Rhythm Attack

Lets improve our rhyme & rap skills, by dropin' sum "hot or not" freestyles here, it can be 3 or 6 lines, it doesn't matter so long as it stings, u can even aim shots at others (make jokes on 'em) nobody is goin' 2 get mad right?.....lol
The interestin' part is that u get or give scores(vote) lyk
When ur rhyme is 'wack' u get d 'buzz' EX->@freshkid *buzz* down
When ur rhyme is 'hot' u get d 'beep' EX->@freshkid *beep* up
Any1 can give scores 2 those they r feelin' or not feelin' left
The person with d highest number of beeps on a page b'cums d official rhyme king or Queen (rhyme first).
Don't be sad if u get a buzz, u can still make it up by cumin back with a banger & aim shots at d buzzers 2 get a beep.
Remember we're jst havin' fun, don't take it personal when u get 'attacked' what happens here remains here.
LET'S MAKE !T HOT!!!!

My Guestbook/ShoutboxTop 5 greatest rappers and my personal favorite

Comments

Moonlighthiphopfan Wednesday, December 15, 2010 7:43:47 PM

hmm alright.. thanks

H!p Hop NerdUsmanlawal Thursday, December 16, 2010 5:36:11 PM

ur wc bigsmile

H!p Hop NerdUsmanlawal Thursday, December 16, 2010 5:52:02 PM

Got my swagg on check
my rhymes on deck
in the club, doin my 2 step
they're feelin my 2 step
they're yellin out whoz that
im so sold out like bootleg
cd's on request
and u on a reject
u so waisted
not on booze tho'
but u reckless
pay ur last respect
and go run fast on the express
cuz there can only be one bestest
and that is me, the royal highness

H!p Hop NerdUsmanlawal Tuesday, January 18, 2011 10:34:28 AM

Once again
fresh z here again
to let y'all feel his pain
coz the world jst broke my heart again
damn its a shame
p'ple always thinking bout their selfish aims
playing deadly games

my rhyme z kinda lame
yeah i know so f*** the game
i told y'all that i'd never be the same
and i've neva been the same
eva since came again
who??

twisted minds, senseless snakes
power and money they crave
sour and suffering they gave
what do u stand to gain when u alrdy got like 44mil and u tryna take the p'ples 24mil?
u so ill
not cool, man ur sick bt we take the pills and we feelin mo sick
coz they're some fake sh*t
the real deal z there z no real deal
we jst gotta chill
and freeze lyk ice
coz if u make a move u'd be a dead mice
i ain't no mike
cant punch cant fight
bt can run real fast
else i get crushed and eaten lyk spicy crunch

wats up lil jon
i aint talkin bout the crunk wit em tacky joints
bt thefunky son who freestyles on my blog

cletus chinatu nmeluchinatu213 Thursday, January 20, 2011 10:21:51 AM

WOW! Thumbs up,bro.thats nice! up

LightThAkIdJxY Friday, January 21, 2011 7:59:10 PM

was the last bit at me? lol nice thu big ups!

Moonlighthiphopfan Friday, December 2, 2011 12:19:03 AM

dont kno how i got here from twitter but since im here ...

iight
yall can call me moonlight
cuz i be soarin high as a kite
nothing can stop me
im one step further
bout to go another step
i dont give a fuk about my haters
(tch) did i mention haters?....
oh, and baiters..
yeah.. laters

H!p Hop NerdUsmanlawal Sunday, December 4, 2011 1:29:47 PM

Moon really brought the light
kinda dim in here, so am gonna make it bright
And spark like faulty lights
With a lil colour, call it rainbow stripes
I keep it on the low, elves & sprites
But wish to fly higher, paper kites
Got my cape & my tights, bat man
Not a villain but i kill em, bad man
Call me Hercules cuz i bring Thunder
Got her eyes all rainy, sweet mother






