Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind...

....?

Wednesday, October 8, 2008 9:13:28 PM

OMFG NEW POST!!

Just a poem I wrote. I feel I rushed writing it so don't be suprised if it's crappy ok? lol

Mirrored:
An echo I cannot read
My superficial being warped and stretched.
A twisted imitation
Staring at me with stolen eyes;
Challenging my identity
With voiceless lips.
My imperfections
Like a raging infection
Blemishing this blank canvas.
A counterfeit earth
Hidden through portals like shards of glass,
Shattered and scattered,
Splintering the flesh of the world;
With imitation poise.
Menacing reflections
From all directions
Clones leering with my own smile.
But I am the first.
The original.
The product of imagination.
No mirror can take that away from me.

Teenage wonderingsNightmare Revisited

Comments

night wolf Saturday, October 11, 2008 6:10:09 PM

Hell YEAH !! headbang ,Killer new look you got up you da girl!cool

pssst don`t hide your amazing eyes! rolleyes

LeonoreShinjitsu_13 Saturday, October 11, 2008 9:12:36 PM

Very well done. You are an excellent mind. smile I wasn't expecting the optimistic light at the end, but I liked it!

Just EloiseTorchwood rocks! Sunday, October 12, 2008 12:52:18 PM

bigsmile Thanks both of you!

Space CowboyMr-Brightside Sunday, October 12, 2008 1:16:56 PM

Whoa, good work.

Finally, a face to go with the name yes

night wolf Sunday, October 12, 2008 6:26:53 PM

yow torch! wanna be a Night wolf gang member? A.K.A Amir`s Angels ? whistle

Just EloiseTorchwood rocks! Monday, October 13, 2008 5:06:33 PM

dan: Thanks bigsmile It turned out better than I expected anyway!

yes Hope it suits! XD

Amir: sure! But no mini skirts ok? How about a ninja outfit? bigsmile


night wolf Monday, October 13, 2008 5:15:24 PM

i have drawn all my Angels faces ,so i would be needing your face so are you willing to give me a picture?...you can send it to my Opera mail smile

mini skirts!! lol no sister i wont do that love You as being the youngest gang member, are Amirs gang sister, so Ninja it well be wizard welcome abored sis yes heart

Just EloiseTorchwood rocks! Monday, October 13, 2008 6:22:15 PM

bigsmile Awesome! lol Sorry for having to specify that, it's just people have forgotten my age before, I know someone saw a picture of my mum and thought it was me! so I thought i better say it just in case XD

ummm, can't really send pics, cause you never know who could hack in to your account (yes, i'm extremely paranoid when it comes to internet safety lol) but i can tell you that I have no fringe, ans my eyes are a grey/blue bigsmile

night wolf Thursday, October 16, 2008 6:38:06 AM

Aint to lefty alike is gonna forget your age up we Rock lol

It`s amazing how your cerfull about your picture smile i admire that in you up youm mom did an Amazing work by raising you up so ThanX Torche`s mom happy

O.K ...since your going to be a ninja i well hide your face lol so no face needed lol i didnt think of that when i asked for your picture lol

YOU ARE! "Angel Eloise,the ninja of the dark shadows in the woods up

i well inform you of your sketch as soon as i can, Angel sis Eloise up

Just EloiseTorchwood rocks! Thursday, October 16, 2008 2:21:24 PM

yes

Yeah I love my parents, they are awesome bigsmile

XD good idea! Yey!! I like my character already up

night wolf Thursday, October 16, 2008 7:46:27 PM

I well post about you membership soon up yes headbang heart

Angelikiellinidata Thursday, October 16, 2008 7:53:50 PM

he just did!! lol


welcome aboard Angel Eloise yes

night wolf Thursday, October 16, 2008 7:57:06 PM

yes heart

let me introduce you Angel Eloise,to Angel Angeliki the wise smile yes

Casey²dragonharrower Thursday, October 16, 2008 8:08:49 PM

Welcome to the gang! yes

night wolf Thursday, October 16, 2008 8:15:47 PM

Here is Angel Lady Casey dragon yes she is as old as i am "22" lol

Angelikiellinidata Thursday, October 16, 2008 8:16:00 PM

lol

who believes Amir every time he says he has his Bday!!!! lol + heart

night wolf Thursday, October 16, 2008 8:18:18 PM

rolleyes lol

Casey²dragonharrower Thursday, October 16, 2008 8:40:02 PM

lol Nice one Angeliki!

Angelikiellinidata Thursday, October 16, 2008 9:04:35 PM

lol

*hugs*

Just EloiseTorchwood rocks! Friday, October 17, 2008 2:27:41 PM

Hello everyone!! bigsmile I am very proud to be a new angel!angel lol

Angelikiellinidata Friday, October 17, 2008 3:11:41 PM

and we are proud to have you aboard!!! yes

Just EloiseTorchwood rocks! Friday, October 17, 2008 4:32:08 PM

yes Yey!! Thank you, i hope I do well p

Just EloiseTorchwood rocks! Friday, October 17, 2008 6:59:10 PM

heart bigsmile

night wolf Friday, October 17, 2008 7:03:42 PM

headbang heart O.K sis Angel torch, now that you have approved your sketch,it`s time to make the final touches and paint/fix the sketch up up ...one thing...what color is your hear bigsmile

Just EloiseTorchwood rocks! Friday, October 17, 2008 7:08:58 PM

a medium sorta brown, like chestnut bigsmile yes

night wolf Friday, October 17, 2008 7:15:56 PM

doh that`s gonna be hard !! lol bigsmile O.K got it headbang ThanX yes
now all YOU gotta do is wait a few days lol

Just EloiseTorchwood rocks! Friday, October 17, 2008 7:18:01 PM

XD awh, but I want it now p

night wolf Friday, October 17, 2008 7:21:44 PM

Yow Angel sis, good comes to those who wait p

Write a comment

New comments have been disabled for this post.

June 2012
S M T W T F S
May 2012July 2012
1 2
3 4 5 6 7 8 9
10 11 12 13 14 15 16
17 18 19 20 21 22 23
24 25 26 27 28 29 30