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Reflections of a Compassionate Misanthrope

Broken Man

Sunday, 23. December 2007, 17:58:46

If I became a broken man
would you still be my bride?
If I could no longer pick you
sunshine from the sky
Would you push me aside?

If I struggle to stand or cry to crawl
would you stand for me and be my all?
Or would you give my love to a total man
hoping I and others would understand?

Am I still the man,
though half the strength,
I was when I chased you the length
of a hopeful heart in a ga-ga girl ...
when your loving smile pierced my world?

If a promise made is etched on God
and I falter on the way,
Will I see your hand reach for me
as I held you today?

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If she turns from you, it was not love in the sense that you and I cherish. But you already know that.. and the answer..

:heart:

~Briar~


By BriarDream, # 23. December 2007, 18:21:13

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Heart back at ya, ma'am. Thanks. :smile:

By Moontan01, # 23. December 2007, 18:23:14

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awww

By allangie, # 23. December 2007, 20:05:24

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She will still love you if she's half the woman you deserve, Michael...

:smile:

By Starphoenix, # 23. December 2007, 21:16:46

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Hmmm. Don't go looking for autobiography in all I write. Certainly in this one. Or, for example, a slasher poem I might do. But thanks for the well wishes, SP.

By Moontan01, # 23. December 2007, 22:01:41

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Hmmm..."Michael the Slasher"...Nope, I just can't see it. :lol:

You're welcome, M.

By Starphoenix, # 23. December 2007, 23:47:50

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slasher.. hmmm let me know when it goes to the movies..

By BriarDream, # 24. December 2007, 00:12:10