Don't you wish life was a slut? Then it'd be easy.

If the bright side doesn't wanna show itself, you go looking for it or switch a fucking light on !!

my untitled poem...not my best, but hey, wtf?

my eyes have been opened,
im so lost,
too confused,
my mind im begining to lose,
my heart,
my fear,
all wraped in coldness...
my soul is pain,
im dying all over again!!

now im heartless and soulless,
falling all over,
into pits of sorrow and hopelessness
and all of your love controls me...

now i think, oh why,
did i ever let myself cry,
the master over me, oh ive begged, now i plead,
i need you, i need you,
im too lost without you!!

this feeling so new,
ripping and tearing,
the rest of me without caring,
this pain, so real, taking over,
its all i feel!

are you aware?
of what has been done,
what i have become?
ALL I WISH TO DO IS RUN!!!

now im heartles and soulless,
falling all over,
into pits of sorrow and hopelessness
and all of your love controls me...

when my eyes were closed,
i wasnt alone,
you were there,
when i was ever so scared,
now my eyes have been opened,
and i must question?

do you love me more or less??
one day you held me,
the next you threw me,
but still i am lured back,
to you...

im so heartless,
completely soulless,
again dying all over...

my first random poem i wrote.... it opened my eyes to my gift of being able to write..seeking for love in hell....

Comments

BleedingHeart Sunday, June 22, 2008 8:04:54 AM

Well I like it.

KlauDii.GoReGazzMMistyPoet Sunday, June 22, 2008 8:07:35 AM

thanks smile hmm..im not really one for love poems...this is my first worried

BleedingHeart Sunday, June 22, 2008 8:12:40 AM

Well love is better than the alternative. So its good you could find the feelings to wright one.

KlauDii.GoReGazzMMistyPoet Sunday, June 22, 2008 8:30:38 AM

yes...harsh n sad old feelings, ah well, i got them all ut so thats great!! bigsmile

Johannjohanno Tuesday, July 29, 2008 5:23:53 PM

good work

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