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"Destined Minds"

Last Tree Standing

Last Tree Standing...

there is a sound that falls on deaf ears
where winters past was once a dream

and falls the axe of sharpened steel
and life is taken but no one screams

cold so cold as snow as darkness falls
man's heart it feels no grief

and who will cry for the last tree standing
as man burns wood from winters relief

precious the forest from eons ago
we thought once eager to save

but amidst our ife of greed and aplenty
we forget to cry for the last tree standing

and now winters day as cold as snow
as cold as the steel on the lumbers axe

we cried not for the last tree standing.......



Maree Long
(c) Maree Long 2008
www.freewebs.com/poetrybymareelong

THE LIFTING OF HIGHERCHANGE OF TIME

Comments

Cois 28. June 2008, 10:53

Very moving Maree..
The day shall come that man regrets his relentless cutting of trees..

Maree Long 29. June 2008, 23:08

thank you cois and I agree one day we will regret but alaz too late....I r ecall seeing satelite images of the earths forest over different periods and to see them dissappearing is disturbing....- this piece was inspired by minnie from the

http://peachpit.smfforfree4.com/index.php/topic,89.0.html

and your welcome to join we just play arcade games and have friendly banter and friendship....just say the poetess sent you...

minnie gave me three words to work with axe, snow and darkness and this piece came up.

how have you been?

Cois 30. June 2008, 00:47

I'll see if I can get into it although I've got some project that's keeping me o so busy.. :cry: the research itself is already frying my little mind..
Other than that I just can't complain.. p: yourself? You haven't been on much lately I think..

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