Sarah Dreams

Umm...In Dreamy Thought

Wednesday, May 30, 2007 7:46:01 PM

lost, emotion, wondering, sadness, poems, poetry, friends

"In Thought"

She had many
but not one was true
feeling blue
yawning in thought
thinking it through.

Energetic atoms
dancing on rain..
distracting from pain
the cover fails
to cover the flail.

Away she toddles
dreaming anew
on thoughts to chew
not knowing a physical
physiological pain remains.

©Sabell

"And all the air is filled with pleasant noise of waters"True Story : The sick dude that went to Paris

Comments

Stomyr # Wednesday, May 30, 2007 7:51:23 PM

Deep, and filled with emotions...
And makes me sad.

But I like it.

Sarah Dreamsangel292005 # Wednesday, May 30, 2007 7:59:34 PM

yes it was from the heart

Dark FurieFurie # Wednesday, May 30, 2007 9:33:31 PM

I haven't heard the word "toddles" in ages.

Esther-Sugar Winxsugarwinx # Thursday, May 31, 2007 3:52:52 AM

This is lovely!!

And chose a lovely oicture to compliment this too!!!

Sarah Dreamsangel292005 # Thursday, May 31, 2007 9:44:21 AM

ty Esther.

RamuciukeSaron # Thursday, May 31, 2007 9:50:21 AM

This is thought provoking poem from the heart.

With love, Ramute.

Sarah Dreamsangel292005 # Thursday, May 31, 2007 10:03:17 AM

ty Ramute.

Dark FurieFurie # Thursday, May 31, 2007 10:50:38 AM

Eeek! Your new friend picture looks like you've got an axe hidden behind your back.

Sarah Dreamsangel292005 # Thursday, May 31, 2007 11:27:04 AM

weird, I was feeling happy...so wanted to put my 'happy' face up. By the way that other pic was taken while on the way to see a movie, lol.

Dark FurieFurie # Thursday, May 31, 2007 11:29:11 AM

I like the Sarah says Hey one best of all. It lets people know what to expect on your page.

Sarah Dreamsangel292005 # Thursday, May 31, 2007 1:13:43 PM

Well, isn't that sweet............I think.

CherylDuckyChickenLady # Thursday, May 31, 2007 1:13:51 PM

I can feel the emotion in that ..

Sarah Dreamsangel292005 # Thursday, May 31, 2007 1:24:03 PM

Hi Cheryl...ty

Dark FurieFurie # Thursday, May 31, 2007 7:14:29 PM

I'm just not a fan of regular sanity.

Sarah Dreamsangel292005 # Thursday, May 31, 2007 7:45:34 PM

MarcusFXM256 # Thursday, May 31, 2007 8:48:53 PM

Very thought-provoking, emotional poem, I like it, please keep them coming

Sarah Dreamsangel292005 # Friday, June 1, 2007 1:42:22 AM

Cleanclean # Sunday, June 3, 2007 12:29:42 AM

I've been meaning to say for a while now that your poems seem to have taken a 'the next step' kind of thing in how they've gotten better and better all the time! Layout, meter, subject, emotion, honesty, etc. Good stuff!

Sarah Dreamsangel292005 # Sunday, June 3, 2007 2:42:19 AM

Aww, thanks David. I find that especially nice coming from you.