Hope

IN HEARTS' SIDES

Thursday, 18. December 2008, 14:40:30

Again, it was snowing silentely...the sound of silence reside in a white scene...nothing disturbed it.
It was calm, he was there, he enjoyed the snow's light, he liked walking on sky's clouds...Suddenly, it was a snowstorm...that fair pieces of cotton were disturbing the silence...that white pieces accumulate streets and trees...it was cold and damp.

Dimness, i can't see you dear...my heart!...i was looking for you "hey, is any body there?"...no one!, no answer, no reply!
The snowstorm became strong...the snowhill was here and there but he wasn't either here nor there!

Silence again, that pleased me, i was waiting for something to happen...go on! you're in heart...go on!
no reply! that heart became pale, i became pale!...no relpy, darkness again!...

INSIDEWHERE IS THE SUN OF EVERY DAY ?

Comments

MrColombo # 18. December 2008, 19:06

I can only speculate that it was through the silence, that defining sound of nothing at all, the truth I may never know. very deep words, joy in the silence, and joy to see, but in no longer viewing sadness. it seems that through loneliness he became a shadow of his former self, and was nowhere. but again pleased with the silence, the viewer was, or could it be the viewed? but again, falling into the darkness.

deep words, the picture is not difficult to see. but the meaning is hidden form my thoughts. i will think on this...

amel2 # 19. December 2008, 17:26

my Friend Nedjmek always remind me that when we read something the most important thing is to feel it not to understand it...but this time i want you to understand it...especially you "colombo"....
you're right in your thought...think on it again.

MrColombo # 19. December 2008, 22:47

i shall, and have been all night...there is something missing from the image. but i will see it i am sure soon...i will keep thinking. these words are truly very beautiful.

amel2 # 19. December 2008, 22:50

thanks a lot for your kind

T-magma # 22. December 2008, 12:36

I'm kinda confused.. This post is so deep that i got my brains cracked just 2 figure out what it really mean or like it

amel2 # 22. December 2008, 17:44

you can read my 2nd comment added here to understand

T-magma # 22. December 2008, 17:55

Maybe the snowhill is real... but there's nothing like "he" there...it was just an imagination. Your heart is not pale and'll never be coz he's right there in your heart echoeing your name

amel2 # 22. December 2008, 18:36

you're genius, but i'm sorry...there's no imagination there.
if you feel it, that's enough...and the most important thing is to like it.

T-magma # 22. December 2008, 19:39

Awww i guess i got 80%. Yeah you're right...once you feel it,its enough . But the question is; do you really feel it ?

amel2 # 23. December 2008, 10:34

i live it, that happened in my mind, in my soul...don't you tkink that i feel it?

T-magma # 23. December 2008, 15:52

Awww really .. Idk that you've lived it... sorry if the feelings hurt

MrColombo # 23. December 2008, 18:09

you changed some of the words, to "I" now the meaning is very clear. i have had similar experience in my life as well. it is hard but these moments are the dark points in life, they do not last forever.

ومن نحو الصبي الذي ترك لك. ويبدو أن يحرص كثيرا بالنسبة له ، ورحيله من يصب عليك كثيرا. الفتاة التي كنت مع واحد وأيضا لانها تعتقد انها تقول لي يحبني وتذهب الى رجل اخر في نفس الوقت قالت لي هذه الكلمات لن تضر. كانت خاطئة ، لم تعرف وانها لا تفهم أفعالي. فكرت tht سأكون جنون ، ولكن لم اكن انا بس كنت حزينا للغاية. وكان قلبي في حفرة ، وأنا لم مع امرأة أخرى منذ لها. وكان هذا قبل عام. ط حتى الآن في البحث عن شخص هناك ، ولكن أنا على الخروج... وباختصار يبدو أن الحظ ليس لي

ومن الصعب بالنسبة لي أن تقرأ مع علامات تبين حرف لين ، لذلك اذا كنت ترغب في الرد لي ، وأعتقد أن فرنسا يمكن أن تكون أكثر سهولة على الفهم بالنسبة لي...

amel2 # 30. December 2008, 11:54

is there any thing wish is Mysterious, not clear, may be you're right

T-magma # 30. December 2008, 12:20

I don't know that colombos can write in Arabic

nice language...I hate arabic coz it never allowed me to learn it

amel2 # 30. December 2008, 16:07

if you like it, you'll learn it...Arabic it's the mother tongue in Algeria.
it's realy nice to learn languages...Mr. colombo is American,he's my friend, he can speak many languages not only English and Arabic