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Another poem lol

I want to be unique,
yet I want to be accepted,
I want to be myself,
but somehow perfected,
I want to like who I am,
yet I still want to change,
I want to be popular,
but keep my “strange”,
I want to get good grades,
yet I want to be cool,
I want to look stunning,
but not taken for a fool,
I don’t want to want,
Though I may still dream,
Now do you see the real me?
I’m not as confident as I seem.


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Comments

night wolf 6. January 2008, 00:25

:eyes: That`s a good one !! :up:

Just Eloise 6. January 2008, 12:54

:D Thank you! :D

Leonore 6. January 2008, 22:07

Indeed, a very well expressed poem. ^__^ To be optimistic, I think that confidence can be gained just by experiencing more in the life, and eventually becoming more and more comfortable with yourself. We'll get there someday! :smile:

P.S. I think getting good grades would be super-cool.. >__>'' p:

Encee 7. January 2008, 03:12

I liked it and need to tell you so.
Remembering that it has been a long time since I last sent anything, I wish to offer an explanation...
My hard drive failed and I bought a new computer which meant I had a lot of things to restore from a cache of thumbdrives. Now everything is working again, and better.

So, I like your compositions..all of them. Keep up the good work. ENCEE

Just Eloise 7. January 2008, 19:44

To Shinjitsu: :D Thanks,

This is definately not my most optomistic poem lol

(and I think getting good grades is cool too, but many people in my class don't agree with that)


To ENCEE: :D Thanks

Don't worry about not commenting, I am sorry that I havent either :smile:

And I will try to keep it up lol ^_^

Encee 13. January 2008, 14:53

OKAY!
Torchwood rocks!
Encee

ToadMountainSage 28. February 2008, 18:43

:yes: Nice poem!Good work! check my poem out on my blog and tell me what u think

Just Eloise 28. February 2008, 18:51

Thanks :D

I'll have a look now :up:

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