Rozaa

Bachpan..!!

Tuesday, October 30, 2007 10:41:05 AM

Bachpan ke dukh bhi kitne acche they,
tab to sirf khilone tuta karte they
wo khushiyan bhi na jane kaisi khushuyan thi
titli ke par noch kar uchla karte they
paaon maar kar kudte they baarish ke pani mein
apni naaw aap duboya karte they
ab to ek aansu bhi ruswa kar jati hai,
bachpan mein dil khol kar roya karte they...!!!!

love is all over.....wo ek-ek pal...

Comments

saher1989 # Tuesday, October 30, 2007 4:07:43 PM

goshhh!!!! beautiful!!!!Superb!!!
Fabolous!!! Excellen!!! Fantastic!!!

Haan Ek aisa din bhi hota tha hamara
Jab hum chote thae saara jahaan tha hamara
Kabhi ped pe chadh hamara aam ko todna
Har baarish mein khud hi ko bhigo dena
Sote hue Doston ko neend se jagaana
Unhe chuke dur bhaag aana aur chidhaana
Sadak pe ghumate chote moti ko ghar le aana
Maa ka daantana phir sko wapas chor aana
Khilone ki jid karna aur zameen pe lot jaana
Ro ro ke ghar sar pe utha apni saari zid manvana
Har ladki ko dekh muskarana aur dost ban jaana
Uska bhi basta uthana aur paas mein baith jaana
Apne saath Uska tiffin bhi khud hi khaa jaana
Uske haath ko thaam Dheere se i luv u bol jaana
Haan Ek aisa din bhi hota tha hamara
Jab hum chote thae saara jahaan tha hamara!!!!

oh!!! THOSE CHILDHOOD DAYS!!!!
i miss them a lot!!!

it's a very very very very....beautiful poem!!!
hmmmmm!!!! i also love it very much!!! thanks Sana bhai jaan to convey this
sweet poem to Rajani and thanks Rajani to share it here!!!

Unregistered user # Wednesday, October 31, 2007 2:59:26 AM

trang writes: hey!!this poem turn me on...oh! those child daysss... ..i missing my child days..!:cry:

akshayakshayraj # Friday, November 2, 2007 4:52:01 AM

kasam se! very nice.beautiful poem
i like it very much

Viet Ducngvietduc # Friday, November 2, 2007 5:24:40 AM

I don't know your language. But the comments show me that it's a nice poem!!!

Rozaa # Sunday, November 4, 2007 8:45:26 AM

wahw-wah!! its a very nice poem too Saher.yup!its really a very nice poem!i love it:)
and thanks to Akshayraj too and Owen,thank you:D
its my pleasure that you all like it,