Moonlighthiphopfan Sunday, December 4, 2011 9:09:14 PM

*beep* up

H!p Hop NerdUsmanlawal Monday, December 5, 2011 4:17:51 PM

Thanks, you brought it tho

H!p Hop NerdUsmanlawal Monday, December 5, 2011 4:18:57 PM

Thanks, you brought it tho

Moonlighthiphopfan Monday, December 5, 2011 11:17:50 PM

iloveyou has 8 words, baby so does cheaters
lik mothafuka shut up and sit down
nigga i aint makin u numba 1 in my life
i aint gon be anyone's wife
no such thing called love
aint ever seen it last a lifetime
^
|

randomly thot that up.. lol

Moonlighthiphopfan Monday, December 5, 2011 11:25:15 PM

people think bout themselves
but i just be like oh well
gona try make the world a betta place
but these haters are a waste of space
haters never tie they lace
they goin to the bottom
they look like ants from where i stand
tryna find a space to land
these fools in a gang
but never will be numba 1 cuz im successful

H!p Hop NerdUsmanlawal Tuesday, December 6, 2011 9:09:29 AM

That first piece tho *big ups*

Moonlighthiphopfan Tuesday, December 6, 2011 3:59:08 PM

yes

H!p Hop NerdUsmanlawal Wednesday, December 7, 2011 5:03:33 PM

Been kind of feeling down lately
Hatred in my belly
Niggas on my tele
Keeping all the tally
Of these killings and brutalities
Women to infant mortalities
different people same mentality
Can't even look at my sister in the eyes w/o doubting if
She is the same person or just a counterfeit
That's why sometimes I just turn my headphones real high to the ceiling
Niggas hate me
cuz they don't get me
My mum loves me
And her prayers leads the path for me
Sports bore me
Music is alluring
In meeting speakers allude me
Not as great but chaotic
Stirring up controversial theories
Fuck it no worries
Won't stop, until i see changes

H!p Hop NerdUsmanlawal Wednesday, December 7, 2011 5:03:49 PM

Been kind of feeling down lately
Hatred in my belly
Niggas on my tele
Keeping all the tally
Of these killings and brutalities
Women to infant mortalities
different people same mentality
Can't even look at my sister in the eyes w/o doubting if
She is the same person or just a counterfeit
That's why sometimes I just turn my headphones real high to the ceiling
Niggas hate me
cuz they don't get me
My mum loves me
And her prayers leads the path for me
Sports bore me
Music is alluring
In meeting speakers allude me
Not as great but chaotic
Stirring up controversial theories
Fuck it no worries
Won't stop, until i see changes

H!p Hop NerdUsmanlawal Wednesday, December 7, 2011 5:04:11 PM

Been kind of feeling down lately
Hatred in my belly
Niggas on my tele
Keeping all the tally
Of these killings and brutalities
Women to infant mortalities
different people same mentality
Can't even look at my sister in the eyes w/o doubting if
She is the same person or just a counterfeit
That's why sometimes I just turn my headphones real high to the ceiling
Niggas hate me
cuz they don't get me
My mum loves me
And her prayers leads the path for me
Sports bore me
Music is alluring
In meeting speakers allude me
Not as great but chaotic
Stirring up controversial theories
Fuck it no worries
Won't stop, until i see changes

LightThAkIdJxY Wednesday, December 7, 2011 8:16:02 PM

..yooo

H!p Hop NerdUsmanlawal Monday, December 12, 2011 2:43:39 PM

Wud up bro?? longest we nor talk

LightThAkIdJxY Monday, December 12, 2011 3:26:03 PM

hell yea man long ass time lol im good how you been?

