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Lisa

I'm very grateful to my dear friend Decaspecht for correcting my post's grammatical errors. He's a very nice and caring friend.
the reason for which I've joined this community is to improve my english and make good friends from all over the world.
every one who reads my blog, feel free to tell me my mistakes, I'll be very grateful :up:



It was a drizzly morning. I was getting into my car to drive to work when I noticed someone calling me from behind. I turned around and saw a girl who was coming towards me. she approached and asked:
'' could I bother you to take me to airport. my car doesn't start. I'll miss the plane if I don't be there in an hour''


I was in a hurry but I couldn't reject her request.
''no trouble at all. I'll take you there'' I said.
''then could you please wait a moment, I've forgotten bringing my suitcase'' she said smilingly.
''yes of course.'' I said.

I didn't know that she was living in my neighbourhood. though I didn't know other neighbours very well, but I had never seen her before. after a while she came back with the suitcase. I helped her to put it in the trunk and then we drove to the airport.

during the way I was able to know her a little. she was a tall girl with straight light brown hair and hazel eyes. her name was Lisa and she lived with his father who was a bank's retiree . her mother had left them ten years ago. after taking her to the airport I went to work. that day I was totally distracted by her image at work. I was overwhelmed by a nice feeling.

visiting her was a turning point in my life. after that morning I met her again on several occasions. from that day on, I was getting closer to her little by little. I was falling in love with her gradually. after 3 months I became so attached to her that I couldn't be unaware of her even for a single day. she loved me too but her father didn't know anything about our friendship. I was determined to marry with her but there was a big obstacle in my way. her father intended to marry her to his wealthy nephew, whom Lisa didn't like at all. his name was George. he lived abroad and owned a hotel.
Lisa loved her father but she was in awe of him. he was very strict and bad tempered. but anyhow he was her father and he had brought her up since his wife had seperated from him.
(to be continued. . .)

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Comments

Noah503935 13. July 2008, 23:20

Lisa sounds like a nice person. If I were in your shoes, I would wait and see who she wants to be with.

Do you think she likes you too?

Morteza7953 14. July 2008, 09:08

:faint:
how are Noah
you should have written my previous post before commenting. :lol:

decaspecht 14. July 2008, 18:45

Anytime my friend Morteza.
Ohh by the way, the story is very interesting. I'm waiting for the next chapter :smile:

Morteza7953 14. July 2008, 18:49

thanks
i'll be a little busy at work in next coming days, but i'm trying to finish it asap.

ninabritney 15. July 2008, 00:18

so good, i cant wait for the next part. :smile:

Morteza7953 15. July 2008, 10:50

thanks,
but you should wait :D

wanderingclouds 16. July 2008, 01:37

Is this the story about the coldness of man to his neighbour?? Am I feelling right?

Morteza7953 16. July 2008, 01:48

the story hasn't finished yet :D
let's see what happens at the end.

ombolan 16. July 2008, 17:56

like in every story there will be some empty pages.
the first empty page with the word "end" or the words "the end"
for those who want still continue reading (the bookworms). °L°

Morteza7953 16. July 2008, 19:09

:lol:

liquid snake 29. July 2008, 21:06

man you sure can make a good climax and curiosity......i am waiting.....dont be too lazy :D

There2ia 5. August 2008, 06:24

Hi..I want them really in trouble to get father's approval. The man should fight to win his love. The girl should be fair. Please don't let the father down, but fight for her love. He..He..I want to have happy ending...I don't want to cry..

flotsam22 11. August 2008, 16:16

You are teasing all your fans 2 stories without endings , we are all in suspense, finish it soon pal
:yes:

Morteza7953 11. August 2008, 16:45

:yes:

Morteza7953 11. August 2008, 16:52

i was away for a while because of my work. i'm going back home tomorrow. :happy:
i'll finish it at home asap.
thanks a lot dear Denis for reading my stories and commenting on them. :up:

yulenka 25. August 2008, 10:01

Waiting for the next.The story is interesting and the language is very pleasant and easy for me;)

Morteza7953 25. August 2008, 10:09

:happy: :up:

AdrianRicky 30. August 2008, 10:09

Bro..are you there?
:lol:
i'm going to visit akira's place..wanna come?! :up:

Morteza7953 30. August 2008, 10:57

send me her address

AdrianRicky 3. September 2008, 18:40

Bro..are you oke? :worried:
i never seen you again lately..
:frown: :frown:
still on earth,right??
hope the :alien:
didn't kidnapped you..

here..i bring you some food..




eat them,oke! :up:
i hope you alright...
see you around..

