Angel of Death {Improved}
Thursday, April 15, 2010 7:49:33 PM
OK Guys im back!!! Im srry i qot lazy and quited on the story but ihave a new story plot ihope this wuld be better than the first one ihad made.
CHAPTER 1
*Click Clack. A women walking down a dark corridor hears footsteps. She stops to see if they are coming any closer, but they stop as she turns and looks back at the dark hall. She had sworn she had heard something or maybe it was just her imagination. Maybe a hallucination caused by the bloody clan war that has just finished. Her family took part in it and many had died. “Who is there?” she asked the great darkness that had surrounded her as she made it to her destination. She felt a small blast of wind surround the right side of her and before she can gasp, she was laying in a pool of blood.
“Aww man!” Karinai complained. “I don’t wanna take place in a tournament” She walked outside and sat next to the old tree in her back yard.
Her mother sat down right next to her. “You have to participate. If you win, we will win a lot of money and we will gain royalty.”
“Don’t we already have enough royalty?” Karinai asked. “We are the strongest clan in our village and we are part of the royal family. Well whatever, I’ll join the tournament but I’m not even a ninja yet.”
“Why do you think you were put in ninja academy? Your brothers passed by training day and night.”
“Yea, that’s how I passed sis”, her older brother Akara had said. “ I’m a jonin now and the missions get harder and harder.” He closed his eyes and muttered something under his breath.
“ You have to go on a new mission huh?” his mother asked him.
“Yeah. Well ill c’ya later sis, have fun,” Akara smiled and waved as he got sucked into a lightning ball. He appeared inside of a dark corridor. He landed in the middle of a blood puddle and a dead women was surrounded by several people from Akara’s village. They were all friends and grew up with each other.
“Akara my man,” his best friend Rhasuno said while studying the dead body.
CHAPTER 1
*Click Clack. A women walking down a dark corridor hears footsteps. She stops to see if they are coming any closer, but they stop as she turns and looks back at the dark hall. She had sworn she had heard something or maybe it was just her imagination. Maybe a hallucination caused by the bloody clan war that has just finished. Her family took part in it and many had died. “Who is there?” she asked the great darkness that had surrounded her as she made it to her destination. She felt a small blast of wind surround the right side of her and before she can gasp, she was laying in a pool of blood.
“Aww man!” Karinai complained. “I don’t wanna take place in a tournament” She walked outside and sat next to the old tree in her back yard.
Her mother sat down right next to her. “You have to participate. If you win, we will win a lot of money and we will gain royalty.”
“Don’t we already have enough royalty?” Karinai asked. “We are the strongest clan in our village and we are part of the royal family. Well whatever, I’ll join the tournament but I’m not even a ninja yet.”
“Why do you think you were put in ninja academy? Your brothers passed by training day and night.”
“Yea, that’s how I passed sis”, her older brother Akara had said. “ I’m a jonin now and the missions get harder and harder.” He closed his eyes and muttered something under his breath.
“ You have to go on a new mission huh?” his mother asked him.
“Yeah. Well ill c’ya later sis, have fun,” Akara smiled and waved as he got sucked into a lightning ball. He appeared inside of a dark corridor. He landed in the middle of a blood puddle and a dead women was surrounded by several people from Akara’s village. They were all friends and grew up with each other.
“Akara my man,” his best friend Rhasuno said while studying the dead body.













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