Moonlighthiphopfan Tuesday, December 13, 2011 6:34:04 PM

Had a dream and this is what it seems
They following me every chance they get
The storys unfolding now it's a conspiracy
While I wait I wonder what it could be
And while I have my dream I realise
They said all the same lies
Must be a glitch in the matrix
I don't know how to get out of here
Someone quickly call me

LightThAkIdJxY Tuesday, December 13, 2011 10:32:53 PM

Haha..nice Milan

LightThAkIdJxY Tuesday, December 13, 2011 10:45:17 PM

Let me see I'll up with a lil sumthin sumthin been awhile thu

Blood sweat tears got nothin to fear
Shit be going crazy
Visions getting hazy
Take the long route
Cuz nothing's ever easy
Tha block hot
And the homies never stop
Striving cuz we lock
So keep it on the downlow
But thats just sumthing they know!

Moonlighthiphopfan Wednesday, December 14, 2011 4:56:02 PM

Fuked up people in the ghetto
Don't know how to help so I be like Leggo
They came up to me and offered cigs and drugs
Everyone got Booze, drugs, smoking some buds
A crimes been done and cops looking for the suspect
They blamin me and im like fukem let em be
But it's only because I'm from the ghetto

LightThAkIdJxY Wednesday, December 14, 2011 9:44:40 PM

Yolo on my dolo
Yea I'm ridin solo
Nothin like derulo
Jason
I'm at they neck like a violin
Sharp
On deck
Niggaz forgive but don't forget
Facing tough decisions
Fueled with all the ambitions
Blood rush adrenaline
Just to get it in to settle in

Moonlighthiphopfan Wednesday, December 14, 2011 11:44:29 PM

No love on the bus, bustling
Shit is hopeless, they be cussing
People on the street, hustling
I just wanna live like its my last
Gotta forget about the past
And not act like an outcast
Gotta learn to stay on top fast
Didn't know some things could look so vast


LightThAkIdJxY Thursday, December 15, 2011 2:36:45 AM

here to paint the picture clear
no where near complete
rushing ahead cuz losing is obsolete
compete to be the best
stand out of the rest
rest easy cuz the haters
be the motivators
feel the heat everyday
couldn't care less cuz everything be ok

Moonlighthiphopfan Thursday, December 15, 2011 9:30:16 PM

Ready for war, call of duty
She on her way to stop violence, judge judy
All the men checking her booty
Yeah I call em pervs
As they be sittin starin at her curves
Everyone bout to die, why lie?
Families be sayin there byes
Lookin at windows, cooling pies
We gonna die for nothing, all i can ask is why

LightThAkIdJxY Friday, December 16, 2011 1:02:34 AM

Question is why?
Gotta try b4 you die
As I lay here in bed
Of all these thoughts up in a head
I just don't know
Put on a good face but truth be told
I'm straight up miserable
But I found my way
I'm a go with the flow
Open the box yup I got control
Just saying so
To let y'all kno

H!p Hop NerdUsmanlawal Friday, December 16, 2011 2:31:41 PM

y'all are crazy
dropping hot lines like that
Makes the cloud all hazy
mad flows pouring on this post, like it be raining
Flooding the OP building
From the west to the east
call it tsunami, and this bitch is so sweet
Nobody dying, unless they come testing
Nobody test me so i blocked my intestine
no food and water passing
Unless they taste like beef
Sorry big ol tummy is that too much to seek?

H!p Hop NerdUsmanlawal Friday, December 16, 2011 2:32:51 PM

y'all are crazy
dropping hot lines like that
Makes the cloud all hazy
mad flows pouring on this post, like it be raining
Flooding the OP building
From the west to the east
call it tsunami, and this bitch is so sweet
Nobody dying, unless they come testing
Nobody test me so i blocked my intestine
no food and water passing
Unless they taste like beef
Sorry big ol tummy is that too much to seek?

