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"Destined Minds"

SKELETONS IN THE CLOSET

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SKELETONS IN THE CLOSET

And dark the closet of minds past
in the recesses of the mind and heart
that dares not reveals secrets that bask

tightly packed away once thought secure
the shadows that make lonely company
materialise in the mist of shattered dreams

the deadly drama that stands in silence
with haunting tones of invisible threat
the vastness of void and nothing

where the dead live forever
so hollow the darkeness that stretches
from twighlights misty shadows

wretched dangerous darkness
once abandoned that left nought more
than a shadow of dappled trail foreboding

and now the pull of the unknown
reveals the skeletons in the closet
that silently crept beneath the surface

of daylights hour fearing all
of mornings sunrise prefering
the shadows painted in the evening

and scraggy bit of cold dark shade now
emerges from the dragons cave,what
strange moon that sends a bolt of evil

untangling realm of perpetual darkness
the hauntings of childhoods drone and blur
that crumbled long ago heavens ladder

dread of moment that now is here
and where be the strength to face
the seasons in hell

like a bad dream that I awaken
from the city of the dead
that rings its deathly bell

for now I am found in the middle
of nowhere, no where to run
and no where to hide

black coal of night, you are all chaos
and the dreams have been a grey lonely place
you have been the mistress of deception

you have been my haunting that
relented not forcing your march
in evenings dreams and nightmares

writhing like dragons tail with
all time to sharpen your claws
but the dead shall not live forever

for even in my closet, I was never alone
never left unprotected for I was given
saving grace while you were ruffling

through my darkest recesses and writing
the book of the dead.....for the God
of this afterlife held my hand

protected my heart, untangled my dreams
and poured light little by little
on your darkened games of vehicles

of destruction enough to drive one mad
and you will be left alone in an
unmarked grave never to be remembered

for I will walk in lush green hills
and never again to hear your roar
as mighty angels of the Lord with one

fell swoop of a mighty flaming sword
slices through your hate and spite
sending your unholy darkness of secrets

into eternity's abyss and I will dwell
in peace and slumber sweetly and rest
beyond the shadows past....

Maree Long
(c) Maree Long 2008

FOOTNOTE: A challenge given by valius - let me know how I went valius...
hope you like this piece






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Comments

Angeliki 9. February 2008, 01:12

I was cleaning a closet once. I rented an apartment from a couple that inherit it from their Italian aunt.
I came across to an old lady's journal from her teen years. I could tell her age from the date on the pages.My Italian was and still it is very poor to translate her writings!
I never knew if she wrote about her first crush, her first disappointment or one of her deep secrets.The relatives asked me to discard the journal.They were happy to get the apartment ,they never cared about her possessions...
I still have her journal.I still don't know what her skeletons in her closet was.Maybe they were soft boned skeletons to the touch,sweet smelling ,innocent..or not!
I wonder what kind of skeletons in her closet I found!
I hope one day I find the answer.
Skeletons from another culture, language, era...

thanks for reminding me of this old story!
Angeliki

Maree Long 9. February 2008, 01:53

were soft boned skeletons to the touch,sweet smelling ,innocent..or not!

you do realise that is another poem that just has to be written........

I think that is such an interesting interlude of intrigue in life.....what a shame the relatives cared not? surely someone would want to read such a journal?

I just finsihed taking photo session with hubby and guess what in his closet will be some amazing pics - we managed to get him down to his grunges and on a soft ruffled rug wrapped around us....lo and he is such a very very private person I was shocked he didnt bristle but went along with it the lady was very good and we felt very comfrotable with her....

so now I think I have some lovely pics of just the two of us....

hope your day is going well

Angeliki 9. February 2008, 02:36

another poem in the works??
I am delighted!
it has been some time now!! :smile:
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"ruffled rug wrapped around us",keeping our hearts warm beating together,
simply sealing our love from worries ,fear, and every day fuss.....
I guess your description can make me a poet now!
Nah! not me.Not in this life any way!:smile:

-------I am glad you were able to get lovely pictures of the two of you! We adults become always the photographers... Hold him close and tell him often he is special! You are a fortunate woman! :heart:

Maree Long 9. February 2008, 10:05

oh wow - you really have to put your hand to writing girl.....

SOFT BONED SKELTONS

The rain and cold fell
on the other side of the glassen
windows just out of reach

and we cosied with the
ruffled rug wrapped tightly around us
keeping our hearts warm
and the beating of heart
nestled lightly under the rug

soft boned skeletons raw, in skin
so silken to the touch and
sweet smelling each breath
of summers delight

so strange the weather that quickly changes
so stange the mystery of love
of pure innocence that
eternal the passion melts

I actually think we make a good team....I'm so glad GHB started up the poetry in motion..

seriously have a go at writing the next stanza I know you have it in you...

Angeliki 9. February 2008, 18:16

Wow it turned out so beautiful!


thank you for your encouraging words! Unfortunately I will be a total teen in my reaction!lol..that means,you talk I dont' hear.
(I guess I am spending too much time with teens)

I will give you some drops in the ocean of your gifts and you have to do the paddling! Actually I find your name Maree Long to be the best under the poems!
Is it your Pen Name??

Maree Long 10. February 2008, 01:42

is anyone else type print small - I think my puter is having probs as its the same on the other site must be me????

Yes it is my pen name.....

SOFT BONED SKELTONS

The rain and cold fell
on the other side of the glassen
windows just out of reach

and we cosied with the
ruffled rug wrapped tightly around us
keeping our hearts warm
and the beating of heart
nestled lightly under the rug

soft boned skeletons raw, in skin
so silken to the touch and
sweet smelling each breath
of summers delight

so strange the weather that quickly changes
so stange the mystery of love
of pure innocence that
eternal the passion melts


perhaps more suitable for another piece
I like those lines
c'mon girl give it a go truly you are more poetic than you give credit for - it sems yo are a natural with phrasing.....

and I will give to thee
some drops from the oceans wealth
of gifts

????

I will give to thee some drops
in the ocean of your gifts

Angeliki 10. February 2008, 01:59

Maree Long you can take glistening threads and make it to heavens rainbows and you can take my molded rugs and turn them to angels wings! you are the one that is admired I am just a blow of a far away wind!

Maree Long 10. February 2008, 03:19

molded the rugs that were
spun into angels wings
the dust of hidden past
that clouds the mind

as those wings carry
us to futures present
higher and higher
lifted up were I carried

away beyond the heavens
rainbows that let me not
be just blown in the wind
or mere breath of strange

lands I care for nought
for there I tarried far
too long where moldy angst
tried to cling to my form

and let the wings carry me
to the oceans shore and drink
from the drops of thy gift
the wealth of life before

...................I enter heavens door

hmmm I do like this one ED......its great bouncing off people isnt it....hmmm what shall we title it ED?

Angeliki 10. February 2008, 04:02

hahaaaa you are becoming dangerously addictive!
Good Night Maree!!

***** Five stars !!!!! :D

Maree Long 10. February 2008, 06:54

ok I'm definitely claiming this one - again thanks for the inspiration

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