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ON THAT RUSTY GATE

Tuesday, 9. October 2007, 10:09:28

On that rusty gate
is where i decided my fate
Chocking with disgust and hate
i had to think and contemplate

You welcomed me with open palms,
then tortured me, with those same arms
like a flower, you ripped out my petals
like a thuggery, your actions almost fatal

For heaven's sake,
i am your niece
always on my knees
Crying "Uncle, No please!"

But not today,
As i run away,
Looking back on that rusty gate
I have to liberate,
The little i have left.

i wish i could write poems but in the mean time, i'll subject you to this.poem

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My God u wrote this u deserve a hug i mean a congrats. By the way why dont u post more. I think i like it.

By Aplorete, # 19. March 2008, 18:00:32

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who is this? am guessing liptooth or mnsbill?am i right?

By Tandy12, # 1. April 2008, 08:03:04

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