H!p Hop NerdUsmanlawal Friday, December 16, 2011 3:10:56 PM

They say three is a crowd
But the three in here are so high that we are pissing on the cloud
No dissing to the Lord
Deuces to old buds
To family, kisses and warm hugs

As i take on this cold world
So help me God
Fake thugs wanna belong
So i hit em with a nice shot
Not too long, they start to fall short
Their style is fading, out of touch
And my sound is wailing, seems like am in touch
am in touch with the people, they've been touched
I mean they've been touched by my music, its called the future

H!p Hop NerdUsmanlawal Friday, December 16, 2011 3:11:37 PM

They say three is a crowd
But the three in here are so high that we are pissing on the cloud
No dissing to the Lord
Deuces to old buds
To family, kisses and warm hugs

As i take on this cold world
So help me God
Fake thugs wanna belong
So i hit em with a nice shot
Not too long, they start to fall short
Their style is fading, out of touch
And my sound is wailing, seems like am in touch
am in touch with the people, they've been touched
I mean they've been touched by my music, its called the future

LightThAkIdJxY Friday, December 16, 2011 4:02:17 PM

aha..ayo usman we got em in a chokehold
they acting crazy so tough so bold
leave em be let em..grow old
so old that with a touch they turn gold
nah forget that grow mold
they selfish fools trying shoot rocks
while we steady mobbin shooting up to the top
game crazier then ever been
all these wack ass rules and forgiven sins
but ever since
just a coincidence
just thought I'd put my share..my two cents

H!p Hop NerdUsmanlawal Friday, December 16, 2011 4:40:37 PM

Niggas be shaking like they cold
tell em they need procold
dudes is noodles, doodle to these puddles
Make em hoot like owls as they fly round in circles
Short circuit these dudes
Put em all in shackles
in the woods with no Quran or Bibles
Until they are soft and foamy, no soapy bubbles.......

Moonlighthiphopfan Friday, December 16, 2011 5:42:16 PM

Need your strength so yall cant control me
They came to me and asked to pay the fee
I asked them to leave me be
Then told me everything in life aint free
Fools left for their cup of tea
This i know, this be the devils work
I see him following me, lurk
Watching these brainwashed people dancing, jerk
Fuk yall niggaz cuz im team anti-illuminati, Killuminati


H!p Hop NerdUsmanlawal Sunday, December 18, 2011 2:55:38 PM

we are like the new Run DMC
Cuz we run these MC's
As They remain unplugged like MTV
Mil', Jon & your boy, young Ussy
The young, fresh trios
New royals on the throne
last name Tudors
Niggas is too cold like two O's
Call em sub zeros
heres a glimpse of the future, Hiro
Do this for the future & my culture, hero
My shit be banging on your stereo, you hear me though?
cash cheques on this Bitch...call me the CEO
Niggas can't see me, cuz am flying...UFO
Laughing & mocking at these oppressors.....LMAO

LightThAkIdJxY Sunday, December 18, 2011 4:33:15 PM

ayo usman nice shit
we poppin cuz we the new click
new kids
on the block
can't be stop
on our a game
tip top shape
these niggaz snakes
slithering with all this hate
but wait fo its late
give or take
make or break
damn..yo i kno we ripping bars and going hard
maybe we should take it easy on em no going further
take a sec and catch a breathe..take a breather

H!p Hop NerdUsmanlawal Sunday, December 18, 2011 5:08:07 PM

damnnn! Jon, *speechless*

H!p Hop NerdUsmanlawal Sunday, December 18, 2011 6:12:03 PM

Heres a breather for these suckers
Hope they stay
X'd like Malcolm
More than ten verses in three days, thats like half an album
and they be like how come?
We stepped up our game, come on
Be smart son
We are like Hussein, Gaddafi and Bin Laden together
Been rapping together
Tudors forever
never a quiter
Always a winner
Ripping off buildings godzilla
Life is a bitch but i forgave her
Mocked but praise her

Moonlighthiphopfan Sunday, December 18, 2011 8:06:54 PM

Had a nightmare and this what it is
I never thought a dream could get like this
For far too long, they've been plotting on me
The stories unfolding now its a conspiracy
My dream is something you'd unbelieve
Im asking myself if im awake or asleep
Its haunting me, i just wanna live
They wanna believe i'll join them
I be asking why and when
They will keep asking what and then
Took black and white pills, couldnt fight back against evil
I tell the souless and brainwashed they gotta get it back, mission of retrieval
I realised im in the same place as the last nightmare, must be a glitch in the matrix
The devil came and now im in the need of the medic
Our lord, our saviour, God.

