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Spun Silk

Wednesday, 6. May 2009, 08:54:18

Stuck forever in this place
Nothing's ever what it seems
Never peaceful, never safe
Demons haunt you in your dreams
Blood and bile are all you taste
Throat so tight you barely breathe
All you see is lain to waste
In this tangled life we weave

Unnamed creature takes its flight
Rousing death within its wake
Circling all in ever night
Scouring land for soul to take
In a world where nothing's right
Defiance muffled, silenced cries
No-one has the will to fight
Trapped in knotted web of lies

Misting everything I see
Ever cutting through the cloud
Bleeding, screeching over me
Quiet whispers scream so loud
Tainting all that there could be
Blackens heart with fear and rage
It won't ever let me free
Always prisoner in this cage..

Copyright Kimmie 2009.

Random CrapCause I Was In A Silly Mood

Comments

Carol 6. May 2009, 09:29

Truely amazing.
x

Kitty 6. May 2009, 19:29

You are so good with words! The graphic descriptions are spot on.

*nods acknowledging* :up:

Kimmie 6. May 2009, 21:35

Thanks girlies.. Though I pored over it for ages, as usual I didn't get the words out quite the way I wanted awww . I got another creative block :mad: . *shrugs* :heart:

Carol 6. May 2009, 23:35

Ahem, if that's what you call creative block I can not imagine what words would you want if you didn't have it.
The words are perfect the way it is.
:heart:

Carol 6. May 2009, 23:35

p.s. You are welcome.

Kimmie 6. May 2009, 23:44

The idea in my head was far better than the end product, though. It's fine as is, however. Good enough for now :D

Carol 6. May 2009, 23:46

I know what you mean, the words and feelings are different in my head than when I write a poem.
:D

Kimmie 6. May 2009, 23:52

Annoying, isn't it? :lol:

Carol 6. May 2009, 23:52

Yes, very. :lol:

Cois 7. May 2009, 01:15

You knows me loves your poetry! :D fucking cool.. Could only be bettered with a sketch of some sort but then again it'll draw the readers attention more to it than the writing..
Ok i'll shuttup now :zip:

r♡se 7. May 2009, 09:19

A little creepy, but definitely cool poem :D.
I like the title too. Is it referring to a cocoon?

Kimmie 7. May 2009, 10:39

Carol - :D .

Clint - Thanks dude. Still coulda worded it better, but... You know how it is. My sketching has been terrible of late, as well, though :lol: .

Rosie - thankies. And yes :happy: ! You so smart *licks forehead*

Carol 7. May 2009, 11:27

Hi Kimmie :D

Cois 7. May 2009, 20:12

Sketch sketch! Sketch!! :D

Kimmie 7. May 2009, 20:47

No no! No!! p:

Jen 7. May 2009, 23:30

I love darker stuff. :up: Very vivid. I love it when words breathe. :heart:

Kimmie 7. May 2009, 23:32

Thanks Jen :smile:

Jen 8. May 2009, 00:09

:wink:

Marike 8. May 2009, 14:33

:up: great poem..

Cois 8. May 2009, 19:25

Women.. p: ok fine.. No sketch.. Followup! :D

Kimmie 8. May 2009, 19:52

Thanks Marike :smile: .

Followup, Clint? :confused:

Cois 9. May 2009, 09:05

Followup poem p:

Kimmie 9. May 2009, 09:08

:lol: you write one :rolleyes:

Cois 9. May 2009, 09:39

You're just chicken you can't :sherlock:

Kimmie 9. May 2009, 09:46

That ain't gonna make me do it, ya fucktard :lol:

Cois 9. May 2009, 10:16

Bratfink bint! :lol:

Kimmie 9. May 2009, 10:17

Bumblesquat :irked:

Cois 9. May 2009, 10:25

Ok now you're just making stuff up :whistle:

Kimmie 9. May 2009, 10:31

It's a word. *nods*

Cois 9. May 2009, 11:50



Kimmie 9. May 2009, 12:04

Okaaaay...

Cois 9. May 2009, 12:40

It's meant for you :D :lol: that's how you get your words!

Kimmie 9. May 2009, 14:27

If you say so, Random Boy p:

Cois 10. May 2009, 08:50

And people say i'm predictable phjeeez! p:

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