YOU LOOK BUT DO NOT FEEL
Monday, 25. February 2008, 06:39:29
you see the salted tears
but you feel not its stinging
you see my broken heart
but you feel not its aching
and how could you, for you are
are lacking in empathy of man
vile vile emptiness you are
you take up space that is wasted
on you and your children, you
breed a new breed of vileness that
walk and destroy just as you have
done they have learnt you ways
well - and you are not happy with
your life -only happy at days end
of the deeds you gloat about and roll
in it's muddy glory
you are the vileness that walks
and harbors spite - you are the
essence that breathes the stolen
breath of life for you have no
life of your own, you can only
wear the shoes of others and on
you all is ill fitting, you
hobble in our shoes and your
goblin face distorts at the
discomfort but persistent you
are for you have no shoes to
call you own for envy is all
you are - your focus is on the
want of others and you hurt
your children but you do not
care for you will admit neither
you wanton lack of compassion
and empathy and you pat yourself
on the back and spend your days
and devising and your nights
drinking and wasting away your
years of rage for you were
milked from your mothers poisonous
lap of deception and feel not
the end of time that awaits for you
the end of time that will judge
you by the very measure of what
you saw and felt not and then
you will see and then you will feel
and there hopefully your children
will not hear your cries the they
were long time ago saved
.............from your fate
Maree Long
(c) Maree Long 2008
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ellinidata # 25. February 2008, 13:44
lap of deception and feel not ..............
that reminds me a wonderful book I did read..
It described the twisted love a Chinese mother was giving to her son and in comparison to her daughters he turned out to be arrogant, abusive to his wife and ruthless to his friends and business associates!
Praising your son more than you should at times back fires.
At times I wonder if the character of a son it is totally molded by the way he is treated by his mother.
I have my son empty the dish washer at least three times a week and he does his wash from the age of 13. Now I wonder if he will one day help his wife or I pushed him too early into it and when married he will rebel!
Sorry, if I directed the whole thing to the wrong direction.That happens to my mind often...
Maree Long # 25. February 2008, 19:30
I have no idea ED...my son was vacumming his own room at 3 - I had one of those new fangled Rainbow vacuums and my son was fascinated couldnt vacuum enough he loved it now he keeps everything clean and neat in his room and car etc....and has longed washed his own clothes since high school I imagine that your son will be helpful around the house as is mine...but I guess you and I will have to wait and see until they are married how well we did? lol
I have no problems with diversions often they can be refreshing...
ellinidata # 25. February 2008, 19:33
otherwise, no internet and no cable TV!
yes, I do agree the times a child in his worse behavior it is the time he/she need a hug the most!
A blended family needs strong adults to manage. It seems to me you do have kids from your heart and from you belly but they are all equal! Well done!
bye! for now