"To get the full value of 'JOY'

U must have someone to divide it with."

wo ek-ek pal...



wo ek ek pal
jo bitayen they humne saath-saath
wo hasna-rona,wo ruthna-manana
wo jhagrna baat-be-baat
aur wo khatm hona jhagre ka
palak jhapkne ke saath...
bas gaya hai meri aankhon mein
tah-dar-tah bicha diyen hain dil pe
yaadon ne apni gahri parten

yaad aati hai tumhari wo bachkani baaten
jin par has deti thi main
khilkhila kar,
aur wo masum-si hasi tumhari
jo barbas hin mazboor kar deti thi
muskurane ke liye...
wo kahe-ankahe shabdon mein
jatana tumhare pyar
aur phir
saadgi bahre andaz mein kah dena
dil ki baat...

wo roothna mera choti-moti baaton par
aur wo manana tumhara,
aur kahna pyar se
"AB MAAN BHI JAO,MUSKURA BHI DO..."
yaad aati hai aur
is kadar chaa jati hai mujh par,jaise
meeta chuki ho mera apna vajud,
bas tum hin tum,
har taraf,har disha...

yaad aate hain wo din,
jab hum milte hin muskura dete they
aur poochte they haal-e-zindagi,
wo samjhana tumhara
aur himmat dena mujhe
jab bikhar chuki thi main
khud mein simat kar...
wo saath dena tumhara
mere har us pal mein
jab maine tumhe doondha tha,
wo girana mere aansu
apni aankhon se
aur
sajana apni masum se bhi jayada masum hasi
mere hothon pe...

...yaad aati hai aur thaam kar mera haath
le jati hai
atit ke ghane junglon mein
jahan se loutna phir
namumkin-sa malum hota hai
lekin halki si aahat par hin
bikhar jate hain yaadon ke khajane...

pighal kar aankh se
chalak jata hai
ek aur moti
aur
ek hin pal mein khatm ho jata hai
zindagi ka sabse khubshurat dour

mere dost,lout aao..
meri andheri shaamon ko roshan kar do
phir ek baar
mere akelepan ko meeta do,
ek baar phir mujhe kho jane do...
udaasi nahi,
muskurahton ki duniyan mein,
khushiyon ki duniyan mein
paar karne do mujhe dil ki dahlij,
aur thaam kar mera haath
phir le chalo apni duniyan mein

ya phir lout aao,
phir ek baar
khamosh aur viran ho chuki
meri zindagi mein
aur gar nahi kar sakte in khwahison ko sach
to...
..thaam kar mera haath
le chalo mujhe
zindagi ke aakhiri chor par

aur kho jane do mujhe...
...aasma se aage!!!
written by-- meeee

Bachpan..!!«╬♥∞o°.....ÐÅяk ÅñǤÊŁ....«╬♥∞o°

Comments

Mainjailtrap Thursday, November 8, 2007 3:20:34 AM

Very nice poem.... a best gift to a best friend...
Have happy diwali...

Rozaa Thursday, November 8, 2007 3:38:46 AM

yup! thanks Prit:)

HaPpY DiWaLi to you too.

saher1989 Friday, November 9, 2007 2:17:56 AM

you right Prit.a best gift to a best friend!up
i like it:)

but what is this,friend???SANA,SANA,SANA....allwhere only Sana....aren't we your friend??
confused
you has created 3 blogs and 1 photo album for him but nothing for us:awww:

well happy diwali to you all:D

PuruPorus Friday, November 9, 2007 10:29:31 AM

Nice poem .....I'm too is in need of such friend.
p
you've lost your friend but I am till alone.I need really such friend like yours.

p
This Diwali may offer you back your lost friend !
Happy Diwali !

Mainjailtrap Saturday, November 10, 2007 6:09:41 AM

I am really feeling the pain that comes when somebody to whome we love much go away...
I can understand you feelings, just be positive...
One day sana will be back for you...Have a good day..

Rozaa Saturday, November 10, 2007 6:24:54 AM

Yeah!thanks for your wishes.smile i hope too,he will back to me one day.but Prit,i have a question,if i'm not wrong then,you was so happy last day,i guessed it from your message so today....anything happened wrong? Someone whom we love most,if left us....then yup...it's too painfull.take care.

Mainjailtrap Saturday, November 10, 2007 1:02:46 PM

What will you do when you wait for someone special to come to you and suddenly you come to know he/she didnt love you ever.. As i told you before in Pm she is coming to me...And we had a brokeup..
Yaa its all over now.. The past was just a fake and present is nightmare now.. Btw take care hope same will not happen to you. Greetings for you...

