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"Destined Minds"

THE WORLD I SEE.....

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THE WORLD I SEE.....

And I put aside childish things
and foolish thoughts and have
learnt that the hand that rocks
the cradle rules the world

so sing the lullaby of sweetness
while you can, and whisper sweet
imaginings in their ear and show
them a mothers tender touch

and give them the strength of
a father's love and let them rise
and build the world the one
we long and dream for

For hate is bred in childhood games
and vileness whispered from a mother's
lips and anger given from a father's
lack

And all children learn to hate and war
you seem them post in haste their hate
and mocking tones of vile they create
and spawn the world we long to be

shielded from and only now wait for enternities
mercy and grace that will let us live the way
we were first destined, and the way our
hearts long for..

Maree Long
(c) Maree Long 2008

WOULD YOU NOTICE?BEHIND THE WALL

Comments

I_ArtMan 29. February 2008, 01:20

interesting energy like a gradual growing windstorm.

Maree Long 29. February 2008, 01:25

thank you for your interesting comments artman...sounds like I could get a poem out of such a comment....thank you for taking the time to read...

I_ArtMan 29. February 2008, 03:30

i believe since you shared your poem, i should express my impression.

Maree Long 29. February 2008, 04:21

again thank you - I have found so many people on this forum willing to read, share and comment so very encouraging + meeting ineteresting people with interesting lives and facets

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