scary. The stuff that's left to do is all the difficult stuff - being told which parts suck by people, trying to cut unnecessary length and unnecessary scenes, reshuffling bits of the story for pacing-reasons when they're locked in order due to their respective continuity, trying to make the characters sound more idiosyncratic, bettering the phrasings, all these things. The fun stuff - "making shit up" - is sort of done now...

And thank you. ^^

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