Poem mates ^ _ ^
Tuesday, 19. August 2008, 09:19:24
Well, this idea from my dear friend, Shir when she thought we can enjoy nice times with making poems together 
.I think its such a good one and want to start it with a new blog 
. I will be the first who starts with some paragrapghs below. You can choose one or some of them to reply to me with your own paragraphs 
. It will last as long as you wish or when our inspration come to end 
. You can choose any topic or paragraph you like or you can put a new topic and i and others will follow 
. In fact, i dont know i can follow all these or not 
, but i will try my best to reply to all your inspirations 
. I dont feel confident enough until you all come and share your inspirations with me . Ha ha,, then we will know who is best marathoner here
.I think its such a good one and want to start it with a new blog . I will be the first who starts with some paragrapghs below. You can choose one or some of them to reply to me with your own paragraphs . It will last as long as you wish or when our inspration come to end . You can choose any topic or paragraph you like or you can put a new topic and i and others will follow . In fact, i dont know i can follow all these or not , but i will try my best to reply to all your inspirations . I dont feel confident enough until you all come and share your inspirations with me . Ha ha,, then we will know who is best marathoner here | Here are some my poem paragraphs to start   1.i dont want to live the sad days fear to dream, fear in all the ways looking up to the sky, seeking sweet love knowing that i can soar and catch angel wings from above 2. im the spring breeze blows to you my sweet kiss im the summer rain refreshes and washes away your pain 3. being born of confidence with pride now i can raise high reflecting inside me the woman with worths that can be well realized 4. want to catch the sunshine in your smile want to touch the moonlight in your eyes want to taste the scent of your heart's flower want to spend good and bad times through our life together 5. Sometimes i have a dream in that clear sky i reach dancing on silvery moonbeam freedom is all i need 6. Why do i feel happy but then i fall again why do i glow with glee and once again feel pain? Now, go on!  |
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WIDGETIZE
By aromagrass, # 19. August 2008, 10:17:06
By aromagrass, # 19. August 2008, 10:20:04
By brokenheartvn, # 19. August 2008, 11:46:34
Yours:
2. im the spring breeze
blows to you my sweet kiss
im the summer rain
refreshes and washes away your pain
Mine:
I'm the autumn leaves
taking away all your pain
and wiping off all your tears
with the gentle autumn breeze
I'm the winter snow
reflecting back all your sorrows
and with my cool, white surface
you will sleep calmly in my arms
Yours:
3. being born of confidence
with pride now i can raise high
reflecting inside me the woman
with worths that can be well realized
Mine:
I will be strong
For I will not live the sad days
I will stand tall
For that is all I have left
The wind will not sway me
Nor will the rains drown me
For I am born of confidence
And unchanged determination
By winterdawn, # 19. August 2008, 12:08:52
yet it has force.
It strips the leaves
from the branches.
A mighty forest giant,
toppled by the gale.
Still, the seeds ride
the wind, on their
journey towards rebirth.
By Captivevet, # 19. August 2008, 13:49:55
here are mine to you ^ _ ^
Yours:
I'm the autumn leaves
taking away all your pain
and wiping off all your tears
with the gentle autumn breeze
I'm the winter snow
reflecting back all your sorrows
and with my cool, white surface
you will sleep calmly in my arms
Mine:
Autumn splendor is falling
under your magic pen spreading
taking me into your home to rest
enjoy bathing within your soul with gentleness
I can see thousands snowflakes sparkling in the sun
those are your heart drops dancing with lots of fun
inside your cold and white surface
i still can sleep with happy smile put on the face
Yours:
I will be strong
For I will not live the sad days
I will stand tall
For that is all I have left
The wind will not sway me
Nor will the rains drown me
For I am born of confidence
And unchanged determination
Mine:
I know you will always be strong
for you always sing me a cheerful song
stand tall and know sad days from now on will fade
smile and be happy, we know it never be late
The wind cant sway our strong mind
as rain cant fall always from the sky
being confident, gentle and true
know that strength will always shine through
By brokenheartvn, # 20. August 2008, 04:54:18
mine ^ _ ^
Yes, i know wind can be gentle
but still can be terible
glides and sweeps
raises its voice through ribbon of leaves
have you ever seen a little seed
regardless how much strong storm is
regardless how much terrible the wins is
raising its head toward the sun
let all know in the earth it can be the one
on its journey , one day will weave green rugs for the earth.
