Purple Realm

Spun Silk

Stuck forever in this place
Nothing's ever what it seems
Never peaceful, never safe
Demons haunt you in your dreams
Blood and bile are all you taste
Throat so tight you barely breathe
All you see is lain to waste
In this tangled life we weave

Unnamed creature takes its flight
Rousing death within its wake
Circling all in ever night
Scouring land for soul to take
In a world where nothing's right
Defiance muffled, silenced cries
No-one has the will to fight
Trapped in knotted web of lies

Misting everything I see
Ever cutting through the cloud
Bleeding, screeching over me
Quiet whispers scream so loud
Tainting all that there could be
Blackens heart with fear and rage
It won't ever let me free
Always prisoner in this cage..

Copyright Kimmie 2009.

Random CrapCause I Was In A Silly Mood

Comments

Dacotah Wednesday, May 6, 2009 9:29:17 AM

Truely amazing.
x

KittyliciousZaphira Wednesday, May 6, 2009 7:29:32 PM

You are so good with words! The graphic descriptions are spot on.

*nods acknowledging* up

Spaggyj Wednesday, May 6, 2009 9:35:10 PM

Thanks girlies.. Though I pored over it for ages, as usual I didn't get the words out quite the way I wanted awww . I got another creative block mad . *shrugs* heart

Dacotah Wednesday, May 6, 2009 11:35:10 PM

Ahem, if that's what you call creative block I can not imagine what words would you want if you didn't have it.
The words are perfect the way it is.
heart

Dacotah Wednesday, May 6, 2009 11:35:27 PM

p.s. You are welcome.

Spaggyj Wednesday, May 6, 2009 11:44:41 PM

The idea in my head was far better than the end product, though. It's fine as is, however. Good enough for now bigsmile

Dacotah Wednesday, May 6, 2009 11:46:57 PM

I know what you mean, the words and feelings are different in my head than when I write a poem.
bigsmile

Spaggyj Wednesday, May 6, 2009 11:52:16 PM

Annoying, isn't it? lol

Dacotah Wednesday, May 6, 2009 11:52:54 PM

Yes, very. lol

Bad WolfCois Thursday, May 7, 2009 1:15:16 AM

You knows me loves your poetry! bigsmile fucking cool.. Could only be bettered with a sketch of some sort but then again it'll draw the readers attention more to it than the writing..
Ok i'll shuttup now zip

r♡serose-marie Thursday, May 7, 2009 9:19:19 AM

A little creepy, but definitely cool poem bigsmile.
I like the title too. Is it referring to a cocoon?

Spaggyj Thursday, May 7, 2009 10:39:18 AM

Carol - bigsmile .

Clint - Thanks dude. Still coulda worded it better, but... You know how it is. My sketching has been terrible of late, as well, though lol .

Rosie - thankies. And yes happy ! You so smart *licks forehead*

Dacotah Thursday, May 7, 2009 11:27:56 AM

Hi Kimmie bigsmile

Bad WolfCois Thursday, May 7, 2009 8:12:53 PM

Sketch sketch! Sketch!! bigsmile

Spaggyj Thursday, May 7, 2009 8:47:40 PM

No no! No!! p

JenJavaen Thursday, May 7, 2009 11:30:33 PM

I love darker stuff. up Very vivid. I love it when words breathe. heart

Spaggyj Thursday, May 7, 2009 11:32:31 PM

Thanks Jen smile

JenJavaen Friday, May 8, 2009 12:09:56 AM

wink

MarikeMarike79 Friday, May 8, 2009 2:33:21 PM

up great poem..

Bad WolfCois Friday, May 8, 2009 7:25:35 PM

Women.. p ok fine.. No sketch.. Followup! bigsmile

Spaggyj Friday, May 8, 2009 7:52:16 PM

Thanks Marike smile .

Followup, Clint? confused

Bad WolfCois Saturday, May 9, 2009 9:05:24 AM

Followup poem p

Spaggyj Saturday, May 9, 2009 9:08:55 AM

lol you write one rolleyes

Bad WolfCois Saturday, May 9, 2009 9:39:36 AM

You're just chicken you can't sherlock

Spaggyj Saturday, May 9, 2009 9:46:54 AM

That ain't gonna make me do it, ya fucktard lol

Bad WolfCois Saturday, May 9, 2009 10:16:31 AM

Bratfink bint! lol

Spaggyj Saturday, May 9, 2009 10:17:26 AM

Bumblesquat irked

Bad WolfCois Saturday, May 9, 2009 10:25:19 AM

Ok now you're just making stuff up whistle

Spaggyj Saturday, May 9, 2009 10:31:20 AM

It's a word. *nods*

Bad WolfCois Saturday, May 9, 2009 11:50:09 AM



Spaggyj Saturday, May 9, 2009 12:04:37 PM

Okaaaay...

Bad WolfCois Saturday, May 9, 2009 12:40:29 PM

It's meant for you bigsmile lol that's how you get your words!

Spaggyj Saturday, May 9, 2009 2:27:34 PM

If you say so, Random Boy p

Bad WolfCois Sunday, May 10, 2009 8:50:42 AM

And people say i'm predictable phjeeez! p

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