Arz kiya hai....

Zara gaur farmaiyega...

Itna toota hoon...

Itna toota hoon ki chune se bikhar jaunga...
Ab agar aur dua doge to mar jaunga.

Pooch kar mera pata, waqt ra-e-gah na karo...
Main to banjara hoon, kya jane kidhar jaunga.

Har taraf dhund hai, jugnu hai na chirag koi,
Kaun pehchanega, basti mein agar jaunga.

Zindagi, main bhi musafir hoon teri kashti ka,
Tu jahan mujh se kahegi main utar jaunga.

Phool rah jayenge guldaan mein yado ki nazar,
Main to khushboo hoon phizaon mein bikhar jaunga.

Itna toota hoon ki chune se bikhar jaunga...
Ab agar aur dua doge to mar jaunga.

IbaadatThankyou people...

Comments

Anonymous Saturday, March 31, 2007 10:57:41 AM

gaurav gupta writes: awesome

Anonymous Friday, April 6, 2007 3:18:22 PM

Sneha writes: Heartfelt....truly amazing..one of the best writings! Keep it going dude.

Ankit Guptaanks2cool Friday, April 6, 2007 7:04:24 PM

thx people for the appreciation
i guess u visited my second blog also.. its really worth reading// its the laughter zone
my.opera.com/anks2cool2

Anonymous Friday, June 22, 2007 10:27:30 AM

Anonymous writes: Boss .. read loads of ur postings.. bahu badhiya bahut badhiya .. tum kuch yun likhte ho .. ke dil ko shabd de dete ho kuch baatein likh dete hoo kuch yun hee kah dete hoo .. ( this is exclusively for you ) Sachin UK - stevenage . sachin.bhandari@gmail.com

Ankit Guptaanks2cool Friday, June 22, 2007 6:39:35 PM

thx buddy

Anonymous Saturday, September 15, 2007 2:33:37 AM

chahat writes: itni gehrai me jaate ho aap dil ko sakun de jaate ho aap shayeri aur bhi likhte hai likhne k sath bahut kuch keh jaate ho aap.. brother reaalllyyy bahut bahut acheeeeeee god bless...bahut saraaaa

Anonymous Monday, February 18, 2008 4:54:17 AM

Anonymous writes: hi.. really very niceeeee bahoot khoobsurat poetry he

Anonymous Monday, February 18, 2008 4:55:24 AM

shazia farheen writes: really very niceeeeeee

Ankit Guptaanks2cool Monday, February 18, 2008 4:45:23 PM

thanku so much people

Anonymous Thursday, February 28, 2008 1:20:11 AM

Amitcksharma writes: Ankit that was simply amazing. great piece of work. great going. keep it up.

Ankit Guptaanks2cool Thursday, February 28, 2008 7:51:55 AM

thanks amit

Anonymous Tuesday, October 21, 2008 7:07:29 AM

Jigs.. writes: Hey its really touching.... i visited ur blog suddenly... "Zindagi, main bhi musafir hoon teri kashti ka, Tu jahan mujh se kahegi main utar jaunga." these lines have a lot of pain in itself.... u knw v well how 2 describe ur pain in poems...keep it up!!

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