KlauDii.Kannibal.KanCer

my first random poem i wrote.... it opened my eyes to my gift of being able to write..

Saturday, 3. May 2008, 16:39:58

the title is
Music

music,it's my medicine
it heals all the wounds
my demons leave behind
it clears my thoughts and mends my mind

it is the only place
where i can get lost
and do not want to be found

when i am in it,
i am free
it's the ony place where i can be me.

short and sweet huh?

how i create most of my poems..my untitled poem...not my best, but hey, wtf?

Comments

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shiftyzphone # 3. May 2008, 17:24

short n sweet indeed. i have the same feelings. another great piece of work

MistyPoet # 3. May 2008, 17:33

WHY THANX LOVE!! HAHA caps lock, hehehe... cant wait to c some of ur work...hehehe...

BleedingHeart # 3. May 2008, 21:44

short, sweet and great

MistyPoet # 3. May 2008, 22:26

hehehe thank u love, one of my all time favs this one...

Magyk # 8. May 2008, 02:42

I dig it

Magyk # 14. May 2008, 01:59

I dig the poem

MistyPoet # 16. May 2008, 12:47

hahaha..thanks u guys!!

l0omen0l # 19. May 2008, 12:47

MistyPoet # 19. May 2008, 12:51

hahahaha!!! thats so funny!!

MistyPoet # 19. May 2008, 12:51

hahahaha!!! thats so funny!!

Zelas # 19. May 2008, 17:33

Lets face it. Your poems are very childish and very bad.Stop writing right now. I'm MFG serious.

Magyk # 19. May 2008, 18:40

Hey, Zelas
Get a life.

You really think you fucking understand poetry?
Fuck off and leave her alone.

BleedingHeart # 19. May 2008, 19:12

@Zelas, Well if it isn't Helen mother f*****g Vendler, I'm surprised you had the time to come to a young girls blog and provide such an elaborate critique of her very first poem.

Wait, you didn't do that you posted a pointless comment void of any constructive criticism. Presumably this was to make yourself feel better about something. If that is your modus operandi and thats you in your profile picture I'll assume it's to make yourself feel better about your inevitable life of loneliness and celibacy, his/her choice, not yours obviously.

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@Anyone, One free internet to anyone who can tell me which one she shot and why it wasn't Dopey, the one most likey to contaminate the gene pool.

l0omen0l # 19. May 2008, 22:59

OH sorry Mr.BleedingHeart!!
From ur Name we know who the lonely one is with a bleeding heart.
I see you know Dopey... how old are you???
why don't you comment something usefull.
This is Internet, and ppl makes jokes.
Trying to understand the joke, is better than being a Joke hier.
Plz Try kiddy

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Klaudia: your poem is good.
keep going on.

BleedingHeart # 19. May 2008, 23:07

@l0omen0l The top half of my post it aimed at Zelas the bottom is asking about your pic, asked jokingly. Sorry if reading comprehension isn't a strong point of yours, I'm guessing English isn't your first language so no harm no foul.

But to answer your question 25, I've had more than enough time to learn the name of one character from a 71yo movie.

MistyPoet # 20. May 2008, 14:04

zelas ill try not wasting my time on a pathetic mass of matter such as yourself...you wanna critize my poetry badly, go ahead, im not gonna cry...i wont be worrying about whether i should stop or not..im stopping now, or any time later..deal with it!!

Zelas # 21. May 2008, 05:49

Enougth already. I accidently came here, read your "poem" and, whith humour, wrote my opinion. And now opera is informing me about ewery new coment here, keeping me coming here again and again. It is truth, that I don't like emos, and it's also truth, that I actualy don't care about our "poetry", so please, just erase my coments and go on.

P.S. The reason why I comented that poem, was that I read those words: "it opened my eyes to my gift of being able to write". I thought: "where is that talent of her? There is no!" and wrote it. Thank you, good bye. Don't slit your wrists becouse of me!

Magyk # 21. May 2008, 17:17

<To Zelas>

Wow >.>
Immaturity supreme right thurr

Magyk # 21. May 2008, 17:19

She shot sleepy!
Right?

*sorry, kinda late, had to say it*

:edit: OH oh! And it wasn't Dopey 'cause he didn't talk!!

*proud* ahaha

BleedingHeart # 21. May 2008, 17:35

Thanks for the name (Internets in the post), and wow I was just taking a swipe at Dopey I forgot he didn't talk, very clever.

Magyk # 22. May 2008, 06:33

Lol thanks.
I figured she didn't shoot him 'cause he couldn't answer anyways.

*feels brilliant*

MistyPoet # 22. May 2008, 23:51

Bleh...wot an idiot...i wud never shed my precious blood on him... x_x and spanx 4 stickin up 4 me guys

MistyPoet # 22. May 2008, 23:52

Bleh...wot an idiot...i wud never shed my precious blood 4 him... x_x and spanx 4 stickin up 4 me guys

Magyk # 23. May 2008, 00:05

No probs babycakes ^^

& agreed. He's not worth blood.

MistyPoet # 23. May 2008, 00:13

Yup not at all...now..'nuff talk bout that

lets move on to more plesant things

Magyk # 23. May 2008, 00:39

RAINBOWS!!!!!!

BleedingHeart # 23. May 2008, 00:47

I like skittles.

Magyk # 23. May 2008, 01:06

I don't... ahaha

BleedingHeart # 23. May 2008, 01:15

Well you like the rainbow, I like to taste the rainbow kinda related.

(If you don't get the skittles advert where you are, Taste the Rainbow is their slogan, Im not totally weird)

MistyPoet # 23. May 2008, 10:36

Hahaha!! Lol!....
WORMIEZ! They're colourful too....

Magyk # 23. May 2008, 15:20

Lol aw, BleedingHeart I knew that.
Are there really places that DON'T sell skittles?
WEIRD!
Mind you, there are places that don't have Fruit Loops and that's like a cardinal sin... xD

Wormies? Like those gummy worms?
xP

MistyPoet # 24. May 2008, 15:04

Sour wormiez!!

we hav fruit loopz!

Magyk # 25. May 2008, 00:22

I LOFF FRUIT LOOPS
I had like two bowls today ^^

If I were to explode, I'd explode rainbow's 'cause I have so many goddamned fruit loops in me. I'd be a colourful explosion *claps like an idiot*

MistyPoet # 29. May 2008, 12:14

lolz!! if id explode...hmmm...black liquid and worms could creep from my remains....