sun beats down... hey i wrote this poem so let me know what yall think
Friday, 14. December 2007, 20:06:08
the sun beats down on my face
i can fly
everything is the way it should be
it feels so right
i want to feel this always
but i know it won't always be
the thunder and lightening wil come and shatter my dreams
the tears come while the rain falls,
the emotions come easily now
"please stop"
make me happy again
the rain is slowing, it now comes to a stop
i know the sun will come and make me feel whole
the world will continue to turn and my life will
keep going
the sun beats down on my face
i can fly
everything is the way it should be
it feels so right
i want to feel this always
but i know it won't always be
the thunder and lightening wil come and shatter my dreams
the tears come while the rain falls,
the emotions come easily now
"please stop"
make me happy again
the rain is slowing, it now comes to a stop
i know the sun will come and make me feel whole
the world will continue to turn and my life will
keep going
the sun beats down on my face
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naveensigroha # 17. December 2007, 16:54
dmacfarlane # 18. December 2007, 21:59
I loved the line: "tears come while the rain falls"
Tito177 # 21. December 2007, 07:26
Saroj Baral # 26. December 2007, 20:23