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A terrible accident

I've just woken up. it's close to dusk, the windows are open and a cool breeze blows in. a song of Queen is playing.
'Love of my life, you hurt me
you broken my heart, now you leave me . . . '
the song fills me with a sense of nostalgia. I'm aching all over, but I get up with difficulty and look for a cigarette. I find one in my jacket pocket and light it up. I take a long drag on it, but I feel dizzy and start coughing. Robert rushes in and sees the cigarette in my hand.
'what are you doing? why are you smoking? you haven't got well yet. you had a terrible accident last night. you don't remember?' he says.
Robert is my old friend, childhood friend. he's a painter and lives in countryside. he's the best one who can help me out whenever I encounter a difficulty. this time I really got him into trouble. I was too preoccupied while I was driving to his house last night. so my car smashed into a large tree and my forehead hit against the steering wheel hard. I don't remember anything more from the accident.


I put out the cigarette and move towards the window. I see my smashed car nearby.
'were you drunk last night?' he asks.
'can you belive it? all of it happend in a flash. last night Lisa left me forever.' I tell him in a choked voice.
'Lisa left you forever?!' he asks surprised and wants me to tell him the story.
(to be continued. . .)

Black Short StoryLisa

Comments

ninabritney 9. July 2008, 18:12

wow, i really like this it's very gripping.

Morteza7953 9. July 2008, 18:39

i'm very delighted that you liked it. :up:

liquid snake 29. July 2008, 21:01

i am curious ........ common man post it as soon as possible.

Noah503935 4. August 2008, 18:33

:worried: lisa left you forever. awww I hope that reck didn't damage anything in your head. bug

flotsam22 11. August 2008, 15:51

Hey pal, finish the story soon, youre a good writer.

Morteza7953 11. August 2008, 16:43

thanks Denis :smile:

Noah503935 11. August 2008, 18:22

That is 100% True!! p:

Morteza7953 11. August 2008, 21:17

merci beaucoup Noah. :smile:

Noah503935 11. August 2008, 21:48

:confused:

Morteza7953 11. August 2008, 22:03

that means 'thanks a lot' (Fr :D)

Noah503935 11. August 2008, 23:28

Oh :D How are you doin Morteza?

Morteza7953 12. August 2008, 00:31

i'm doing good. how are you?
we've not talked for a while.

Noah503935 12. August 2008, 00:49

Oh yeah, I know! How have you been? Want to talk on IM?

ps: theres going to be a meteoroid shower tonight! :D I cant wait!!!!!!!!

And what languages do you speak?

هل تعرف ما تقول أنا؟

Morteza7953 12. August 2008, 00:57

yeah we can talk on meebo :D
i speak persian. you've written arabic.

Noah503935 12. August 2008, 02:44

Your good! I had no idea you spoke persian.

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