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my untitled poem...not my best, but hey, wtf?

my eyes have been opened,
im so lost,
too confused,
my mind im begining to lose,
my heart,
my fear,
all wraped in coldness...
my soul is pain,
im dying all over again!!

now im heartless and soulless,
falling all over,
into pits of sorrow and hopelessness
and all of your love controls me...

now i think, oh why,
did i ever let myself cry,
the master over me, oh ive begged, now i plead,
i need you, i need you,
im too lost without you!!

this feeling so new,
ripping and tearing,
the rest of me without caring,
this pain, so real, taking over,
its all i feel!

are you aware?
of what has been done,
what i have become?
ALL I WISH TO DO IS RUN!!!

now im heartles and soulless,
falling all over,
into pits of sorrow and hopelessness
and all of your love controls me...

when my eyes were closed,
i wasnt alone,
you were there,
when i was ever so scared,
now my eyes have been opened,
and i must question?

do you love me more or less??
one day you held me,
the next you threw me,
but still i am lured back,
to you...

im so heartless,
completely soulless,
again dying all over...

my first random poem i wrote.... it opened my eyes to my gift of being able to write..seeking for love in hell....

Comments

BleedingHeart 22. June 2008, 08:04

Well I like it.

MistyPoet 22. June 2008, 08:07

thanks :smile: hmm..im not really one for love poems...this is my first :worried:

BleedingHeart 22. June 2008, 08:12

Well love is better than the alternative. So its good you could find the feelings to wright one.

MistyPoet 22. June 2008, 08:30

yes...harsh n sad old feelings, ah well, i got them all ut so thats great!! :D

johanno 29. July 2008, 17:23

good work

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