Sarah Dreams

Wounded-Poetry

Sunday, April 15, 2007 11:42:15 PM

fighting, sadness, poetry, wounded, poem, pain

Wounded Enchanting talk, glamorous smile apparently she has seen it coming for a while but ignoring it was easier than dealing with pain that involved a moment thrashed and skin split.

Feeling v u l n e r able, coiled tightly
around the only spirit that she felt
could save her own she drifted
off thinking the demon was gone
for a time but only
strengthened
greatly.

He denies the feelings that overtake
his mind in a furry a fire that is full
of devious lies and lust and hurt and
betrayal wounding so deep; not recognized
she begged him to please try to
progress away from
home.

Understanding the mind of men
will never be achieved in this
lifetime I know; something impossible
all rules broken, all manner disregarded
in a flash all is lost, all love is raped
from a memory that begun
as somewhat
so sweet .

© Sarah Bell 2007

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Comments

Stardancer # Sunday, April 15, 2007 11:47:59 PM

Nice poem, Sarah.

Dark FurieFurie # Monday, April 16, 2007 12:31:30 AM

Nice isn't quite the word I'd use.

I love the realist stuff like that. It's so much more fulfilling than the flowers and fluffy bunny crap we got forced down our throats at school.

AzureTimm # Monday, April 16, 2007 3:49:02 AM

... We are learning that crap Now... Glad to have something for a change.

MarcusFXM256 # Monday, April 16, 2007 4:45:04 AM

Wow, a powerful poem Sarah.

runner68 # Monday, April 16, 2007 5:14:53 AM

Wonderful poem Sarah

scott cummingIArtMan # Monday, April 16, 2007 6:00:29 AM

this is deep sarah.
there's no wound so deep as betrayal and there's no harder thing to forgive.

CherylDuckyChickenLady # Monday, April 16, 2007 1:25:18 PM

I feel the pain!

Tragic! Great writing!

Sarah Dreamsangel292005 # Monday, April 16, 2007 7:50:48 PM

Thanks everyone so much for your beautiful comments.

-demiphonic # Tuesday, April 17, 2007 5:42:21 AM

hey this is great

I think men are not too hard to understand... most just don't like explaining themselves

Sarah Dreamsangel292005 # Tuesday, April 17, 2007 12:03:33 PM

point ^^

Dark FurieFurie # Tuesday, April 17, 2007 4:14:35 PM

Male understanding for sale. All male secrets only 19.99. Call 0800 3862277 for details.

-demiphonic # Tuesday, April 17, 2007 4:23:05 PM

don't listen to him.. I'll give you a discount.

call 555-5555

Sarah Dreamsangel292005 # Tuesday, April 17, 2007 4:31:25 PM

Well, it would help if the numbers were real.

Now I feel insulted......

*sulks away with head down

Dark FurieFurie # Tuesday, April 17, 2007 4:43:20 PM

3862277 = secret word in phone language.

AzureTimm # Tuesday, April 17, 2007 5:01:19 PM

? I know 62442 spells 'magic' on my phone keypad... But secret is 732738.

Dark FurieFurie # Tuesday, April 17, 2007 5:15:22 PM

Sarah Dreamsangel292005 # Tuesday, April 17, 2007 5:18:57 PM

UMMM I think I will have a fun time figuring it out.....

-demiphonic # Tuesday, April 17, 2007 6:24:42 PM

this convo just got silly

Sarah Dreamsangel292005 # Tuesday, April 17, 2007 6:55:16 PM

3862277 I THOUGHT spelled out 'fun time' that is why i put that, lol.

I got it, dumb ass is what it says

Dark FurieFurie # Tuesday, April 17, 2007 8:01:55 PM

Nope. It's one word, made of two seperate ones. Just don't take it personally when you figure it out.

-demiphonic # Tuesday, April 17, 2007 8:17:55 PM

Sarah Dreamsangel292005 # Tuesday, April 17, 2007 8:31:28 PM

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He said, it.

AzureTimm # Wednesday, April 18, 2007 1:13:46 AM

D u m b a s s ... Oh xxxx... This is fun...

Dark FurieFurie # Wednesday, April 18, 2007 2:09:00 AM

They're the last digits of my first mobile number. When I figured out what it spelt I had to get some business cards printed up at one of those horrible little machines ya find in train stations.