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My Xmas Poem

A snowy day

The snow is falling,
The bells are ringing,
The childeren calling,
And angels singing.

The smiling faces,
Of old and young,
In different places,
Having much fun.

The children play,
Outside in the snow,
On this magical day,
Echoing Santa's ho ho.

What a wonderful time,
to be with your nearest,
to sit, laugh and dine,
and to be with your dearest.[/FONT]

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Comments

John ..... (Loku) lokutus-prime lokutus-prime Monday, December 26, 2005 11:30:01 AM

Dear fluffybunny,

Such an excellent poem smile It says it all -I empathise with the sentiments. It's great to see you writing poems. I am looking forward to reading more and more of them smile


Love & best wishes,
Loku

MarcusFXM256 Tuesday, December 27, 2005 6:47:47 AM

Fluffy,
This is a great poem that gives me good, warm feelings all over. I agree with Loku & would love to read more of your poems up .

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Marcus

мєℓMelli Tuesday, December 27, 2005 12:07:53 PM

Very nice and warm

Investor Tuesday, December 27, 2005 12:12:00 PM

Brilliant start ..... carry the structure through the whole poem, bring it home FB. You can do it.

The smiling faces
The young and old
The different places
And ..............

(young and fun doesn't rime ?)

I love it as it is, but that's not the point. wink

Sarah angel292005 Thursday, December 29, 2005 8:13:23 PM

All I can say is Awwwwwwww! Sweet!

Kay FourKayFour Sunday, January 1, 2006 5:19:06 AM

Wow! Fluffy, what a great poem! I loved it.

Thanks for sharing!

K4LovesTheFluffMaster

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