By brokenheartvn, # 20. August 2008, 05:15:58
By mutt77, # 20. August 2008, 08:51:20
By Captivevet, # 20. August 2008, 13:53:24
Love is hard
How could i find the way?
By bittersweet9180, # 20. August 2008, 14:14:20
By mutt77, # 20. August 2008, 14:28:03
nice to meet you, thanks a lot for visiting and leaving footprint!
PS: my friend bittersweet doesnt understand Vietnamese
By brokenheartvn, # 20. August 2008, 14:39:42
By brokenheartvn, # 20. August 2008, 14:41:42
yes, i know life is not easy
sometimes its so hard for you and me
but keep belief and hope always in your heart
you will know success and love from you never part
By brokenheartvn, # 20. August 2008, 14:44:40
By bittersweet9180, # 20. August 2008, 14:57:10
fear to dream, fear in all the ways
looking up to the sky, seeking sweet love
knowing that i can soar and catch angel wings from above
Me:
I just want you came to me again,
to dream that dream we feed every day.
The sky was eternal, life as no one
your face in my eyes shining so bright.
I don't want to think this is the end
of a road we started together.
I don't want to find the end of this
far away from your hands..."
Well, I'm not inspirated today, sorry.
But I liked. I remember once I did something with a friend. We sat at a restaurant, and for a while we agreed to say nothing, just write. It was strange, but a rare experience.
Nice idea!
By pbuydid, # 20. August 2008, 20:53:57
Life can be hard.
But if you sit at
the table, you must
wager on your card.
By Captivevet, # 20. August 2008, 21:13:54
To a stranger passes by
A smile can brighten up the day
For we don't need to cry
I'm newbie here, just pass here by to say hello with a smile! Hope to make friends with you
By rainhope, # 21. August 2008, 02:51:13
By brokenheartvn, # 21. August 2008, 09:47:23
i see your words are very nice
i wish we can be dilligent poem mates ^ _ ^...must say thanks to Shir again
Yours:
I just want you came to me again,
to dream that dream we feed every day.
The sky was eternal, life as no one
your face in my eyes shining so bright.
I don't want to think this is the end
of a road we started together.
I don't want to find the end of this
far away from your hands
Mine:
I will come to you again
to dream and take away your pain
the sky is still blue in that we put our wish
design our life together and nothing else we need
I don't want to think everything ends
a new beginning is what we will spend
put your hands in mine and take the same way
together and nothing can bend and split our everyday
hehe, its some plain inspiratons catched from your words...i hope its not too missed
By brokenheartvn, # 21. August 2008, 10:52:20
Life can be hard
i dont want to see it from my hands part
i can wager
but i will be my life's owner
my life sometimes can be terrible
but i know clearly that i will be always the winner
haha
By brokenheartvn, # 21. August 2008, 11:07:12
a simple smile can say hello
wherever we all go
a smile can promise a beautiful day
that can make you happy in every way
a smile can start a friendship
that is seed for true one that's deep
a smile can take away your sorrow
and make us become close
hope we can keep a good friendship from a smile
By brokenheartvn, # 21. August 2008, 11:19:43
but the wind blew it away.
I wrote your name in the sand,
but the waves washed it away.
I wrote your name in my heart,
and forever it will stay.
By mutt77, # 21. August 2008, 11:22:43
By wowonder, # 21. August 2008, 12:46:12
right this minute,
But if I do,
I know where to send it.
Send it straight
over to you.
I am not very good, but this is enjoyable to try.
By Captivevet, # 21. August 2008, 13:58:10
By pbuydid, # 21. August 2008, 14:40:06
i wrote your name on the star
but star in the dawn will fade
i wrote your name and send in the breeze
but it will blow afar that i cant keep
so i wrote your name in my heart
in that i know we never be apart
By brokenheartvn, # 21. August 2008, 15:48:46
thank you , for coming and leaving me a praise ^ _ ^
nice to meet you
By brokenheartvn, # 21. August 2008, 15:51:13
By brokenheartvn, # 21. August 2008, 15:53:07
although sometimes those are said simply
i know inside them its depth
of your concern to friends you have always kept
By brokenheartvn, # 21. August 2008, 15:58:16
By mutt77, # 21. August 2008, 15:59:09
being happy is not enough
let's love and make others happy!
its right way for love!