Rozaa Friday, November 16, 2007 9:34:23 PM

Prit,maybe i am not able to understand your pain because anything like this,never happened with me.but then also,if there is anything that i can do for you,then please tell me,i will try my best.
this is life,its not necessary that always waht we want,come true..so try to understand and live it happily.heart

Mainjailtrap Saturday, November 17, 2007 10:08:34 AM

smile thanks rozza

Rajni Tuesday, November 20, 2007 6:29:40 AM

have you written this??it's very nice poem dear:)
i am praying for Sana's arrival.may he back as soon as possible!


take care friend.
and it up:up: i love your writings

Rozaa Tuesday, November 20, 2007 1:06:55 PM

yeah!it's my own poem.i written this for...no need to tell...everybody knows here..hai na??

thank you:D

Mainjailtrap Friday, November 23, 2007 12:38:09 PM

How are you my dear friend..
Just came to say you good night..Have a great weekend..

Rozaa Friday, November 23, 2007 12:42:38 PM

saying good night in blog's comment!!bigeyes
ok,as your wish!

good night,Ptit!smile

Mainjailtrap Friday, November 23, 2007 12:50:18 PM

Yaa thats my style..Foolish but you can understand..Just increasing your no. Of comments lol

Rozaa Friday, November 23, 2007 12:54:44 PM

O o O o!!! nice style! we added three comments here with no mean! good joke!

Mainjailtrap Friday, November 23, 2007 1:00:05 PM

lol 4th one..

Rozaa Friday, November 23, 2007 1:02:10 PM

oh!! its enough!! please stop it!

Mainjailtrap Friday, November 23, 2007 1:04:09 PM

Now meaning full lines...
You will meet more beautiful people in your life but let me tell you one thing,find the person with beautiful mind cause the beautifut mind will remain with you till death,not beautiful body. p

Rozaa Friday, November 23, 2007 1:20:30 PM

yeah!! you right my friend.
we dont should to go on anybody's looks.
main thing is heart and thinking!

saher1989 Saturday, November 24, 2007 11:44:45 AM

hahaha!!! 8 comments in one day!!! very nice!bigsmile

well you both are right! we never should to go on anybody's look.

CHEHRA KYA DEKHTE HO,
DIL MEIN UTAR KAR DEKHO!!p

RashmRASHM Tuesday, November 27, 2007 4:51:57 AM

hey janu,it's a Fabolous poem! you are a nice poetess:D

well i heard about sana from preety.i am really sorry dear,but still it's a bit hard to believe what happed with you and sana.
i wish i could do something for you both.
please try to stop this fight.you both need each other's friendship.
i know,i type of conflict is always going on in your mind,but please don't let him go.afterall he is your best friend.
try to make him understand too your feelings.otherwise you both will loose a very important person in your life.

have a good day!

Shafia.

Rozaa Tuesday, November 27, 2007 5:05:45 AM

how you dare to call me janu here!!furious
don't call me by this word here again.got it?stupid!
and yeah! when you met Preety? she didn't tell me.
confused

well i'm trying mah best to stop him,no need to tell.but then also.thanks for your opinion.
thanks.
keep smiling!

RashmRASHM Monday, December 17, 2007 12:01:50 AM

i am sorry.

take care please.

Rozaa Wednesday, January 9, 2008 11:24:21 PM

thanks everyone for your prayers and wishes.
Sana is beck!!

Ankur Srivastavasmart_ankur Saturday, January 12, 2008 10:02:23 AM

ur this poem remind me about my one childhood friend who has lost somewhere.she has shifted to next area that i don know.I HOPE i meet her someday. its so nice poem. i like it

akshayakshayraj Monday, January 28, 2008 3:48:20 PM

please reply me!

Surendra singh naharwalpushpendra2008 Saturday, February 2, 2008 11:39:48 AM

Hi rozaa.
Actually today i read ur sweet poem. Its really a great poem, u cant believe yar, when i listen this to my angry but sweet frnd, actually she want to break my frndship but after this she is my best no bestest frnd now. Thanks rozaa, thanks a lot.
I think u r a very special girl"actually for me" and a good frnd also, i wish to meet u one time.
Hav a enjoyful evning

Rozaa Tuesday, February 5, 2008 10:26:18 AM

@ Ankur: thanks Ankur for your praise.
i wish you meet your lost friend as soon as possible.best of luck!

