Ankit Gupta

Itna toota hoon...

Wednesday, 28. March 2007, 18:08:05

Itna toota hoon ki chune se bikhar jaunga...
Ab agar aur dua doge to mar jaunga.

Pooch kar mera pata, waqt ra-e-gah na karo...
Main to banjara hoon, kya jane kidhar jaunga.

Har taraf dhund hai, jugnu hai na chirag koi,
Kaun pehchanega, basti mein agar jaunga.

Zindagi, main bhi musafir hoon teri kashti ka,
Tu jahan mujh se kahegi main utar jaunga.

Phool rah jayenge guldaan mein yado ki nazar,
Main to khushboo hoon phizaon mein bikhar jaunga.

Itna toota hoon ki chune se bikhar jaunga...
Ab agar aur dua doge to mar jaunga.

IbaadatThankyou people...

Comments

Anonymous # 31. March 2007, 10:57

gaurav gupta writes:

awesome

Anonymous # 6. April 2007, 15:18

Sneha writes:

Heartfelt....truly amazing..one of the best writings! Keep it going dude.

Ankit Gupta # 6. April 2007, 19:04

thx people for the appreciation
i guess u visited my second blog also.. its really worth reading// its the laughter zone
my.opera.com/anks2cool2

Anonymous # 22. June 2007, 10:27

Anonymous writes:

Boss .. read loads of ur postings.. bahu badhiya bahut badhiya ..

tum kuch yun likhte ho .. ke
dil ko shabd de dete ho
kuch baatein likh dete hoo
kuch yun hee kah dete hoo ..

( this is exclusively for you )

Sachin
UK - stevenage .
sachin.bhandari@gmail.com

Ankit Gupta # 22. June 2007, 18:39

thx buddy

Anonymous # 15. September 2007, 02:33

chahat writes:

itni gehrai me jaate ho aap
dil ko sakun de jaate ho aap
shayeri aur bhi likhte hai
likhne k sath bahut kuch keh jaate ho aap..

brother reaalllyyy bahut bahut acheeeeeee
god bless...bahut saraaaa

Anonymous # 18. February 2008, 04:54

Anonymous writes:

hi.. really very niceeeee bahoot khoobsurat poetry he

Anonymous # 18. February 2008, 04:55

shazia farheen writes:

really very niceeeeeee

Ankit Gupta # 18. February 2008, 16:45

thanku so much people

Anonymous # 28. February 2008, 01:20

Amitcksharma writes:

Ankit that was simply amazing. great piece of work. great going. keep it up.

Ankit Gupta # 28. February 2008, 07:51

thanks amit

Anonymous # 21. October 2008, 07:07

Jigs.. writes:

Hey its really touching....
i visited ur blog suddenly...

"Zindagi, main bhi musafir hoon teri kashti ka,
Tu jahan mujh se kahegi main utar jaunga."

these lines have a lot of pain in itself....
u knw v well how 2 describe ur pain in poems...keep it up!!