By brokenheartvn, # 21. August 2008, 16:05:32
By Captivevet, # 21. August 2008, 21:15:16
I love the way you look at me,
Your eyes so bright and blue.
I love the way you kiss me,
Your lips so soft and smooth.
I love the way you make me so happy,
And the ways you show you care.
I love the way you say, "I Love You,"
And the way you're always there.
I love the way you touch me,
Always sending chills down my spine.
I love that you are with me,
And glad that you are mine.
By mutt77, # 21. August 2008, 21:33:14
""
5. Sometimes i have a dream
in that clear sky i reach
dancing on silvery moonbeam
freedom is all i need
""
Hachimo
""
5+ And in that sky i met
A place to put my faith
The one dance in moonset
Will keep all things i shared
////////////////////////////
My poor English
But I really like this game, Brokenheart
By hachimo, # 22. August 2008, 00:24:53
i love the way you look at me
as i know my soul does glow with glee
i love the way we kiss
with tight heart strings that nothing else i need
i love the way you give me happiness
your way of caring makes me so blest
i love the way you are always there and here
i love the way you beside me and wipe away my tears
i love the way you touch me, so sweet
as i feel a loving caress of gentle breeze
i love the way you make me fly
and know that you are always mine
i think your words is a song, right?
By brokenheartvn, # 22. August 2008, 15:47:14
By brokenheartvn, # 22. August 2008, 15:48:17
Yours:
And in that sky i met
A place to put my faith
The one dance in moonset
Will keep all things i shared
Mine:
you can reach manything in the sky
keep your faith and make it fly high
as you dance on the moonset
but dont keep everything that makes you upset
^ _ ^thanks again, i hope you will keep your inspiration as long as better here
By brokenheartvn, # 22. August 2008, 15:57:09
By honeyparedes, # 22. August 2008, 20:31:38
it is night in the city.
The beat is insistent,
and there is no pity.
By Captivevet, # 23. August 2008, 03:01:04
You're always in my heart and my mind
I miss the moment we've shared
Sweet memories I wish never end.
By bittersweet9180, # 23. August 2008, 07:22:09
By honeyparedes, # 23. August 2008, 07:26:13
By Captivevet, # 23. August 2008, 12:12:17
By Captivevet, # 23. August 2008, 12:12:48
By brokenheartvn, # 23. August 2008, 16:05:25
i wish you no laying on the heat longer
just coolness and ease with you, together
the beat will become the breeze
and lift you on its gentle feet
By brokenheartvn, # 23. August 2008, 16:10:57
coz you are so dear to my heart and my soul
our memories are those i will always keep
forever stay in me, so sweet and deep
^ _ ^
By brokenheartvn, # 23. August 2008, 16:14:51
After feeling happy
I want you never hurt
And always keep smile
By aromagrass, # 24. August 2008, 03:05:41
from a day in the sun.
I spent the day at a festival,
and actually had some fun!
By Captivevet, # 24. August 2008, 03:57:49
Qua lau ko gap chi .
Moi~ khi gap chi , doc blog cua chi thi` cuoc song lai day` mau` hong` . Em that ko the? tin noi? trong cuoc song' bon chen nay` lai van~ hien huu~ 1 vien ngoc .Ah` ko vien linh chau nhu chi .
Phai noi rang` chi la` 1 co gai'; qua' tuyet voi` .
Nhung~ loi` khen kia that chang du? de? noi' het' em ton sung` chi den muc nao` .
Chi than yeu . Em dang kha' ban ron voi hoc hanh` , bai` vo va` nhung~ lop hoc them . Nam nay lop 11 vay la` cung` sap thi DH roi` .
Nghi~ den ma` ron ca? nguoi` . Bun` qua' .Em dinh thi Ngoai thuong nhung ko biet co' du? luc de? thi ko . Chi biet co gang va` co' gang' .
Chuc chi 1 ngay` vui ve?
By hello_you_2901, # 24. August 2008, 10:20:00