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"Destined Minds"

YOU LOOK BUT DO NOT FEEL

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YOU LOOK BUT DO NOT SEE

you see the salted tears
but you feel not its stinging

you see my broken heart
but you feel not its aching

and how could you, for you are
are lacking in empathy of man

vile vile emptiness you are
you take up space that is wasted

on you and your children, you
breed a new breed of vileness that

walk and destroy just as you have
done they have learnt you ways

well - and you are not happy with
your life -only happy at days end

of the deeds you gloat about and roll
in it's muddy glory

you are the vileness that walks
and harbors spite - you are the

essence that breathes the stolen
breath of life for you have no

life of your own, you can only
wear the shoes of others and on

you all is ill fitting, you
hobble in our shoes and your

goblin face distorts at the
discomfort but persistent you

are for you have no shoes to
call you own for envy is all

you are - your focus is on the
want of others and you hurt

your children but you do not
care for you will admit neither

you wanton lack of compassion
and empathy and you pat yourself

on the back and spend your days
and devising and your nights

drinking and wasting away your
years of rage for you were

milked from your mothers poisonous
lap of deception and feel not

the end of time that awaits for you
the end of time that will judge

you by the very measure of what
you saw and felt not and then

you will see and then you will feel
and there hopefully your children

will not hear your cries the they
were long time ago saved
.............from your fate

Maree Long
(c) Maree Long 2008

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Comments

ellinidata 25. February 2008, 13:44

milked from your mothers poisonous
lap of deception and feel not ..............

that reminds me a wonderful book I did read..
It described the twisted love a Chinese mother was giving to her son and in comparison to her daughters he turned out to be arrogant, abusive to his wife and ruthless to his friends and business associates!
Praising your son more than you should at times back fires.
At times I wonder if the character of a son it is totally molded by the way he is treated by his mother.
I have my son empty the dish washer at least three times a week and he does his wash from the age of 13. Now I wonder if he will one day help his wife or I pushed him too early into it and when married he will rebel!
Sorry, if I directed the whole thing to the wrong direction.That happens to my mind often...

Maree Long 25. February 2008, 19:30

I would imagine praising one child more than the other would do that everytime....for me I favor not any of my children....though I did have the ex call up one day complaining (many years ago mind you) that I favored one of my step children - what she could not comprehend that there was a reason I allowed the eldest child to stay up or hold my baby etc...and actually the child she thought I favored I found the most irratating at the time...really odd perception....

I have no idea ED...my son was vacumming his own room at 3 - I had one of those new fangled Rainbow vacuums and my son was fascinated couldnt vacuum enough he loved it now he keeps everything clean and neat in his room and car etc....and has longed washed his own clothes since high school I imagine that your son will be helpful around the house as is mine...but I guess you and I will have to wait and see until they are married how well we did? lol

I have no problems with diversions often they can be refreshing...

ellinidata 25. February 2008, 19:33

oh yes he does help!
otherwise, no internet and no cable TV!
yes, I do agree the times a child in his worse behavior it is the time he/she need a hug the most!
A blended family needs strong adults to manage. It seems to me you do have kids from your heart and from you belly but they are all equal! Well done! :smile:

bye! for now :smile:

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