Morteza7953 4. September 2008, 00:05

hey Adrian i miss you too
how are you my friend?
i'm doing good. :up:

AdrianRicky 4. September 2008, 05:51

Yeah..i'm fine..:up:
glad to hear u oke! :worried:
btw..i want to ask you something!

flotsam22 4. September 2008, 18:40

@AdrianRicky. Hey bro thats a tasty lookin dish of 'Seek kabobs' spare some for me too ,Morteza wont eat all of it. :cheers:

Morteza7953 4. September 2008, 19:57

you can join me Denis :D but don't expect to stay healthy after eating it. Adrian once has poisoned me :D

AdrianRicky 6. September 2008, 18:31

:irked:
what are u talking about?
:sherlock:

AdrianRicky 6. September 2008, 18:39

hi
denis..don't belived what they said..
Here...

we called it 'empal suwir' in indonesia..
hope you like..
:up:

flotsam22 7. September 2008, 09:09

Aaah my stomach, my head ooh I think I'm gonna die! :lol: just kiddin, it looks good, whats it made of.

flotsam22 7. September 2008, 09:18

Morteza, AdrianRicky,polarbee. I think u guys are great :cheers:
have some of my favourite dish
biryani and mutton korma. When u break ur fast.

Morteza7953 7. September 2008, 12:10

:lol:
that's very kind of you Denis :up:

AdrianRicky 7. September 2008, 19:21

Hi bro..are u there..? :worried:

Morteza7953 7. September 2008, 19:44

yep i'm here always where are you?

AdrianRicky 7. September 2008, 20:00

Been around brother..:up:
looking a new target to be kidnap!! :devil:
u see my companion?

Morteza7953 7. September 2008, 20:08

i have a kidnap plan too :devil: watch your nephew :devil:

AdrianRicky 7. September 2008, 20:13

:lol: :lol:
oke..oke..i'll give up..
i would targeting your family..:up:
'hot' babes are my priority now!
haha..

liquid snake 7. September 2008, 20:14

uff .... stop it !!! i am hungry ... so please dont say Biryani,Qorma,naan,kebab,tikka,kofta,murgh musallam......... or Tandoori Raan!!

Morteza7953 7. September 2008, 20:16

the only baby in my family is my nephew you can kidnap my grumbler grandma if you like :lol:

AdrianRicky 7. September 2008, 20:17

Bro..i got to go now..i will back in a few minutes..
i am going to have eat 'sahur'..for my fasting today..
see you..

AdrianRicky 7. September 2008, 20:20

AND WACTH YOUR GRANDMA!!
I BET SHE IS HOT BABE..:devil:
wuzz..

Morteza7953 7. September 2008, 20:22

@adrian ok see ya later
@liquidsnake you can join us in the party :up: just be a little carefull you might not feel healthy after eating adrian's food :lol:

Morteza7953 7. September 2008, 20:23

@adrian do you want to marry her :D she's soooooooooo cute :lol:

AdrianRicky 8. September 2008, 10:34

:irked:

flotsam22 8. September 2008, 16:17

Hey guys u know all, @polarbee the idk is called Idli dosa thanks to u all the partys on me have sum
:chef: :yuck: :yuck: :yuck: :yuck:
Denis :D:

flotsam22 9. September 2008, 14:48

rip rip rip rip rip rip this I learnt from my friends Morteza and my guru AdrianRicky and all u great guys :devil: no I like u guys so lets be pals have some biryani. :chef: :yuck: :faint: :angel:

flotsam22 12. September 2008, 10:40

19 more days of fasting then Id ul Fitr. Whose going to invite me ? I made 2 avatars 1 for Morteza and 1 for my Guru Adrian.
$500 each. :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

AdrianRicky 12. September 2008, 11:12

hi denis...
please don't call me guru'...coz' i am not!!
just call me Adrian or justin timberlake :whistle: :lol: :lol:
ok!
bye

AdrianRicky 12. September 2008, 11:13

hi denis...
please don't call me guru'...coz' i am not!!
just call me Adrian or justin timberlake :whistle: :lol: :lol:
ok!
bye

Morteza7953 12. September 2008, 11:41

i thought mine was $5000 :whistle: :lol:

AdrianRicky 12. September 2008, 15:31

hi bro..thank u for the info..i really do..
but hey :sst: don't tell anyone about it oke...!
:whistle: :cool:
i have good reputation in this place...u got it!
:whistle: :left: :right: :left: :up:

Morteza7953 12. September 2008, 18:24

ok it'll cost $1000 :devil:

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