Rozaa Tuesday, February 5, 2008 10:31:13 AM

@ pushpendra:it's my pleasure that your friendship has been saved coz of my this poem.bigsmile

i wosh may your firendship go so long.
same to you.have a nice evening heart

saher1989 Monday, February 18, 2008 12:17:53 PM

hey roza,kya baat hai? sabhi blogs(not sabhi but generally i mean) FRIENDS ONLY kyun kar liyen? hmmm kis se hide kiye ja rahe hain,janab?

saher1989 Monday, March 3, 2008 9:05:54 PM

what is this dear? whats happening there?
you seems very changed.please write to me,whats wrong there?
you can't leave your friends.please don't do it,please.

NiTiN Jadhavnitinjadhav Friday, March 20, 2009 8:34:08 AM

nice poem......!!!!!
KEep going

TinaTinaGill Sunday, April 5, 2009 4:29:37 PM

beautiful poem up

Lucas LVL LVDL Wednesday, March 9, 2011 10:27:48 PM

Indeed the poem is beautifull. What would it be in english? I know it is very difficult to translate a poem. But even so it looks good. As once a friend from india told that there are so many languages in india, would you care to tell me in what language it is actually written? That i donot speak or write chinese yet, well i have an excuse that i an very bad in accents and i am trying to learn pinyin, that is phonetic chinese transcription of the original characters.
i really like this both in my.opera as well in the browser that it is made easy to directly select a part of the web to go to.
http://www.worldtimezone.com/time/

Abrar GulshanAbrar-gulshan Saturday, October 15, 2011 10:51:30 AM

http://files.myopera.com/Abrar%20gulshan/blog/mssyou-101.jpg -
Mian dekhti rahi
Apni khirki se pura chand
Chandani ko sath liye
Jese jahank raha ho
Mere kamre main,
Main gate se baher
Gali se guzrti garian
Har aik ko dekhti
Sochti yeh ruke gi
Ab horn ki aawaz aaye gi
Aane do unhain
Main nehin bolo gi khud se kehti........
Ap nehi lekin
Thandi hawa ke jhunke
mujh ko chhoote huwe
Kamre main hote rehe dakhil.....
Dheere dheere gariyan kam hui
Mere intazar ki shama bhi madham hui
Chandani bhi kamra chhor ke chali gai
Chand bhi agle Safar pe chal diya
Phir…….
Phir subo ka Tara jalwagar huwa
Deep meri chahat ke bujhne lage
Aur main rote rote
Apne bistar se
Armanoo ki kaliyan chunti rahi
Ik ik lamhain main
Hazar motain dekhin
Mere jazboo ne
Latak rahi thi intazar ki sooli pe
Meri khuwahishoo ki barhana lashain
Kitne khayaloo ki aahatain
Darati rahi raat bhar
Khairiyat to hai
Phon bhi nehain kia
Yaaaa……
Ya kisi aur zulf-e-haseena------
Is aahat pe to kanp uth'ti
AB AAYE HO...
TO KYA KAHOO...
KYA PUCHHOO …
KUCH NEHI……
"BAS ITNA BTA DO"(JUST TEL)
KE AAP
KAL RAAT KAHAN THEY…?


By; Abrar Gulshan
http://my.opera.com/Abrar%20gulshan/blog/2011/08/20/bas-itna-bata-do-just-tel

Harash Mahajanharashmahajan Monday, October 31, 2011 7:29:50 AM

abrar gulshan ji adaab...iss behtareen nazm ke liye daad wasool paaiyega....bahoot hi oomda peshkash hai aapki....aap achhe funn ke maalik haiN...aapke emotions vediography ki tarah shabd dar shabd saath sath chalte dikhaayii diye ....waqt mila to aapki our bhi rachnaayeiN aage bhi rubaroo padte raheNge....umeed hai aapki kalam isi tarah apne haraf bikherti rahegii.....
umeed ye bhi karte haiN ke apki ye yaaraan-e-bazm isi tarah sajti rahegi....

shukriyaa

Harash Mahajan

Abrar GulshanAbrar-gulshan Wednesday, November 2, 2011 6:19:31 PM

bohot shukriya Harsha,,, aki baatoon se lga k.....

bohot log miley mujh ko meri shaayri parhney waley
jo kho gaya ho shabtoo main bas Harsha ko dekh hai..

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