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When I Love You the Most

It’s been said to me
I only love you when I drink
That was strong words to hear
That really made me think

What is it that I do
To make you feel this way
Is it because of something I did
Or something I didn’t Say

You know I’m only serious
When it’s something I hold dear
I’ve been known to be unable to control it
Sometimes to the point it brings me to tears

No matter what I’m happy
And grateful for all I own
And you know it’s because of you
And the love and patience you’ve shown

I truly seriously believe
Actions speaks louder than words
So if I don’t say how I feel
I try to make sure my actions can be heard

I’ve never told you no
And I’ve always took your side
I’ve always believed in you
And appreciate how hard you try

But no matter how good I may have been to you
You’ve been even better to me
You given me more than any woman could
And I’m as proud as any man could be

You gave me beautiful children
And accepted “Whats mine as Yours”
And made my house a home
And became a wife any man could adore

You’re always helping others
Always doing more than your share
And too often you’re overlooked
Like there's only a few that really care

Well I apologize to you now
If ever I made you feel unloved
If I ever made you feel unappreciated
Or for all the bad habits I’m guilty of

The truth is I LOVE YOU
More now than ever before
When I feel it could get no stronger
You give me reason to love you even more

Even when you’re mad at me
Or when PMS is giving you a dose
when you can’t seem to decide what to wear
That’s when I Love You the Most!

To: Candy Marcel 12/1/2009

My Nights in the GulfSAINTS WIN SUPERBOWL XLIV

Comments

Anodynetherealanodyne Tuesday, December 15, 2009 1:08:30 PM

Hey poet, you're back.
Nice to read a new poem from you.
Nothing is more beautiful than telling one's love in a poem.

As always I wish you peace
and the love you already have got,
Anodyne

P.S.
Just a small hint: In the ninth chapter (or is it couplet ?) you wrote "Like theirs only a few that really care"
Suppose that is a slip of the pen and should be "there's"...

JimmySpeedtip Tuesday, December 15, 2009 1:15:53 PM

You're correct, slip of the pen, so to speak. rolleyes

Thank you for your kind words and
May you have a Very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

Anodynetherealanodyne Tuesday, December 15, 2009 1:28:14 PM

Thanks, I don't celebrate christmas but I appreciate your wishes and will have a happy new year, hopefully, so, same to you.

Anodyne

Pushimsocool Tuesday, December 15, 2009 1:42:38 PM

Merry Christmas to you...Nice to read ur poems...Keep Writing...smile

JimmySpeedtip Tuesday, December 15, 2009 5:15:44 PM

Best Wishes for the Holiday Season to You too!

Pushimsocool Sunday, December 27, 2009 6:13:36 AM

Happy New Year !!! smile

Greg N. Savillegnsaville Saturday, March 5, 2011 1:20:27 AM

Real good write!!!

JimmySpeedtip Saturday, March 5, 2011 9:06:18 PM

Thanks Greg, I enjoyed your writing as well.

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