Moonlighthiphopfan Sunday, December 18, 2011 8:07:55 PM

Edited version of the other one i wrote

H!p Hop NerdUsmanlawal Monday, December 19, 2011 5:11:36 PM

People come into your life as blessings
At the end theres a lesson
Pretty exciting
some times depressing
But there's always a reason
Shit don't just happen for nothing
But you gotta ask, if its worth it?
Depending on what it is
Or who it is
If they are fake or real
Don't let em know how you feel
Give em some space to fill
Keep digging, don't stop until you know their deal
Play it smooth like an eel
Once you are in
Grab it, own it, then control it
Don't over do it
Like wheels and you be cruising
Use these fags as toilet that you'll be shiting-in

LightThAkIdJxY Tuesday, December 20, 2011 2:18:20 PM

As you go on in life
gets harder by the minute
but depending on how you spend it
its your life so choose a way to live it
treasure every moment
its your moment in life
try to make it easy like
flying a kite in the sky
grasp it in your hands..aim high
spread your wings
do your thing and bring on the happiness
make best of it and act childish
you only got one life
aint no super mario
heres to the future..cheers
go on and let the story be told

H!p Hop NerdUsmanlawal Tuesday, December 20, 2011 9:01:15 PM

All I need is success
Nobody wanna help so imma blow my own trumpet
At the third sound
And nobody up yet
they getting fucked by laziness
when you are done..get up & suck on my cockyness
Pardon my bad manners
Not weak but i gotta show some sloppiness
To be honest, between me and you? Am the best

Wanna hate? Then be my guest
I suggest
Think you can push threats
In them thin ass vest??
Guns to your chest
Shooting flows & never rest
Never the less
clean my shoes while i rest my head
God bless!

Moonlighthiphopfan Monday, December 26, 2011 7:28:09 PM

Teach me how to love
Heard it makes you fly like a dove
Emo's throw love aside, shove
People tell me it's easy to fall in love, they say it's like putting on a glove
I guess love is something to be proud of
Two peoples love holds them onto each other, making sure nothing tears them apart, rock
But it can break your heart so imma ride solo
Your girl cheats on you, you be mad and call her a hoe
She pretends nothing happen, she acts and says whoa
Your heart goes black like the fur colour of a crow

H!p Hop NerdUsmanlawal Tuesday, December 27, 2011 7:39:22 AM

You Already know
And your heart turns stone-cold
Body so pale, almost as white as a snow
You feel a Deep hole in your heart like an empty bowl
Put your life in a slo-mo
Feel like a bomb ready to blow
Eyes all drenched & soaked
Trying to defend your ego
By not letting feelings show

H!p Hop NerdUsmanlawal Monday, January 16, 2012 8:12:26 AM

Woke up this morning smelling like excellence
Fuck the Government
Am my own President
Its a new year so am sticking to my old testament
Drop stuff everyone can comprehend
& I'd be damned
If i don't accomplish, what's on my list
At the end of this year
Haters are going to stare
People are going to hear
The cries of my success
Ring the bell
The countdown begins, lemme tighten my belt
As i sail through this well
No time fi settle or sell
This nigga means business
Don't press as i stress through thick forests
No Toures but i ball like soccer
Now watch me....SUCKER

Moonlighthiphopfan Monday, January 30, 2012 9:14:18 PM

If u sexy and u kno it put up hands up in the air
Don't ask why just do it n wave it anywhere
Need music in my life
Fall asleep listening to it everyday
No matter where I listen to it anyway
Chris breezy all day
In the club listening to Turn Up The Music
I give money to the dj to put the volume up, pay
Chris say I need it in my life
I need his music in my life

Write a comment

New comments have been disabled for this post.