Don't you wish life was a slut? Then it'd be easy.

If the bright side doesn't wanna show itself, you go looking for it or switch a fucking light on !!

i looked into ur eyes

i looked into ur eyes
and all i saw was sorrow..
your walls crumbling,
your world spinning..
what happened?

was it him..
wat he had done to you?
has the wound set alight again?

or was it her?
when she took her life?
no goodbye
you refused to cry
instead you bled,
bled then,
you bleed now
please dont bleed forever!

i looked into your eyes
and i saw darkness
was it them?
did they burn all of you when they left?

or did the world take your soul?
by force..forever

i looked into your eyes
and funny enough..
i saw me..

seeking for love in hell....said to be my best poem.. hmm..wrote it last year

Comments

BleedingHeart Tuesday, August 19, 2008 5:26:42 AM

Great job.

KlauDii.GoReGazzMMistyPoet Tuesday, August 19, 2008 7:06:41 PM

ah thanx love!!

Maya Emotivegirl Wednesday, August 20, 2008 1:05:11 AM

Woow
I luv it .
Go ahead sweety. U are a creative gurl.up love

KlauDii.GoReGazzMMistyPoet Wednesday, August 20, 2008 1:38:22 PM

ahh.. spankew bigsmile yeah, have the mind of a phsyco scared

Johannjohanno Wednesday, August 20, 2008 7:35:16 PM

very creative phsyco

KlauDii.GoReGazzMMistyPoet Thursday, August 21, 2008 7:43:55 AM

lol! thanx johan wink

BleedingHeart Thursday, August 21, 2008 9:26:06 AM

Just me or does "very creative phsyco" kinda sound a lot like "kill me last, take the others first" ?

KlauDii.GoReGazzMMistyPoet Thursday, August 21, 2008 9:34:09 AM

haha.. lol.. i dont know alien

Lebohang Gavin Dansterfrdmforce Sunday, December 14, 2008 10:44:36 PM

Its creepy yet Im touched, I have no comments but felt I needed to write something

NfanNfanpro Friday, January 9, 2009 8:00:24 PM

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KlauDii.GoReGazzMMistyPoet Saturday, January 10, 2009 8:18:58 AM

Wtf pro.

NfanNfanpro Saturday, January 10, 2009 3:33:19 PM

i dont get it

KlauDii.GoReGazzMMistyPoet Sunday, January 11, 2009 9:02:52 AM

dont get the poem or wot??

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